Week 16: CHAMP MATCH: Fresh(C) vs Letterman LET WINS

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LLL Season 24
Regular Season Rules

10 lines
(unless agreed upon by both battlers)

No Bullshit Allowed

MUST CHECK IN BY TUESDAY

VERSES DUE WEDNESDAY 11:59 PST

24 hour EXT must be granted by opponent

BATTLES CLOSE FRIDAY


@Fresh @Letterman

[Letterman]

Ok.

[Fresh]

Check

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@Fresh @Letterman due dates are fixed.. Verses due wednesday

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@Letterman i got fresh verse....

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@Letterman due tonight

[Letterman]

U got an Andy Griffith swag. It makes us wanna split ur mug
& Judging by the way you act like opiate makes sense that you’re getting drug
Ur gang shoulda scent protection, all my goons come to harm
But It’s ironic.. since he didn’t have the right guard, now I got Fresh under arms
If ANYONE calls you top tier, you should expect some laughs
You’re not the worst.. but if we say your penultimate, it’s cuz you’re next to last
Caught him getting in his car.. started blasting til this bitch got fried
& all the plasma in your whip could inspire a whole new season of pimp my ride
You been acting strange. Like BR beat you to a different dimension
It’s funny how you tried to humble Brag, lost, then came back to bitch for attention

[miracle]

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FRESH VERSE:
You're gonna lose again homie

if you pull the race card you'll end up in a river basin
I'll bust your fuckin melanin and it ain't because of your pigmentation

I gotta school money, tryna outrun a .762 when I’m squeezin the chrome

claims to pack heat but my reaction won't have him soundin clever
I'll put a Bulletin his back n' word he's pussy'll follow him around forever
I'm thirsty for a kill. So here's some food for thought: quit rap
sure you bring a lot to the table, but where the fuck my drinks at?
wack ass gonna need defibrillators after im maimin this herb
Your verses repulse us, so after this kill don't expect the same in return
ur girl old as fuck and just an awful sight, it truly is unpleasant
I swear that bitch been harmonize since before music was invented

[JEM.]

U got an Andy Griffith swag. It makes us wanna split ur mug
& Judging by the way you act like opiate makes sense that you’re getting drug
Good start…

Ur gang shoulda scent protection, all my goons come to harm
But It’s ironic.. since he didn’t have the right guard, now I got Fresh under arms
Haha dope.

If ANYONE calls you top tier, you should expect some laughs
You’re not the worst.. but if we say your penultimate, it’s cuz you’re next to last
Haha fire.

Caught him getting in his car.. started blasting til this bitch got fried
& all the plasma in your whip could inspire a whole new season of pimp my ride
okay.

You been acting strange. Like BR beat you to a different dimension
It’s funny how you tried to humble Brag, lost, then came back to bitch for attention
Ok.




if you pull the race card you'll end up in a river basin
I'll bust your fuckin melanin and it ain't because of your pigmentation
Ok.


claims to pack heat but my reaction won't have him soundin clever
I'll put a Bulletin his back n' word he's pussy'll follow him around forever
Good concept… but poorly executed. BTW: He’s = He is… just choppy finish

I'm thirsty for a kill. So here's some food for thought: quit rap
sure you bring a lot to the table, but where the fuck my drinks at?
Haha dope.

wack ass gonna need defibrillators after im maimin this herb
Your verses repulse us, so after this kill don't expect the same in return
Pretty good.

ur girl old as fuck and just an awful sight, it truly is unpleasant
I swear that bitch been harmonize since before music was invented
Eh, not feeling.


I thought Fresh’s drinks at bar was just funny + rude AF… dope bar… but it just wasn’t enough. I think could’ve spent a bit more time proofing.
Letterman did his thing, no OBVIOUS miss and a couple of dope ones.

v/Let

[Fresh]

word he is pussy exactly how it's supposed to be

[Encrypted Data]

Jem’s breakdown is in line with mine so I won’t break down each line again, it would be redundant.

There wasn’t any let up in Letterman’s verse. I respect a good deodorant bar, not an original concept but you landed with it! The penultimate line was strong. Each punch landed with precision here.

Fresh yours has a couple spots that needed to be tightened up for this opponent. That’s what separates the two verses for me. The line about the girl was eh but the following harmonize line was tought! I’m not sleeping on that line. Fresh first two bars got my attention. Slick stuff.

My votes for Letterman.

Good battle.

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The line about the girl was eh but the following harmonize line was tought!

Should read tough not tought.

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Under arms was nice
Next to last cool
Humble brag ok

Vs

Bulletin was ok.. Delivery was little choppy
Bring to the table was a cool concept..didnt pack to hard of a punch but cool idea
I thought repulse was cool
Harmonize was little corney

I think this shit was close af to be real... But imma go with letter i guess... Tough to call....i think if flipped stronger the bring ro the table line could have gave fresh the win..but ....vote LETTERMAN

[Abe East]

U got an Andy Griffith swag. It makes us wanna split ur mug
& Judging by the way you act like opiate makes sense that you’re getting drug
I had to look this up because I'm not 80, but decent
Ur gang shoulda scent protection, all my goons come to harm
But It’s ironic.. since he didn’t have the right guard, now I got Fresh under arms
Dope af concept, wording hurt it a little but it was still good
If ANYONE calls you top tier, you should expect some laughs
You’re not the worst.. but if we say your penultimate, it’s cuz you’re next to last
Awkward and weird. Creative though, I will give you that
Caught him getting in his car.. started blasting til this bitch got fried
& all the plasma in your whip could inspire a whole new season of pimp my ride
Nah
You been acting strange. Like BR beat you to a different dimension
It’s funny how you tried to humble Brag, lost, then came back to bitch for attention
I don't like it

Vs.

if you pull the race card you'll end up in a river basin
I'll bust your fuckin melanin and it ain't because of your pigmentation
I like this
claims to pack heat but my reaction won't have him soundin clever
I'll put a Bulletin his back n' word he's pussy'll follow him around forever
Old wordplay and not done well
I'm thirsty for a kill. So here's some food for thought: quit rap
sure you bring a lot to the table, but where the fuck my drinks at?
Lol. K, good
wack ass gonna need defibrillators after im maimin this herb
Your verses repulse us, so after this kill don't expect the same in return
Ehhh, kind of a stretched idea. Not feeling it
ur girl old as fuck and just an awful sight, it truly is unpleasant
I swear that bitch been harmonize since before music was invented
Not very creative (like bulletin) but your wording was much better in this one

Mvgt Letterman, barely

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4-0 letterman wins & is new champ .. @Kill Spree can u give letter the accomp