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Thread: WK03 HOF Battle: Contendership Match (1-1) The Real Spit vs. (1-0) Fresh (Fresh Wins)

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    WK03 HOF Battle: Contendership Match (1-1) The Real Spit vs. (1-0) Fresh (Fresh Wins)

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    Re: WK03: Contendership Match (1-1) The Real Spit vs. (1-0) Fresh

    Check. 12? I'm down for whatever if you drop first

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    Re: WK03: Contendership Match (1-1) The Real Spit vs. (1-0) Fresh

    We can go for hof if you wanna drop 30

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    Re: WK03: Contendership Match (1-1) The Real Spit vs. (1-0) Fresh

    30 it is.

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    Re: WK03 HOF Battle: Contendership Match (1-1) The Real Spit vs. (1-0) Fresh

    30 sent to @Wuxia @$pitacular

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    Re: WK03 HOF Battle: Contendership Match (1-1) The Real Spit vs. (1-0) Fresh

    Fresh is good to go. He sent 30 in.

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    Re: WK03 HOF Battle: Contendership Match (1-1) The Real Spit vs. (1-0) Fresh

    Quote Originally Posted by $pitacular View Post
    Update 17 years later.
    Quote Originally Posted by Soule View Post
    When does she turn 18, and do you wanna be my father in law?
    Quote Originally Posted by $pitacular View Post
    In May, and I already think of you as one of my sons tbf
    I won’t turn a blind eye, it's depraved and fuckin odd to me
    She’s gonna have more Soul in her than the Stevie Wonder discography
    She won’t be treated like royalty, and probably reside in a garage
    You’ll watch your Princess Diana lack of fathership’ll be linked as the cause
    He’ll catch a combo, I have no fear of this guy
    If his fists are bawled, it’s to wipe the tears from his eyes
    We’re built different, if we ever meet, I’ll make sure it’s the end
    spit’ll Frequency In Danger… and then never be heard from again
    I’m out for the kill, 1st I’ll obliterate your ugly face
    If u end up a quadriplegic, consider it a lucky break
    Throwin hands ain’t something your stupid ass should try
    You’re so fucking thin-skinned, it’s proof you have no spine
    You’ll always be known as a bitch; never given your due
    Sure, you can clean my clock… and the rest of the living room too
    Whether with spits or with fists, you’re unfit and shoddy
    If I drop the gloves, the backdrop is your unconscious body


    Quote Originally Posted by $pitacular View Post
    I once lost a fucking LLL season because, somehow, I nearly word for worded one of my boys (Meters) concepts/punches.
    The origin of the copy pasta, I should slap you for being a bitch
    I wish I could say your chances are slender, man... but they don’t even exist
    He has always been garbage.. and wack at battling as well
    If he makes a complete 180, it’s from back to back L’s
    You made Lenox look bad, it was bizarre and dense, really
    We all know you ghostwrote… the last 4 bars against dilly
    You’re old as fuck and bland as shit, totally
    It’s funny how you’ve always been dialed down + your era is that of the rotary
    I’m dropping you here, back to workin' your way through the worst
    If you wanna invade myspace again? You’ll have to get past Dave Dilly first
    Paychecks are music to my ears, life is so much better with no urgency
    You Singapore man song… we’d have to measure your networth in that currency
    So unimportant, a murder where they’d forget all the evidence
    You’ll only see him on the front page if I $pit on the president

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    Re: WK03 HOF Battle: Contendership Match (1-1) The Real Spit vs. (1-0) Fresh

