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Originally Posted by 3viction
@Ryno aka K Punch
Donkey Kong- Its bananas every time that I ride tracks! Dig for gold? He's likely to try that
But when the nine blasts? You'll see Punch underground like a fight in a mine shaft
Last edited by Phalanx; December 27th, 2021 at 05:28 PM Reason: Typo
It’s appalling he thinks he’s fresher, clown’ll have EMTs callin to get em better
U’ll get ‘laid out w/ 2 straps to the chest’ like the medics were haulin u on a stretcher
Phalanx - solid rhyme scheme nice concept and clean wording. Enjoyed this punch
Ryno- good rhyme scheme and flow clean execution on the punch too
Very close battle with two similar style punch lines I think I preferred phalanx’s concept slightly more but a very enjoyable battle lads
V/phalanx
Both had good bars I’ve seen the 2 straps stretcher scheme before but this was executed better. I felt Phals nameplay flip was more creative. Good battle here props but I gotta vote Phal in this one.
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Both used a similar style of punch but I liked the strap comparison better than the punch underground comparison
V/ ryno
This was a pretty good battle. I THOUGHT RYNO BEAT PHALANX..HEHEHE..
V/ RYNO
Since no one wants to say it I'll say it.. This was a terrible champ battle. I mean punch underground like a fight in a mine shaft?? Really? Lol I did like the nine blasts/underground connection but the ending was bad. And 2 straps to the chest felt like a simple concept from a while back so that wasn't much better. By default I vote- Ryno
i gotta go with Phalanx on this ... Ryno's wording didnt do it for me.. close match though
vote-Phalanx
aka Sorrow: the Broken Wing
It's kinda a weird Champ match but since I have to pick which one I personally felt more, MVGT Phalanx. I thought the concept was a little better and Ryno's set up seem like it spoke more to an audience but the next line to Phalanx directly tells me the wording didn't have a concise direction. Usually it's better if both lines are either direct or indirect so that kinda mix of the two usually works better onstage where you can look at the audience and then look at him or something. Since it's just text I got Phalanx in an otherwise very evenly matched fight here.
man I think I got Ryno here because he just felt like he edged it for me with the connect... both were pretty cool but I was just feelin' Ryno more this round. good punches!
vote Ryno
4-3 phal let’s get more votes
LOL.. phalanx bar was overly complex.. dude took a huge risk there.. but everything tied in.. I didnt like it at first due having too much going on but after a re-read some days later it just landed. Ryno was also cool but nothing special, pretty sure I have seen that concept before. I liked the wording though. I got phalanx here with creativity though. good shit guys
Vote ryno
Slightly better imo
Phalanx wins 5-4
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