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    WK13: CONTENDER MATCH: Fresh (3-1) vs Galactic (2-0) FRESH WINS

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    Re: WK13: CONTENDER MATCH: Fresh (3-1) vs Galactic (2-0)

    check. 10

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    Check

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    Re: WK13: CONTENDER MATCH: Fresh (3-1) vs Galactic (2-0)

    You cool w/ ext? @Fresh Been a busy week.

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    Re: WK13: CONTENDER MATCH: Fresh (3-1) vs Galactic (2-0)

    Quote Originally Posted by Tic View Post
    You cool w/ ext? @Fresh Been a busy week.
    of course

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    Re: WK13: CONTENDER MATCH: Fresh (3-1) vs Galactic (2-0) EXT

    dudes a geek no doubt. on a sunny day he's probably rockin rubber boots
    He got purées in high school, s'why he blends so well with all the other fruits
    you'll never fire up ya sex life with bitches.. it's your status quo, flamer
    So it's clear you'll never be on the receiving end of blow jobs, that's a no brainer
    The only pussy you’ve seen is ya moms and I totally find it odd
    I’m not sure if he so ugly that he gets Nunnery devotes his life to God
    I feel bad for this snob; it’s a tough life with that many flaws
    You’ve had some bad breaks, but they’ll seem light after I’m crackin your jaw
    u’ll never reach vet status w/ punches that don’t follow through
    so when every dismisses don’t question why no one will acknowledge you

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    Re: WK13: CONTENDER MATCH: Fresh (3-1) vs Galactic (2-0)

    Quote Originally Posted by Tic View Post
    You cool w/ ext? @Fresh Been a busy week.
    Due tonight

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    Re: WK13: CONTENDER MATCH: Fresh (3-1) vs Galactic (2-0) EXT

    Posting shortly, my bad for the wait.

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    Re: WK13: CONTENDER MATCH: Fresh (3-1) vs Galactic (2-0)

    Let the record show he’s trash, his career is qualifyin as blown
    In fact this Caterpillar of failure – AKA he’ll never B-fly on his own
    Stupid fuck w/ no Confidence, that's why ya girl opens wide in the sack
    That’s a Contender to get fucked …& even HE thought I was describing this match
    You should get rid of allll evidence of last week, just delete it friend
    That video was so incriminating it could get Trump impeached again
    Sex life in shambles, he gets no Facebook pokes from the clean hoes
    Truth is, if he's playing the field it's on the craps table at his local casino
    No pressure b, think you'll win if you step to me?
    Nautical murder this fgt and dump his corpse in the depths at sea

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    Re: WK13: CONTENDER MATCH: Fresh (3-1) vs Galactic (2-0) VOTE NOW!!

    dudes a geek no doubt. on a sunny day he's probably rockin rubber boots
    He got purées in high school, s'why he blends so well with all the other fruits
    cool, liked it
    you'll never fire up ya sex life with bitches.. it's your status quo, flamer
    So it's clear you'll never be on the receiving end of blow jobs, that's a no brainer
    never seen this so i enjoyed it, wording was ok, concept was good
    The only pussy you’ve seen is ya moms and I totally find it odd
    I’m not sure if he so ugly that he gets Nunnery devotes his life to God
    wordplay was cool but the flip & everything else not so much unfortunately, poorly worded as well, unfortunate part is this could have been cool
    I feel bad for this snob; it’s a tough life with that many flaws
    You’ve had some bad breaks, but they’ll seem light after I’m crackin your jaw
    no sir, very basic/bad
    u’ll never reach vet status w/ punches that don’t follow through
    so when every dismisses don’t question why no one will acknowledge you
    dismiss wordplay is very very played to me and the flip didn't give it that much life but it's not terrible

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    Let the record show he’s trash, his career is qualifyin as blown
    In fact this Caterpillar of failure – AKA he’ll never B-fly on his own
    wordplay is ok but the connection between both is very weak other than the base level one, this concept was very good but the way you used it, not as much
    Stupid fuck w/ no Confidence, that's why ya girl opens wide in the sack
    That’s a Contender to get fucked …& even HE thought I was describing this match
    i understand what you were trying here but this bar was literally you telling him you both thought you were going to fuck him so i absolutely cant even cosign the attempt here even though i see what you were going for
    You should get rid of allll evidence of last week, just delete it friend
    That video was so incriminating it could get Trump impeached again
    he never got impeached so its a bit weird but i see what u attempted, quite basic but ok
    Sex life in shambles, he gets no Facebook pokes from the clean hoes
    Truth is, if he's playing the field it's on the craps table at his local casino
    too basic man
    No pressure b, think you'll win if you step to me?
    Nautical murder this fgt and dump his corpse in the depths at sea
    alright

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    fresh started off pretty solid tbh, like his style and it works very well in text, fell off near the end. tic came a lot weaker than i thought he would for some reason and his concepts were either basic or simply didn't work. not that close in my eyes unfortunately but props 2 both.

    v/ fresh

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    Re: WK13: CONTENDER MATCH: Fresh (3-1) vs Galactic (2-0) VOTE NOW!!