    this the battle of the week, Fresh & $pit are vote bringers
    ur the showpiece, I'm just here snapping ur white flag & both fingers
    time for an ass whipping. bitch you're never felt, pipe down
    I won't hand over the title but you can get the belt right now
    you don't respect the Golden age. I'm sick of you damn brats
    dog who cares how old I am, ur gonna be 86 from the champ match
    we're not 'migos. might end up in an OM, watch me unveil carnage
    everyone's excited for a Fresh verse. to offset ur stale garbage
    like Barcotic, you come from the land of fags. I always knew so.
    we joke Canadian's are effeminate pussies. with you it's Trudeau.
    I'm from the USA, and trust me dog it matters to whores
    won't compare bacon, but ur girl said my hog is fatter than yours
    terrorize your love life. showed ur girl you're a coward, soft.
    now she never sleeper cell, blowing up my phone til hers powers off
    the fuck we even matched up? I'm hot, ur writing stay shit.
    in fact I'm the top seed ur girl wanna fertilize her eggs with
    Fresh ain't thuggin, you do crime cuz getting locked up is your passion
    you love it. incels the only time you ever get any action
    get stomped. every time you drop, it gets worse & missing heat
    can't tell if ur going toe to toe or keying verses with your feet
    it's a sprint for the top. but you make it hard to strive for.
    ur not even in the race, just some pathetic lower life form
    bitch you'll get eaten alive, ur scared when I brandish the mac.
    I'm bloodthirsty & all this gourmet cause a panic attack
    ur name's ironic. cuz Fresh breath something you've never known
    all you ever do is keep mentos curling by giving dome
    no need to share ya leftist views. bitch soon to be deceased
    everyone knows ur anti-guns when you hit the gym in sleeveless tees
    never won a title in ur life. the problem's bigger than simply rust
    if you EVER champ back to back seasons, you'll be watching Disney Plus


    good. night.

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    Re: WK03 HOF Battle: Contendership Match (1-1) The Real Spit vs. (1-0) Fresh

    Quote Originally Posted by Wuxia View Post
    I won’t turn a blind eye, it's depraved and fuckin odd to me
    She’s gonna have more Soul in her than the Stevie Wonder discography
    Lmfao dope personal, maybe coulda flipped it a lil diff but this was fire
    She won’t be treated like royalty, and probably reside in a garage
    You’ll watch your Princess Diana lack of fathership’ll be linked as the cause
    This was heat
    He’ll catch a combo, I have no fear of this guy
    If his fists are bawled, it’s to wipe the tears from his eyes
    This was kind of basic for me. Good wording tho
    We’re built different, if we ever meet, I’ll make sure it’s the end
    spit’ll Frequency In Danger… and then never be heard from again
    Nice wp.
    I’m out for the kill, 1st I’ll obliterate your ugly face
    If u end up a quadriplegic, consider it a lucky break
    Not sure if this is played or not, maybe it is? Idk if it is or isn’t so this was really good to me
    Throwin hands ain’t something your stupid ass should try
    You’re so fucking thin-skinned, it’s proof you have no spine
    Nahh
    You’ll always be known as a bitch; never given your due
    Sure, you can clean my clock… and the rest of the living room too
    Eh not feeling
    Whether with spits or with fists, you’re unfit and shoddy
    If I drop the gloves, the backdrop is your unconscious body
    Ok nice




    The origin of the copy pasta, I should slap you for being a bitch
    I wish I could say your chances are slender, man... but they don’t even exist
    This was ok. Feel like u coulda worded it to be harsher. Slender man copy pasta was cool personal
    He has always been garbage.. and wack at battling as well
    If he makes a complete 180, it’s from back to back L’s
    Not a fan, I know what u we’re going for tho just didn’t hit hard
    You made Lenox look bad, it was bizarre and dense, really
    We all know you ghostwrote… the last 4 bars against dilly
    Lmfaoooooooo. Fuck off faggot
    You’re old as fuck and bland as shit, totally
    It’s funny how you’ve always been dialed down + your era is that of the rotary
    Nice
    I’m dropping you here, back to workin' your way through the worst
    If you wanna invade myspace again? You’ll have to get past Dave Dilly first
    Haaaaaaa, nice
    Paychecks are music to my ears, life is so much better with no urgency
    You Singapore man song… we’d have to measure your networth in that currency
    Decent. Really dug the wp
    So unimportant, a murder where they’d forget all the evidence
    You’ll only see him on the front page if I $pit on the president
    Eh

