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LLL Season 24
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10 lines
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No Bullshit Allowed
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VERSES DUE TUESDAY 11:59 PST
24 hour EXT must be granted by opponent
BATTLES CLOSE FRIDAY
Idk what you sent but I went 10 @Cookies @miracle
Ya punches fall flat, so what you’re naturally provin son..
Is the end result of ya flips resemble diasick actually doin one
Plus you never had a Court case - you’re an angel, it’s no wonder bitch
If you ever show up on the Docket just means you’re getting drowned under it
Keep talkin fgt, you don’t get a pass & you’ll stay victim
Mouth Off to me again and end up w/ the bottom half of ya face missin
Mir – please give me a better opponent, outlook for this fgt is bleak
Everyone knows “that versus garbage” - is a perfect account of my matchup this week
‘N ya girl says you’re small in the sack – Learn from me ‘n stop the audacity
Before the Exchange I was so Foreign she swore I’m from the Andromeda galaxy
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ZUNTOS VERSE
Keep talkin bout them clips u clappin. I get to smackin, im leavin u dead mayne
You stupid cappin’, when you snap - nothing happens.. you’re Thanos in Endgame
Leave u in the middle of nowhere, run in ya house & kill ya fam in a hurry
It’ll be the snub nose, or let the dog stutter in ur face.. that’s a msg from Courage
Pull up w some real monsters. BOW! Headshot if ur actin’ foul b
Scare tactics; either go beast on u or run ya for a lil’ green like Mike Wazowski
I’m grown bitch. When I take ur family you won’t even know shit
Dagger in ur heart.. I’ll air out ur solar rays ur son like he was my own kid
Merk u & ya whole crew. One false move - best believe I’ll spray y’all
Then anyone in ya circle could get lifted.. I’m performing a seance
Ya punches fall flat, so what you’re naturally provin son..
Is the end result of ya flips resemble diasick actually doin one
Keep talkin fgt, you don’t get a pass & you’ll stay victim
Mouth Off to me again and end up w/ the bottom half of ya face missin
vs
Leave u in the middle of nowhere, run in ya house & kill ya fam in a hurry
It’ll be the snub nose, or let the dog stutter in ur face.. that’s a msg from Courage
Felt zuntos bars kinda fell short as it went on w...and Tics stayed more consistent… not bad from both overall
V- Tic... good shit
Last edited by GrimmReaperZ; November 28th, 2019 at 09:18 AM Reason: didnt put vote
Ya punches fall flat, so what you’re naturally provin son..
Is the end result of ya flips resemble diasick actually doin one
very simple connection but funny/cool tbh, liked it
Plus you never had a Court case - you’re an angel, it’s no wonder bitch
If you ever show up on the Docket just means you’re getting drowned under it
cool
Keep talkin fgt, you don’t get a pass & you’ll stay victim
Mouth Off to me again and end up w/ the bottom half of ya face missin
simple/cool, worded well
Mir – please give me a better opponent, outlook for this fgt is bleak
Everyone knows “that versus garbage” - is a perfect account of my matchup this week
seen versus used but i rly like how its worded and it was solid
‘N ya girl says you’re small in the sack – Learn from me ‘n stop the audacity
Before the Exchange I was so Foreign she swore I’m from the Andromeda galaxy
LMFAO, funny but doesnt hit that hard
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Keep talkin bout them clips u clappin. I get to smackin, im leavin u dead mayne
You stupid cappin’, when you snap - nothing happens.. you’re Thanos in Endgame
cool, i liked it
Leave u in the middle of nowhere, run in ya house & kill ya fam in a hurry
It’ll be the snub nose, or let the dog stutter in ur face.. that’s a msg from Courage
horrible and it doesn't even rhyme, but this was bad either way
Pull up w some real monsters. BOW! Headshot if ur actin’ foul b
Scare tactics; either go beast on u or run ya for a lil’ green like Mike Wazowski
god i hate references like this but i guess it's not terrible
I’m grown bitch. When I take ur family you won’t even know shit
Dagger in ur heart.. I’ll air out ur solar rays ur son like he was my own kid
this wordplay doesn't even work both ways lol, the connection literally doesnt work and the concept is kinda weird to begin with as a punch, ur going to steal his son? lolz.
Merk u & ya whole crew. One false move - best believe I’ll spray y’all
Then anyone in ya circle could get lifted.. I’m performing a seance
very simple but i like it, should have done more shit like this
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Never have seen Tic before today, but he was quite dope. That verse would rank him among some of the best to me and he was very consistent/solid throughout. Zunto surprised me with his first bar and I thought maybe he was going to come with a pretty decent verse but that pretty quickly fell apart and just turned into near retardation when he literally stopped rhyming and his wordplay used a double meaning w/o even having one. He ended up ending the verse pretty reasonable but it was too late to be salvaged vs a near perfect Tic verse unfortunately.
v/ Tic
Tic had a cool verse.. I thought the flip line was a good opener..docket was alright..mouth off was ok.. Little mild tho..the verses bar was cool..finisher was mild.. Overall a nice verse u put together... Zun had thanos which was ok.. Little green was ok i guess.. Raise ur son was ok... Finisher was weak.. Overall this was easy for me to vote for tic.. Zun was outzhined
Vote tic
Diasick lulz...
Docket played and the flip predictable. Worded crisp...
This needed more man. Another tie in woulda made it nice. Still ok, good wording....
Seen this before but worded better....
Foreign was just wack bruv....
Vs
Thanos fire. Wasnt crazy about the wording or delivery style...
U leave him in the middle of no where whats the rush in killing his fam, cmon bro u gotta actually be able to write, that is nonsensical. Who tf is courage. If it ain't super popular like rick and Morty or dbz I wouldnt use obscure references. It was aite tho....
Scare tactics wack....
What in the flying fuck is this. Blue Bayou would be ashamed lmaoooo...
Seayance actually ok....
Overall: disappointing, was hoping tic was gonna be more consistent, like he did just enough and it was barely enough. If zuntos brain wasnt scarred like his fgt fucking face he coulda took this.
V. Tic
I’m grown bitch. When I take ur family you won’t even know shit
Dagger in ur heart.. I’ll air out ur solar rays ur son like he was my own kid
Now I am become death; destroyer of worlds.
4-0 tic
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