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    Seadog's Tale Pt.2

    "Pennyford Blue"


    The seven seas never seem short of a tale.
    “Let her free!” the vessel leaves, adorning its sails.
    Setting forth in a gale against the black of the night
    as intrepid waters prevail, they’re carried from sight.
    A flagon in right hand, hook in the left,
    the captain arrives with rum on his breath.
    He stumbles on deck of the Pennyford Blue
    for a public address to his cretinous crew.
    “To treasure and booty,” came the guttural roar
    “If you pledge me your duty, there’s enough for us all!”
    The others onboard then clapped as they yelled
    In sudden applause for the man at the helm.
    Captain LeVell was a porthole of a man
    But could look after himself were the moment to pass.
    He’d disposed of his hand when at odds to be free,
    as Redbeard showed him the plank and he dropped to the sea.
    Watching it bleed as he gnawed to find an escape,
    - a true seadog with the teeth for a fight, as we say!
    Some pirates had claimed he was done and rejoiced
    with surprise on the faces of landlubbers ahoy
    When they discovered him coiled up one night on the beach
    discoloured but buoyed, like them there devices at sea.
    The tide doesn’t sleep, though it often relents,
    and neither would he as he plotted revenge.
    He wanted them dead, reduced to a pulp,
    by an ensemble of men with proven results.
    A crew of old salts, all colours and creeds,
    grouped with hopefuls then took to the sea.
    Looking to seek vengeance on Redbeard and his men
    cut ‘em to pieces o’ eight and leave ‘em for dead!
    Which leads to our quest for Redbeard and his gold
    to season adventurers, these seas are their home.
    Every beach, every cove, every opening and passage
    every secret it holds is known to the captain.
    And so the advantage was his in pursuit
    They row with abandon as he considers their move.
    The ship and its crew adjusting the bow
    As LeVell instantly knew where to look for his foe!
    He took to his scope, lookin’ east as the crow flies,
    Instructin’ his covey to what he’d seen with his own eyes.
    Their belief in the old timer proved a trusted source
    As the creeped up its lone side and then jumped aboard!
    A rush of swords soared through the breeze
    as cut-throat corsairs fall to the sea.
    They brawl under siege, with both sides losin’ men,
    ‘til Redbeard’s brought to his knees in a fight to the death!
    LeVell had eyes of resentment, cold as the sea,
    as it was time to avenge his only defeat.
    The very moment he reached for the sheath on his cutlass
    he felt a blow that would see him bleed from his stomach.
    The greedy curmudgeon had waited alone
    to make sure his leader was bludgeoned ‘fore he made away with the gold!
    There’s no place for heroes in this grey, timeless abyss
    but that’s the way that it blows - double-crossed like the flag waved high from the ship...

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    Re: Seadog's Tale Pt.2

    Oh right, so you’re just pretending to be me now and biting my shit?

    This is lame.

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    2014 and my writing better than your own in 2023. NC wasn’t even where I posted this first either, I think I wrote it for the GSL at Rap-Royalty. 10 years old and you still can’t compete with it.

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    Re: Seadog's Tale Pt.2

    @Baron Mynd
    I’ll be honest. I’m a bit confused by the whole situation.
    Like I knew for sure that was your writing in the beginning. Like verbatim.
    Is sinacog really playing with fire this much on plagiarism. ???
    Is the guy. Fucking real. Or not.

    Lars why did his pic tauntingly change to your badger dick when I ripped his new verse that was too good for him to have written???

    I’m not saying you’re him too. And spamming using his ID also. That would just be too much for one man. ‘Specially with a family and a job.

    Little stumped here Lars, but frankly I don’t care if enuff to ever find out. Perhaps the vagueness helps with “writing aura” when it come to Echelon.

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    Re: Seadog's Tale Pt.2

    I’m 100% not Sinacog.

    He’s gone by a few names, AJ the Menace, Age, Sinacog… whatever. I saw his avatar change too just before seeing he posted this and changed the title.

    This is my shit. He bit me.

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    Ill bite yo motherfuck'n style. . and make it fresher

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    Re: Seadog's Tale Pt.2

    Horsemen -

    Horsemen of light conquering plight in empyrean skies
    I am the night; the night envelopes white in the heart skies
    I've killed many devils and demons; heard them screaming in beseeching
    The intriguing seaing I heard from a rhetoric tongue; was the devil himself
    I killed for seldom sean; the serene seas are serene byzantine
    I killed dark animals in thoughts of gleaming light swords
    I am a serene majestic mystic man with serene plans in hand
    The world will know of my reign; the horsemen's reign of gleaming light
    I am the horsemen of light; the horsemen of white
    I am a horsemen of light; with gleaming brightness
    I killed thousands of devils and demons; gleaming white swords
    I came from heaven in a chariot of light; with swords of light
    I am the tongue of a serpent; the tongue of a serpent
    I have a purpose to unleash my power through wrath and rage
    I killed thousands in battle; with a blaring sword of light
    I am a gleaming horsemen of light; on a chariot of light
    I am a maker of heaven; the maker of destiny
    I am a maker of light; the maker of brightness
    I am a horsemen of light; the white brightness of light
    I am a source of light; the source of brightness
    I killed thousands of devils and demons with a blaring sword of light
    I killed millions of devils and demons with a blaring sword of light
    I am a horsemen of light; with fury and rage
    I killed zillions of devils and demons; with a blaring sword of light
    I am a maker of heaven; a maker of destiny
    I am a destined king; with serene gleaming rings
    I am a horsemen of light; a horsemen of fury
    I have the rage of eight thousand seas with furious' glory
    I am a destined king; I am a destined king of gleaming rings
    I killed eons of devils and demons with a blaring sword of light
    I am a maker of destiny; a maker of fate
    I bathed with eight thousand serpents in a destiny lake
    I am profound gluttonous punishment from the walls of a succubus
    I am a maker of destiny; the maker of the future
    I am planet destiny; the owls of scorn
    I am a maker of heaven; with ravenous horns
    I clawed through one thousand devils and demons
    I clawed thought a million devils and demons
    I was sent from heaven to hell; with a blaring sword of light
    I was sent from heaven to hell; with a blaring sword of light
    I am a maker of destiny; the maker of heaven
    I killed one thousand serpents in a lake of fire
    I am a thousand serpents of wisdom and intelligence
    I plummeted from heaven; to kill hellish' sin
    I am a maker of destiny; the maker of heaven
    I am the maker of destiny; the maker of fate
    I killed a jezebel and sphinx with a sword of light
    I killed one thousand horsemen in a fight
    I

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