    vs

    this the battle of the week, Fresh & $pit are vote bringers
    ur the showpiece, I'm just here snapping ur white flag & both fingers
    Cool opener. Was hoping to see a harsh personal
    time for an ass whipping. bitch you're never felt, pipe down
    I won't hand over the title but you can get the belt right now
    This is pretty gay
    you don't respect the Golden age. I'm sick of you damn brats
    dog who cares how old I am, ur gonna be 86 from the champ match
    Decent wp with the record
    we're not 'migos. might end up in an OM, watch me unveil carnage
    everyone's excited for a Fresh verse. to offset ur stale garbage
    Migos wp in 2023? Horrible
    like Barcotic, you come from the land of fags. I always knew so.
    we joke Canadian's are effeminate pussies. with you it's Trudeau.
    I haven’t seen Justin Trudeau wp yet, this was cool
    I'm from the USA, and trust me dog it matters to whores
    won't compare bacon, but ur girl said my hog is fatter than yours
    Lmao
    terrorize your love life. showed ur girl you're a coward, soft.
    now she never sleeper cell, blowing up my phone til hers powers off
    Dope
    the fuck we even matched up? I'm hot, ur writing stay shit.
    in fact I'm the top seed ur girl wanna fertilize her eggs with
    Eh
    Fresh ain't thuggin, you do crime cuz getting locked up is your passion
    you love it. incels the only time you ever get any action
    Fuck no lmao
    get stomped. every time you drop, it gets worse & missing heat
    can't tell if ur going toe to toe or keying verses with your feet
    No
    it's a sprint for the top. but you make it hard to strive for.
    ur not even in the race, just some pathetic lower life form
    You’re starting to fall off with very basic concepts
    bitch you'll get eaten alive, ur scared when I brandish the mac.
    I'm bloodthirsty & all this gourmet cause a panic attack
    I’ve seen gourmet a few times before but this was still cool
    ur name's ironic. cuz Fresh breath something you've never known
    all you ever do is keep mentos curling by giving dome
    Nope…
    no need to share ya leftist views. bitch soon to be deceased
    everyone knows ur anti-guns when you hit the gym in sleeveless tees
    LMFAOO THIS UR LOTB TALK THAT SHIT
    never won a title in ur life. the problem's bigger than simply rust
    if you EVER champ back to back seasons, you'll be watching Disney Plus
    No

    Cool 30 line here. Honestly one of the best fresh verses hes ever written and his first 2 bars were crazy. Really glad to see this verse was packed heavy with personals and for a good part of your verse they were executed well. A few misses here that were clearly not as good as your hits and haymakers that I think maybe u could have scrapped and started over with some new concepts but hey. I think your verse was killer. $pit started off nice with an indirect punch but it was slick. Then his verse started to get pretty plagued with horrible wp and very dated concepts. That migos line was just bad man. That title/belt wp was just gay. You’re gonna spank fresh with ur belt bro? Nice one.. lol. I thought his verse needed more personals like the gym bar… that shit was hilarious and fire. Overall pretty good battle. I thought fresh won this comfortably tho.

    v/ Fresh

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    Re: WK03 HOF Battle: Contendership Match (1-1) The Real Spit vs. (1-0) Fresh

    I won’t turn a blind eye, it's depraved and fuckin odd to me
    She’s gonna have more Soul in her than the Stevie Wonder discography
    I liked this
    She won’t be treated like royalty, and probably reside in a garage
    You’ll watch your Princess Diana lack of fathership’ll be linked as the cause
    I don't live in a garage, sir.
    He’ll catch a combo, I have no fear of this guy
    If his fists are bawled, it’s to wipe the tears from his eyes
    concept is cool but wording was way too simple
    We’re built different, if we ever meet, I’ll make sure it’s the end
    spit’ll Frequency In Danger… and then never be heard from again
    solid, still a little too simple but I dig the wordplay
    I’m out for the kill, 1st I’ll obliterate your ugly face
    If u end up a quadriplegic, consider it a lucky break
    played af
    Throwin hands ain’t something your stupid ass should try
    You’re so fucking thin-skinned, it’s proof you have no spine
    also played
    You’ll always be known as a bitch; never given your due
    Sure, you can clean my clock… and the rest of the living room too
    smooth but a light jab
    Whether with spits or with fists, you’re unfit and shoddy
    If I drop the gloves, the backdrop is your unconscious body
    solid
    The origin of the copy pasta, I should slap you for being a bitch
    I wish I could say your chances are slender, man... but they don’t even exist
    meh
    He has always been garbage.. and wack at battling as well
    If he makes a complete 180, it’s from back to back L’s
    okay
    You made Lenox look bad, it was bizarre and dense, really
    We all know you ghostwrote… the last 4 bars against dilly
    lol
    You’re old as fuck and bland as shit, totally
    It’s funny how you’ve always been dialed down + your era is that of the rotary
    nice
    I’m dropping you here, back to workin' your way through the worst
    If you wanna invade myspace again? You’ll have to get past Dave Dilly first
    okay
    Paychecks are music to my ears, life is so much better with no urgency
    You Singapore man song… we’d have to measure your networth in that currency
    like the play
    So unimportant, a murder where they’d forget all the evidence
    You’ll only see him on the front page if I $pit on the president
    nice closer

