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LLL Season 24
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10 lines
(unless agreed upon by both battlers)
No Bullshit Allowed
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VERSES DUE MONDAY 11:59 PST
24 hour EXT must be granted by opponent
BATTLES CLOSE THURSDAY
@Echelon
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This is my Check @Echelon check in due asap.. Verses due monday
APPEASE THE NIGHT; SEAING BRIGHT LIGHTNING:APPEASING STRIKES!
LEAVE THE NIGHT; if we see 'MIRACLE WITH OPEN ARMS' It's JESUS CHRIST!
I do DAMAGE; STAMPEDE WITH ZEBRAS; LAVISH MATE WITH SAVAGE CHAINS!
I'll chop your cabbage mate; I'll cut this 'MEERKAT' like SIMBA ON A RAMPAGE!
YOUR A SIMPLETON; WITH SIMPLE FRIENDS; FICKLE WHEN?
Stenciled in with pencil sins! I'm taking down this 'MEER MORTAL' like Zeus in the OLYMPIANS!
SOAKED JACKED FOUNTAIN; IT'S THE LION FROM THE OPEN GASHED CLOAKED SACKED OUNCES!
Cloaked in daggars and scimitars! I'm turning 'MEER TO QUEER' FASTER THAN BROKEBACK MOUNTAIN!
I AM PROCEEDING WITH LIGHTNING AND TEETHING: THE LIGHT OF THE EVENING!
THE PLIGHT IS DECEIVING; YOU'LL NEED A MIRACLE TO BEAT ME!
Its NO surprise fairy, that people want you to SHHHHHHH! Like a library
My punches will put ech down for a nappy's gotta realize shits about to get hairy
Ill splatter your brains like abstract art..then break ur bones n injure shit
Imma win quickly.. this loss here is easeL...& even he can picture it
Echelon is ugly af. If you think that pimple face is getting laid then lose faith
Chicks think this kid is so vile he could get sold on the corner as a 8th
Your shit is choppy n whack.. Not to mention he supplies fake hits
And his flow stalls so much people are lining up to take shits
This dude better get spiritual quick. before he catches these fast hands
Ech is in need of a prairie's going down like wildfires in grasslands
Ready for Votes
echelon has kind of an open mic approach to his bars and its weird. the punches you do have aren't harsh or really directed at your opponent. like saying that if miracle has open arms makes him jesus christ isn't really a diss. and you have way too many nameplays in your verses. gotta keep those to 1 or maybee 2. meerkat was your best line and that concept has been done to death on miracle.
miracle had
nappy's was decent
stalls was ok
prairies was ok as well
Miracle didn't drop his best verse but he did what he had to do to take the easy dub.
v/mir
v/Mir.
He won with the first bar. Ech man... remove words, stop the redundancy, add disrespect - you should be okay.
Meer kat could have been nice your set ups aren’t good just useless shit... that’s all I got for sin
Mir
Nappy was cool
Stalls was decent
Prairies was nice
That’s all I liked you didn’t have to do much here verse seemed lazy but mir takes tgis
No wonder it dont have votes. Dude wack af
Nappy is aite but these are too easy unless u do a dbl wp or have a good flip, shits about to get hairy isnt that great of a flip but ok. Hate one letter np's and eisele is forced. Vile and stall got me cringing. For prairie see nappy comments.
V. Frank Mir
Last edited by A. Diction; December 20th, 2019 at 05:11 AM
Now I am become death; destroyer of worlds.
4-0 Mir wins
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