HiroPlus vs Lay Doubt (LAY WINS 5-0)

[Soule]

Walk into the playground and here comes lay doubt/
Said an hour, I wanna lay it down but he wants to wait it out//
I know you don’t know my face or my name but hey I’m made of clout/
So don’t be surprised when they all raise their hands because I amaze the crowd//
I’m not even gonna research you, I’m just flipping your name/
Not worried cuz I ain’t never had no doubt in this game//
Came in all sneaky but homie you’re facing a mogul/
Lay down fool, we’re not even ‘laying’ the vocals//
Thanks for replying homie.. I’m assuming he’s British/
Dropped my verse because his reply took too many minutes//
Introduced myself like wassup, but you ain’t see the hearse brought/
Spit a verse and caught my fucking first bod of the merk squad//
Really tho thanks for replying to my post/
Because somebody had to be the first and you were blind to the ghost//
Your welcome was warm! But now these vocals have warned/
Not to play with fire when you don’t know how bad it’s gon burn//

Vs

This scrubby guy is snuffed & merked, call me Wyatt fuckin’ Earp
It ain’t hoops advanced stats when I leave Plus minused from this earth
I’m just fryin’ up this twerp, the raggedy fuck ain’t actually tough
Nothing you write is super, Hiro, everyone just Marvels at how badly you suck
Faggoty cunt, fork over all your yayo or I’ll grab the snub n start shootin’
When I say his life will cost Plus drugs, it ain’t a plug from Mark Cuban
Are you retarded or stupid? Rook against a legend, I’m Lay to the Doubt
And it’s literally Veteran’s Day, I’m shocked the site let YOU make an account
I’m taking ya scalp, he picked the wrong one cuz I’ll bury him so bad
Not all Hiro’s wear capes, well now this sorry ass one is wearing a toe tag

Let's go!

[Soule]

Walk into the playground and here comes lay doubt/
Said an hour, I wanna lay it down but he wants to wait it out//
not a punch.
I know you don’t know my face or my name but hey I’m made of clout/
So don’t be surprised when they all raise their hands because I amaze the crowd//
not a punch
I’m not even gonna research you, I’m just flipping your name/
Not worried cuz I ain’t never had no doubt in this game//
not a punch
Came in all sneaky but homie you’re facing a mogul/
Lay down fool, we’re not even ‘laying’ the vocals//
meh
Thanks for replying homie.. I’m assuming he’s British/
Dropped my verse because his reply took too many minutes//
he's not British
Introduced myself like wassup, but you ain’t see the hearse brought/
Spit a verse and caught my fucking first bod of the merk squad//
starting to get better
Really tho thanks for replying to my post/
Because somebody had to be the first and you were blind to the ghost//
no
Your welcome was warm! But now these vocals have warned/
Not to play with fire when you don’t know how bad it’s gon burn//
no

So I'll give feedback. Though I'm 100% convinced you're an alias and most likely Zunto trolling. But in the slightest chance you're not. Here you go. You need to come up with concepts that are more creative and directed towards your opponent. I'd recommend reading LLL or 1-2 punch battles because that's the best way you're going to learn. Better yet. Read battles from the hall of fame section. Don't bite or recycle what you see definitely get an idea of what a punch should look like.

In the chance that you are an alias trolling, grow up.

Vs

I’m just fryin’ up this twerp, the raggedy fuck ain’t actually tough
Nothing you write is super, Hiro, everyone just Marvels at how badly you suck
nice
Are you retarded or stupid? Rook against a legend, I’m Lay to the Doubt
And it’s literally Veteran’s Day, I’m shocked the site let YOU make an account
lol not a great punch but kinda funny
I’m taking ya scalp, he picked the wrong one cuz I’ll bury him so bad
Not all Hiro’s wear capes, well now this sorry ass one is wearing a toe tag
okay

You didn't have to do much here and you had a couple solid hits. Either you're battling someone genuinely new or your battling a troll. Either way you did what you needed to win. Vote lay.

[daveDILLY]

pretty one sided
1st guy didnt really have concepts or punchs
2nd guy you can tell has done this b4
he had the stronger everything
1st guy needs to work on being more creative
i wouldnt mine readin more stuff from 2nd guy
vote LD

[Baron Mynd]

I don’t want to be too harsh on Hiro here because he’s clearly got the idea of multies and whatnot but is relatively new to text battles as he seemed to just keystyle something together than rhymed and posted. Yes, conceptually, and even wording wise Lay Doubt got this one pretty comfortably but hey - it’s a new guy around these parts. Good on him for stopping by and dropping quick. Let’s hope he sticks around and improves.

Vote - Lay Doubt

[miracle]

Laydoubt got this. Hiro needs to work on creating a punch and being more direct with his attacks
Sign up for the battle league… Multics we’re there along with the flow.. just need punches vote laydoubt

[Fresh]

nothing

vs

I’m just fryin’ up this twerp, the raggedy fuck ain’t actually tough
Nothing you write is super, Hiro, everyone just Marvels at how badly you suck

Layd had the better misses too.

v/ Lay Doubt.

[Art.]

I’m just fryin’ up this twerp, the raggedy fuck ain’t actually tough
Nothing you write is super, Hiro, everyone just Marvels at how badly you suck

Vs

Hiro not really knowing the style yet .. I don’t think he’s active tbh so I won’t break it down completley

Vote lay better verse

[miracle]

LAYDOUBT WINS 5-0 KO