    Fresh, I feel like you started a little soft in that first half but then got better after the midway mark. Part of me thinks you felt you could take this without trying the entire time and just used filler lines until you felt it was time to rock n roll. Really liked the closer, sing a poor song,rotary, 4 bars against dilly, and the opening bar. Solid stuff man.

    this the battle of the week, Fresh & $pit are vote bringers
    ur the showpiece, I'm just here snapping ur white flag & both fingers
    hmm I like the concept but wording could be stronger
    time for an ass whipping. bitch you're never felt, pipe down
    I won't hand over the title but you can get the belt right now
    think by now the whole "get the belt/ass whip" concept is played
    you don't respect the Golden age. I'm sick of you damn brats
    dog who cares how old I am, ur gonna be 86 from the champ match
    86'd/trespassed for those who don't understand. This was cool
    we're not 'migos. might end up in an OM, watch me unveil carnage
    everyone's excited for a Fresh verse. to offset ur stale garbage
    cliche concept but I liked the way it was worded
    like Barcotic, you come from the land of fags. I always knew so.
    we joke Canadian's are effeminate pussies. with you it's Trudeau.
    liked this a lot
    I'm from the USA, and trust me dog it matters to whores
    won't compare bacon, but ur girl said my hog is fatter than yours
    cool
    terrorize your love life. showed ur girl you're a coward, soft.
    now she never sleeper cell, blowing up my phone til hers powers off
    nice
    the fuck we even matched up? I'm hot, ur writing stay shit.
    in fact I'm the top seed ur girl wanna fertilize her eggs with
    damn lol
    Fresh ain't thuggin, you do crime cuz getting locked up is your passion
    you love it. incels the only time you ever get any action
    like the play
    get stomped. every time you drop, it gets worse & missing heat
    can't tell if ur going toe to toe or keying verses with your feet
    cool
    it's a sprint for the top. but you make it hard to strive for.
    ur not even in the race, just some pathetic lower life form
    feel like it could've been harder
    bitch you'll get eaten alive, ur scared when I brandish the mac.
    I'm bloodthirsty & all this gourmet cause a panic attack
    gore may, nice
    ur name's ironic. cuz Fresh breath something you've never known
    all you ever do is keep mentos curling by giving dome
    men toes, nice
    no need to share ya leftist views. bitch soon to be deceased
    everyone knows ur anti-guns when you hit the gym in sleeveless tees
    lol
    never won a title in ur life. the problem's bigger than simply rust
    if you EVER champ back to back seasons, you'll be watching Disney Plus
    I've never seen a Disney punch play but this might've been done with Netflix before, funny jab either way

    Spit, this was dope man. A couple misses here and there but definitely swinging for the fences. Too many bars for me to quote but damn at the anti gun, top seed, Trudeau bars. Any of those could've been bar of the battle.

    Overall, it was a good battle. Don't think it's hall of fame worthy personally. Too many misses on both sides for that, but I feel like Spit remained the most consistent while Fresh feels like he threw that first half. Vote Spit.

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    Re: WK03 HOF Battle: Contendership Match (1-1) The Real Spit vs. (1-0) Fresh (OPEN FOR VOTES)

    Fresh had
    Soul in her was cool… princess cool.. I liked bawled but thought it could of hit harder if flipped differently..frequency was a good wordplay punch was little light tho..clean clock was ok at best..slender man was ok..Dave silly alright…rotary was ok… started off strong then just got ok…. Good verse, nothing crazy.. consistent jabs..
    Spit had 86 was alright.. trudeau ….sleeper cell was tough.. top seed was mild, race was cool, not to hard but ok idea..gourmet was cool haven’t seen that..anti guns was tough

    This battle is close man…Spit had a few big misses.. migos.. toes to toes was corny af.. incel meh mentos was corny again.. but I do think he had a few stronger bars… overall I gotta give it to fresh tho.. spit had a few big swings but fresh had a consist jab going

    Vote fresh

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    Re: WK03 HOF Battle: Contendership Match (1-1) The Real Spit vs. (1-0) Fresh (OPEN FOR VOTES)

    Since this is going for the HOF il give ya a full breakdown.