    Best match this week, from what I've skimmed

    Fresh had the pure A's opener and no brainer bar, which were both cool. Bad breaks was decent too. Opener sticking out as BOTB

    Tic started off a little awkward, as I had to reread the wordplays a few times over. Good attempts but the wording didn't jive with me, so they didn't work. Trump bar was weak, playing the field was okay, nautical was good. Unfortunately too little too late

    Mvgt Fresh

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    Re: WK13: CONTENDER MATCH: Fresh (3-1) vs Galactic (2-0)

    dudes a geek no doubt. on a sunny day he's probably rockin rubber boots
    He got purées in high school, s'why he blends so well with all the other fruits
    dope
    you'll never fire up ya sex life with bitches.. it's your status quo, flamer
    So it's clear you'll never be on the receiving end of blow jobs, that's a no brainer
    ehhh okish flip I guess
    The only pussy you’ve seen is ya moms and I totally find it odd
    I’m not sure if he so ugly that he gets Nunnery devotes his life to God
    cool, can't remember seeing the wp
    I feel bad for this snob; it’s a tough life with that many flaws
    You’ve had some bad breaks, but they’ll seem light after I’m crackin your jaw
    nah
    u’ll never reach vet status w/ punches that don’t follow through
    so when every dismisses don’t question why no one will acknowledge you
    not fresh enough for such a played wp.




    Let the record show he’s trash, his career is qualifyin as blown
    In fact this Caterpillar of failure – AKA he’ll never B-fly on his own
    I really like the wp, not crazy about b-fly instead of butterfly. obv it wouldn't work otherwise but there was probably a better flip there. still ok
    Stupid fuck w/ no Confidence, that's why ya girl opens wide in the sack
    That’s a Contender to get fucked …& even HE thought I was describing this match
    not feeling this one
    You should get rid of allll evidence of last week, just delete it friend
    That video was so incriminating it could get Trump impeached again
    eh. should've went a different direction with this concept
    Sex life in shambles, he gets no Facebook pokes from the clean hoes
    Truth is, if he's playing the field it's on the craps table at his local casino
    not a creative enough flip to get past the played concept
    No pressure b, think you'll win if you step to me?
    Nautical murder this fgt and dump his corpse in the depths at sea
    decent


    Fresh started off well, seemed like his last two bars he hit a wall on. Pretty sure Tic hasn't battled for a while before he signed in and that's how his verse came off to me. wording was clean for the most part but the concepts weren't quite there.



    vote Fresh
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    Re: WK13: CONTENDER MATCH: Fresh (3-1) vs Galactic (2-0) VOTE NOW!!

    3-0 fresh

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    Re: WK13: CONTENDER MATCH: Fresh (3-1) vs Galactic (2-0) VOTE NOW!!

    dudes a geek no doubt. on a sunny day he's probably rockin rubber boots
    He got purées in high school, s'why he blends so well with all the other fruits
    ^^^ lol ok

    you'll never fire up ya sex life with bitches.. it's your status quo, flamer
    So it's clear you'll never be on the receiving end of blow jobs, that's a no brainer
    ^^^ eh

    The only pussy you’ve seen is ya moms and I totally find it odd
    I’m not sure if he so ugly that he gets Nunnery devotes his life to God
    ^^^ I like the concept, wording could be better.

    I feel bad for this snob; it’s a tough life with that many flaws
    You’ve had some bad breaks, but they’ll seem light after I’m crackin your jaw
    ^^^ ok

    u’ll never reach vet status w/ punches that don’t follow through
    so when every dismisses don’t question why no one will acknowledge you
    ^^^ iight

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    Let the record show he’s trash, his career is qualifyin as blown
    In fact this Caterpillar of failure – AKA he’ll never B-fly on his own
    ^^^ ehh idk

    Stupid fuck w/ no Confidence, that's why ya girl opens wide in the sack
    That’s a Contender to get fucked …& even HE thought I was describing this match
    ^^^ not feeling

    You should get rid of allll evidence of last week, just delete it friend
    That video was so incriminating it could get Trump impeached again
    ^^^ decent

    Sex life in shambles, he gets no Facebook pokes from the clean hoes
    Truth is, if he's playing the field it's on the craps table at his local casino
    ^^^ ok

    No pressure b, think you'll win if you step to me?
    Nautical murder this fgt and dump his corpse in the depths at sea
    ^^^ nah tic’ll? Bit of a stretch but I’ll let it slide here.

    I’ve seen better from both but I have fresh edging this off consistency.

    v/Fresh

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    Re: WK13: CONTENDER MATCH: Fresh (3-1) vs Galactic (2-0) VOTE NOW!!

    4-0 fresh wins

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