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    Worst Behaviour

    Worst Behavior

    Came home depressed
    I guess them rumors and lies took care of the rest
    Ain’t nobody can even care less
    Shit… I did it for you too
    Like I’m the only one that remember
    Late nights, projects lights, and how that inhale exhale chronic do
    Oh wait, but it’s December
    Worst behavior
    Cause I can’t even remember
    Moved too much to ever get close
    Gyspy curse, it so easy for most
    But we here peoples and I do get a nod in that toast

    Sucked the venom out a cobra?
    Couldn’t be more pissed
    Too naïve a heart…. That’s why me and big fighting
    Off that black list
    Acura at 5am, made sure to call every police station before I got pissed
    What was you really doing? You was out with that bitch
    Had me so hemmed up my own house I had to ditch
    Before my mom woke up and saw that our car was gone
    So young holding it down don’t you ever forgot it was me that used to make you yawn

    Who got the drop? Who got London regardless my spot?
    Who got infrared beams… who got sold out seats screaming out these dreams

    Nothing but a nightmare - life sometimes is just what it seems
    Came a long while from them triple beam schemes
    Ran off the site not knowing if you right
    But I guess that’s the problem then, always checking for someone else
    Forgetting to check for my self…. more then every night

    “Bitch I am mortified, cause I’m more then high”
    Don’t you ever forget I am the soldier, when them bricks were being shipped the shape of a sole
    But you act like you don’t know though…
    Don’t tell me it was you that was sould

    Face up? Bitch nickel I fold and throw them face down
    WORST BEHAVIOUR… I never been so sick
    Don’t you ever act like this shit was ever over holding a crown
    You super love yourself type dick
    I’m more then high, you selfish righteous ass prick
    Remembering the days before I woke up, remembering respect before the pre nup
    All the times I was singing and dancing in the gym
    Then remembering the times you did it all just to spite him

    I’ll take the sub cause right now I can’t write it better
    Just wait… for when I have to deal with the “you let her”
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    Re: Worst Behaviour

    I really caught the emotion in this, quite a lot of anger, which made it easier to relate to the point of view of the narrator. I felt the vocab and the rhyme scheme could've done with some more complexity, but your brought an off the wall style and an original topic which made this an easy read.

    I'll be keeping an eye out for more of your stuff. Keep posting.

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    Re: Worst Behaviour

    Thank you!!!
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