    I won’t turn a blind eye, it's depraved and fuckin odd to me
    She’s gonna have more Soul in her than the Stevie Wonder discography
    cool concept/ word play lighter punch.
    She won’t be treated like royalty, and probably reside in a garage
    You’ll watch your Princess Diana lack of fathership’ll be linked as the cause
    cool iffy word play but i can get there.
    He’ll catch a combo, I have no fear of this guy
    If his fists are bawled, it’s to wipe the tears from his eyes
    bit basic
    We’re built different, if we ever meet, I’ll make sure it’s the end
    spit’ll Frequency In Danger… and then never be heard from again
    eh
    I’m out for the kill, 1st I’ll obliterate your ugly face
    If u end up a quadriplegic, consider it a lucky break
    cool
    Throwin hands ain’t something your stupid ass should try
    You’re so fucking thin-skinned, it’s proof you have no spine
    nope
    You’ll always be known as a bitch; never given your due
    Sure, you can clean my clock… and the rest of the living room too
    lol this was funny but idk about the hit though
    Whether with spits or with fists, you’re unfit and shoddy
    If I drop the gloves, the backdrop is your unconscious body
    didnt like this

    The origin of the copy pasta, I should slap you for being a bitch
    I wish I could say your chances are slender, man... but they don’t even exist
    ill come back to this
    He has always been garbage.. and wack at battling as well
    If he makes a complete 180, it’s from back to back L’s
    this was too simple, felt like there should have been more too it but im getting a theme to ur bars so far.
    You made Lenox look bad, it was bizarre and dense, really
    We all know you ghostwrote… the last 4 bars against dilly
    This was dope
    You’re old as fuck and bland as shit, totally
    It’s funny how you’ve always been dialed down + your era is that of the rotary
    ok
    I’m dropping you here, back to workin' your way through the worst
    If you wanna invade myspace again? You’ll have to get past Dave Dilly first
    this was funny, just didnt like how close it was to the last dilly name drop
    Paychecks are music to my ears, life is so much better with no urgency
    You Singapore man song… we’d have to measure your networth in that currency
    cool
    So unimportant, a murder where they’d forget all the evidence
    You’ll only see him on the front page if I $pit on the president
    worded iffy. cool idea.


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    this the battle of the week, Fresh & $pit are vote bringers
    ur the showpiece, I'm just here snapping ur white flag & both fingers
    didnt like this
    time for an ass whipping. bitch you're never felt, pipe down
    I won't hand over the title but you can get the belt right now
    damn slow start i feelt like title belt flips are a bit old
    you don't respect the Golden age. I'm sick of you damn brats
    dog who cares how old I am, ur gonna be 86 from the champ match
    this was okish
    we're not 'migos. might end up in an OM, watch me unveil carnage
    everyone's excited for a Fresh verse. to offset ur stale garbage
    not for me bud , liked the idea though
    like Barcotic, you come from the land of fags. I always knew so.
    we joke Canadian's are effeminate pussies. with you it's Trudeau.
    yup this is dope
    I'm from the USA, and trust me dog it matters to whores
    won't compare bacon, but ur girl said my hog is fatter than yours
    the double play is pretty cool ,this was ok.
    terrorize your love life. showed ur girl you're a coward, soft.
    now she never sleeper cell, blowing up my phone til hers powers off
    cool I liked this .
    the fuck we even matched up? I'm hot, ur writing stay shit.
    in fact I'm the top seed ur girl wanna fertilize her eggs with
    at first read didnt like this but grew on me.
    Fresh ain't thuggin, you do crime cuz getting locked up is your passion
    you love it. incels the only time you ever get any action
    eh i don’t love it
    get stomped. every time you drop, it gets worse & missing heat
    can't tell if ur going toe to toe or keying verses with your feet
    this was a pretty cool idea I don’t think it was corny like everyone up there , I thought it was something different
    it's a sprint for the top. but you make it hard to strive for.
    ur not even in the race, just some pathetic lower life form
    basic .
    bitch you'll get eaten alive, ur scared when I brandish the mac.
    I'm bloodthirsty & all this gourmet cause a panic attack
    feel like I’ve seen a gourmet flip but literally can’t recall where . i feel but this was dope though .
    ur name's ironic. cuz Fresh breath something you've never known
    all you ever do is keep mentos curling by giving dome
    didn’t like this really
    no need to share ya leftist views. bitch soon to be deceased
    everyone knows ur anti-guns when you hit the gym in sleeveless tees
    dope.
    never won a title in ur life. the problem's bigger than simply rust
    if you EVER champ back to back seasons, you'll be watching Disney Plus
    didnt like the close.


