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    LLL PLAYOFF RD1: Encrypted vs Plethora PLETH WINS

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    Re: LLL PLAYOFF RD1: Encryted vs Plethora

    Check.

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    Re: LLL PLAYOFF RD1: Encryted vs Plethora

    @plethora check in due tonight

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    Re: LLL PLAYOFF RD1: Encryted vs Plethora

    one thousand to kill data'll have thugs pop the shotty
    put a Gianna niggas head til it look like Kobe daughters body
    winner gets Bayou next rd. but ima squeeze the gat
    fuck a Blue Face Off, u ain't gotta wait a week for that
    anyone can get these hands, jaw and face wired
    nigga Sokoudjou, back to back ko's like that mma fighter
    pull the trigger, this nigga'll take his place in the sky
    one click put Data in a box like standard message rates apply
    miracle predicted dude fold again, homie ain't lied
    but we all knew you'd crash & burn wayyy before Kobe died
    mag dubbed me victor prior to leaving him shredded
    basically gave the W-2 me before all the pieces of Data collected

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    Re: LLL PLAYOFF RD1: Encryted vs Plethora

    You can’t win in the ring. Pleth is a Lazy wrestler, your pin take breaks
    A sober vocal recorder, no you only flow engine that’s an intake case
    Your girl in the line of fire, Michelle Carter for suicide text you author
    Aiming for your family tree, double meaning behind next you daughter
    As I spot her, I seen you champ, made sure her head Blue Bayou
    It’s a miracle, plethora talk on the web lead to new rivals
    Hey pussy you tough. No need for ovary actions
    punch your forehead cause your knot real, Notice me spasing
    My lyrics made a business giving these kids nightmares,monsters ink
    You see Scully face, that mirrors what karma bring
    It’s vicious for those fictitious pictures your descripting
    For money, leave your Wals-green. Get a dose of this prescription I’m giving

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    Re: LLL PLAYOFF RD1: Encrypted vs Plethora OPEN 4 VOTES

    Gianna was dope
    Didnt like blue face off
    Dont know how to pronounce that name
    Data in box was ok
    Crash n Byrne was ok
    W-2 was cool

    Vs

    Didnt like much until the last 2 lines
    Monsters Ink seems like it should have been the punch but good attempt
    Wals green was decent

    Honestly best verse I've seen from data so props to him for stepping up. However his wording needs some tweaking and over reacting wordplay which are done to death need to be scrapped.

    I got pleth with the win

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    Re: LLL PLAYOFF RD1: Encrypted vs Plethora OPEN 4 VOTES

    Plethora: Giannis, Sokoudjou was cool & W2
    Data Msg was enough

    Encrypted Data: Walgreen was eh ok. Scully should have been redone as the wordplay. Over reactions was bad lol
    I didn't enjoy the way you structure your lines.
    Monster Inc aight

    Vote - plethora

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    Re: LLL PLAYOFF RD1: Encrypted vs Plethora OPEN 4 VOTES

    Plethora


    one thousand to kill data'll have thugs pop the shotty
    put a Gianna niggas head til it look like Kobe daughters body
    Damn this would be good but I'm dqing every Kobe bar idc
    winner gets Bayou next rd. but ima squeeze the gat
    fuck a Blue Face Off, u ain't gotta wait a week for that
    I was wit it but I didn't like where you went with the punch
    anyone can get these hands, jaw and face wired
    nigga Sokoudjou, back to back ko's like that mma fighter
    "So-kuu-joe" is how I'd say his name, so I don't get the wp as written.
    pull the trigger, this nigga'll take his place in the sky
    one click put Data in a box like standard message rates apply
    gun bars are meh
    miracle predicted dude fold again, homie ain't lied
    but we all knew you'd crash & burn wayyy before Kobe died
    Nope
    mag dubbed me victor prior to leaving him shredded
    basically gave the W-2 me before all the pieces of Data collected
    Decent wp but sayin 'the mag predicted me over you' is a weak diss conceptually



    Im not fuckin wit Kobe slander.

    The good - The verse flows well, well written

    The bad - I didn't like most of the bars and explained why.

    4/10


    VS

    Encrypted Data


    You can’t win in the ring. Pleth is a Lazy wrestler, your pin take breaks
    A sober vocal recorder, no you only flow engine that’s an intake case
    Your girl in the line of fire, Michelle Carter for suicide text you author
    Aiming for your family tree, double meaning behind next you daughter
    This shit reads like english isn't your first language. Or second. Or third.
    As I spot her, I seen you champ, made sure her head Blue Bayou
    It’s a miracle, plethora talk on the web lead to new rivals
    That's not a diss
    Hey pussy you tough. No need for ovary actions
    punch your forehead cause your knot real, Notice me spasing
    Your best line by far, and yet, the setup is better than the punch
    My lyrics made a business giving these kids nightmares,monsters ink
    You see Scully face, that mirrors what karma bring
    I was wit it until the punch. Ehhhh
    It’s vicious for those fictitious pictures your descripting
    For money, leave your Wals-green. Get a dose of this prescription I’m giving
    "Descripting" lol. Not a diss, again


    You had two total lines that I thought were ok.
    I remember a verse from last week like this. This only makes sense if English truly isn't your first language.
    If that's the case? ...then this is actually not bad, but will never be competitive in this League.
    Either way, I can only say look at how everybody else is writing and write like that.

    2/10


    V Plethora
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    Re: LLL PLAYOFF RD1: Encrypted vs Plethora OPEN 4 VOTES

    Gianna
    Data in a box
    W2

    Vs

    Forehead
    Monsters ink

    Me quoting data's 2 bars was me being generous.u got alot of work to do.. Keep reading over battles here and mod your setups and punches like what u see.. Keep at it..
    Pleth came with plenty enough for the W.... VOTE PLETHORA

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    Re: LLL PLAYOFF RD1: Encrypted vs Plethora OPEN 4 VOTES

    Good battle P. You’ve crushed me with these data flips lol.

    I’ll keep stepping it up. Thanks for the tips.

    My vote would go to Plethora in this battle.

    Close this thread.

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