    after reading fresh s verse I thought spit would have rolled here , after seeing his recent OMs but it was much closer . Not a knock on fresh btw I just didn’t think it would be enough.. I though fresh wording was super short this week , clean but it lacked better set ups .. sounds crazy cause everyone’s been getting shit for wording and you cleaned yours up just felt like you took too much out . But still overall solid verse gave me a couple of laughs nothing THAT crazy . Spit on the other hand took a bit to get into his verse , I thought the bars that connected hit harder the Canada bar and the guns bars were haymakers .. and even the gourmet I thought was dope .. but I think he had to many misses so for that reason I gotta give it to fresh..

    Vote fresh here .

    Good battle y’all I edited this like 3 times on my phone and changed a few things so excuse typos .

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    Re: WK03 HOF Battle: Contendership Match (1-1) The Real Spit vs. (1-0) Fresh (OPEN FOR VOTES)

    Fresh

    I won’t turn a blind eye, it's depraved and fuckin odd to me
    She’s gonna have more Soul in her than the Stevie Wonder discography
    doesn't attack as much as i would like. but this is fucking hilarious[
    She won’t be treated like royalty, and probably reside in a garage
    You’ll watch your Princess Diana lack of fathership’ll be linked as the cause
    heating up with this.
    He’ll catch a combo, I have no fear of this guy
    If his fists are bawled, it’s to wipe the tears from his eyes
    good wondering but this is a played concept. but good filler
    We’re built different, if we ever meet, I’ll make sure it’s the end
    spit’ll Frequency In Danger… and then never be heard from again
    Frequency in Danger lol. wp was dope i wanted the double entendre with it to make it extra dope. liked this tho
    I’m out for the kill, 1st I’ll obliterate your ugly face
    If u end up a quadriplegic, consider it a lucky break
    naw bro.
    Throwin hands ain’t something your stupid ass should try
    You’re so fucking thin-skinned, it’s proof you have no spine
    ok
    You’ll always be known as a bitch; never given your due
    Sure, you can clean my clock… and the rest of the living room too
    nope
    Whether with spits or with fists, you’re unfit and shoddy
    If I drop the gloves, the backdrop is your unconscious body
    i liked this

    The origin of the copy pasta, I should slap you for being a bitch
    I wish I could say your chances are slender, man... but they don’t even exist
    solid personal but Fresh you could have made this one fire fire fire fire fire. all of the elements are here but just falls short of being exceptional.
    He has always been garbage.. and wack at battling as well
    If he makes a complete 180, it’s from back to back L’s
    i don't know if this has been don't before but i like it
    You made Lenox look bad, it was bizarre and dense, really
    We all know you ghostwrote… the last 4 bars against dilly
    lol. you got me searching through the archives.
    You’re old as fuck and bland as shit, totally
    It’s funny how you’ve always been dialed down + your era is that of the rotary
    LOL
    I’m dropping you here, back to workin' your way through the worst
    If you wanna invade myspace again? You’ll have to get past Dave Dilly first
    lol ok
    Paychecks are music to my ears, life is so much better with no urgency
    You Singapore man song… we’d have to measure your networth in that currency
    naw. Singapore dollar is like the same as the Canadian dollar bruv
    So unimportant, a murder where they’d forget all the evidence
    You’ll only see him on the front page if I $pit on the president
    i don't like this closer


    vs

    $pit

    this the battle of the week, Fresh & $pit are vote bringers
    ur the showpiece, I'm just here snapping ur white flag & both fingers
    i like the concept but feels like something is missing
    time for an ass whipping. bitch you're never felt, pipe down
    I won't hand over the title but you can get the belt right now
    funny but played.
    you don't respect the Golden age. I'm sick of you damn brats
    dog who cares how old I am, ur gonna be 86 from the champ match
    premed rebuttal? fire
    we're not 'migos. might end up in an OM, watch me unveil carnage
    everyone's excited for a Fresh verse. to offset ur stale garbage
    i liked this !
    like Barcotic, you come from the land of fags. I always knew so.
    we joke Canadian's are effeminate pussies. with you it's Trudeau.
    lol
    I'm from the USA, and trust me dog it matters to whores
    won't compare bacon, but ur girl said my hog is fatter than yours
    lol i liked this
    terrorize your love life. showed ur girl you're a coward, soft.
    now she never sleeper cell, blowing up my phone til hers powers off
    ok
    the fuck we even matched up? I'm hot, ur writing stay shit.
    in fact I'm the top seed ur girl wanna fertilize her eggs with
    naw
    Fresh ain't thuggin, you do crime cuz getting locked up is your passion
    you love it. incels the only time you ever get any action
    LOL
    get stomped. every time you drop, it gets worse & missing heat
    can't tell if ur going toe to toe or keying verses with your feet
    lol
    it's a sprint for the top. but you make it hard to strive for.
    ur not even in the race, just some pathetic lower life form
    light jab here but funny
    bitch you'll get eaten alive, ur scared when I brandish the mac.
    I'm bloodthirsty & all this gourmet cause a panic attack
    fire
    ur name's ironic. cuz Fresh breath something you've never known
    all you ever do is keep mentos curling by giving dome
    this was ok. but was missing something
    no need to share ya leftist views. bitch soon to be deceased
    everyone knows ur anti-guns when you hit the gym in sleeveless tees
    lol
    never won a title in ur life. the problem's bigger than simply rust
    [COLOR="#FF0000"]if you EVER champ back to back seasons, you'll be watching Disney Plus
    eh[/COLOR



    very entertaining read. and nice battle gents. i thought Fresh was going to take this one from the start but i have $pit pulling the lead with greater consistency overall. Fresh had a few dry stops but was otherwise on points. $pit was kind of off here and there but it was not as frequent as Fresh.

    v/$pit

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    Re: WK03 HOF Battle: Contendership Match (1-1) The Real Spit vs. (1-0) Fresh

    I won’t turn a blind eye, it's depraved and fuckin odd to me
    She’s gonna have more Soul in her than the Stevie Wonder discography

    I'm sure Soule looked at this nameflip and cringed lol, but you know, that nameflip wasn't directed at him, instead it was meant for Spit. This was a great, funny personal.

    She won’t be treated like royalty, and probably reside in a garage
    You’ll watch your Princess Diana lack of fathership’ll be linked as the cause

    Lmao, nice variant flip. It was set up beautifully.

    He’ll catch a combo, I have no fear of this guy
    If his fists are bawled, it’s to wipe the tears from his eyes

    I liked this, but I also felt there wasn't enough build. I typically use short setups which is fine here, but the pay off happened too fast for me, it didn't give me enough time to get thoroughly invested and get that cathartic feeling afterwards.

    We’re built different, if we ever meet, I’ll make sure it’s the end
    spit’ll Frequency In Danger… and then never be heard from again

    Wasn't feeling this.

    I’m out for the kill, 1st I’ll obliterate your ugly face
    If u end up a quadriplegic, consider it a lucky break

    Same issues as the previous two.

    Throwin hands ain’t something your stupid ass should try
    You’re so fucking thin-skinned, it’s proof you have no spine

    Cool.

    You’ll always be known as a bitch; never given your due
    Sure, you can clean my clock… and the rest of the living room too

    Lmao.

    Whether with spits or with fists, you’re unfit and shoddy
    If I drop the gloves, the backdrop is your unconscious body

    Wasn't feeling this.

    The origin of the copy pasta, I should slap you for being a bitch
    I wish I could say your chances are slender, man... but they don’t even exist

    Dope.

    He has always been garbage.. and wack at battling as well
    If he makes a complete 180, it’s from back to back L’s

    Wasn't feeling this.

    You made Lenox look bad, it was bizarre and dense, really
    We all know you ghostwrote… the last 4 bars against dilly

    Lmao nice.

    You’re old as fuck and bland as shit, totally
    It’s funny how you’ve always been dialed down + your era is that of the rotary

    Lmao. Technically my era is that of the rotary as well.

    I’m dropping you here, back to workin' your way through the worst
    If you wanna invade myspace again? You’ll have to get past Dave Dilly first

    Lmao

    Paychecks are music to my ears, life is so much better with no urgency
    You Singapore man song… we’d have to measure your networth in that currency

    Dope.

    So unimportant, a murder where they’d forget all the evidence
    You’ll only see him on the front page if I $pit on the president

    Wasn't feeling this.




    this the battle of the week, Fresh & $pit are vote bringers
    ur the showpiece, I'm just here snapping ur white flag & both fingers

    Kind of went over my head. For such a short and concise bar, the fact I had to put alot of thought into where you ultimately took the concept was detrimental to it's impact.

    time for an ass whipping. bitch you're never felt, pipe down
    I won't hand over the title but you can get the belt right now

    Wasn't feeling this. You aren't necessarily the champion, this being a Contendership Match, so it didn't really connect with me.

    you don't respect the Golden age. I'm sick of you damn brats
    dog who cares how old I am, ur gonna be 86 from the champ match

    Nice. Would have been even better if you put 86'ed because that's the phrase I'm more familiar with.

    we're not 'migos. might end up in an OM, watch me unveil carnage
    everyone's excited for a Fresh verse. to offset ur stale garbage

    So this was a Fresh nameflip variant, and my rule of thumb is to never use a Fresh nameflip, but I loved the way this hit. It came off harsh to me.

    like Barcotic, you come from the land of fags. I always knew so.
    we joke Canadian's are effeminate pussies. with you it's Trudeau.

    Lmao. Fire.

    I'm from the USA, and trust me dog it matters to whores
    won't compare bacon, but ur girl said my hog is fatter than yours

    You're getting back lost ground. That's 4 straight.

    terrorize your love life. showed ur girl you're a coward, soft.
    now she never sleeper cell, blowing up my phone til hers powers off

    Dope.

    the fuck we even matched up? I'm hot, ur writing stay shit.
    in fact I'm the top seed ur girl wanna fertilize her eggs with

    Lmao. But there was downside to this, if this were a tournament setting it would of been made more sense. Because of that I won't retract my Lmao but I do have to drop the overall quality of the bar.

    Fresh ain't thuggin, you do crime cuz getting locked up is your passion
    you love it. incels the only time you ever get any action

    Wasn't feeling this.

    get stomped. every time you drop, it gets worse & missing heat
    can't tell if ur going toe to toe or keying verses with your feet

    Lmfao. Great.

    it's a sprint for the top. but you make it hard to strive for.
    ur not even in the race, just some pathetic lower life form

    You're starting to come off like Fresh with the style of your punches, but the wording is different in that you aren't being held back by it. Dope bar.

    bitch you'll get eaten alive, ur scared when I brandish the mac.
    I'm bloodthirsty & all this gourmet cause a panic attack

    Wasn't feeling this.

    ur name's ironic. cuz Fresh breath something you've never known
    all you ever do is keep mentos curling by giving dome

    Wasn't feeling this.

    no need to share ya leftist views. bitch soon to be deceased
    everyone knows ur anti-guns when you hit the gym in sleeveless tees

    Nice.

    never won a title in ur life. the problem's bigger than simply rust
    if you EVER champ back to back seasons, you'll be watching Disney Plus

    Wasn't feeling this.



    So it turns out you guys went 9-9 at each other. Really competitive battle. What got me was the 6 straight punches that Spit landed. Fresh had a 4 bar stretch of his own, but that 6 from Spit was a great excamle of why it's important to build and capitalize on momentum.

    v-Spit
    HOF-No. Reason being I told myself you guys both ended up with at least 10 each I would give it a nod. You guys went 9-9. Just missed it.

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