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Thread: WK03 HOF Battle: Contendership Match (1-1) The Real Spit vs. (1-0) Fresh (Fresh Wins)

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    Re: WK03 HOF Battle: Contendership Match (1-1) The Real Spit vs. (1-0) Fresh (OPEN FOR VOTES)

    3-3 needs more votes.

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    Re: WK03 HOF Battle: Contendership Match (1-1) The Real Spit vs. (1-0) Fresh (OPEN FOR VOTES)

    fresh 1st four bars were nice
    then it feel off a little then started to pick bak up
    myspace, clean clock, & sinapore were good
    spit went the other way
    started off slow then picked up
    anti guns, toe 2 toe, top seed, and sleeper cell was good
    this a close one i liked the both cud go bothwys

    winner fresh

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    Re: WK03 HOF Battle: Contendership Match (1-1) The Real Spit vs. (1-0) Fresh (OPEN FOR VOTES)

    I got you guys, don’t worry, just at work but will vote for sure

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    Re: WK03 HOF Battle: Contendership Match (1-1) The Real Spit vs. (1-0) Fresh (OPEN FOR VOTES)

    Quote Originally Posted by Baron Mynd View Post
    I got you guys, don’t worry, just at work but will vote for sure
    Thanks.

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    Re: WK03 HOF Battle: Contendership Match (1-1) The Real Spit vs. (1-0) Fresh

    I won’t turn a blind eye, it's depraved and fuckin odd to me
    She’s gonna have more Soul in her than the Stevie Wonder discography

    lmao

    She won’t be treated like royalty, and probably reside in a garage
    You’ll watch your Princess Diana lack of fathership’ll be linked as the cause

    ouch

    He’ll catch a combo, I have no fear of this guy
    If his fists are bawled, it’s to wipe the tears from his eyes

    seen similar before if I’m real but not bad

    We’re built different, if we ever meet, I’ll make sure it’s the end
    spit’ll Frequency In Danger… and then never be heard from again

    not so keen on this conceptually but worded well enough that it works for me

    I’m out for the kill, 1st I’ll obliterate your ugly face
    If u end up a quadriplegic, consider it a lucky break

    yep

    Throwin hands ain’t something your stupid ass should try
    You’re so fucking thin-skinned, it’s proof you have no spine

    okay

    You’ll always be known as a bitch; never given your due
    Sure, you can clean my clock… and the rest of the living room too

    feels familiar also like I’ve seen the idea before maybe but not bad

    Whether with spits or with fists, you’re unfit and shoddy
    If I drop the gloves, the backdrop is your unconscious body

    okay

    The origin of the copy pasta, I should slap you for being a bitch
    I wish I could say your chances are slender, man... but they don’t even exist

    not as keen on this one personally with the comma being there

    He has always been garbage.. and wack at battling as well
    If he makes a complete 180, it’s from back to back L’s

    yeah
    You made Lenox look bad, it was bizarre and dense, really
    We all know you ghostwrote… the last 4 bars against dilly

    loooool

    You’re old as fuck and bland as shit, totally
    It’s funny how you’ve always been dialed down + your era is that of the rotary

    didn’t like the wording on this one tbh

    I’m dropping you here, back to workin' your way through the worst
    If you wanna invade myspace again? You’ll have to get past Dave Dilly first

    I fucked with it but that’s two Dilly lines in quick succession yo

    Paychecks are music to my ears, life is so much better with no urgency
    You Singapore man song… we’d have to measure your networth in that currency

    nah not for me

    So unimportant, a murder where they’d forget all the evidence
    You’ll only see him on the front page if I $pit on the president

    okay

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    Re: WK03 HOF Battle: Contendership Match (1-1) The Real Spit vs. (1-0) Fresh (OPEN FOR VOTES)

    I won’t turn a blind eye, it's depraved and fuckin odd to me
    She’s gonna have more Soul in her than the Stevie Wonder discography
    8/10

    She won’t be treated like royalty, and probably reside in a garage
    You’ll watch your Princess Diana lack of fathership’ll be linked as the cause
    8/10

    He’ll catch a combo, I have no fear of this guy
    If his fists are bawled, it’s to wipe the tears from his eyes
    6/10

    We’re built different, if we ever meet, I’ll make sure it’s the end
    spit’ll Frequency In Danger… and then never be heard from again
    3/10

    I’m out for the kill, 1st I’ll obliterate your ugly face
    If u end up a quadriplegic, consider it a lucky break
    3/10

    Throwin hands ain’t something your stupid ass should try
    You’re so fucking thin-skinned, it’s proof you have no spine
    4/10

    You’ll always be known as a bitch; never given your due
    Sure, you can clean my clock… and the rest of the living room too
    5/10

    Whether with spits or with fists, you’re unfit and shoddy
    If I drop the gloves, the backdrop is your unconscious body
    4/10

    The origin of the copy pasta, I should slap you for being a bitch
    I wish I could say your chances are slender, man... but they don’t even exist
    6/10

    He has always been garbage.. and wack at battling as well
    If he makes a complete 180, it’s from back to back L’s
    2/10

    You made Lenox look bad, it was bizarre and dense, really
    We all know you ghostwrote… the last 4 bars against dilly
    7/10

    You’re old as fuck and bland as shit, totally
    It’s funny how you’ve always been dialed down + your era is that of the rotary
    7/10

    I’m dropping you here, back to workin' your way through the worst
    If you wanna invade myspace again? You’ll have to get past Dave Dilly first
    2/10

    Paychecks are music to my ears, life is so much better with no urgency
    You Singapore man song… we’d have to measure your networth in that currency
    8/10

    So unimportant, a murder where they’d forget all the evidence
    You’ll only see him on the front page if I $pit on the president
    2/10

    vs

    this the battle of the week, Fresh & $pit are vote bringers
    ur the showpiece, I'm just here snapping ur white flag & both fingers
    3/10

    time for an ass whipping. bitch you're never felt, pipe down
    I won't hand over the title but you can get the belt right now
    5/10

    you don't respect the Golden age. I'm sick of you damn brats
    dog who cares how old I am, ur gonna be 86 from the champ match
    6/10

    we're not 'migos. might end up in an OM, watch me unveil carnage
    everyone's excited for a Fresh verse. to offset ur stale garbage
    6/10

    like Barcotic, you come from the land of fags. I always knew so.
    we joke Canadian's are effeminate pussies. with you it's Trudeau.
    8/10

    I'm from the USA, and trust me dog it matters to whores
    won't compare bacon, but ur girl said my hog is fatter than yours
    4/10

    terrorize your love life. showed ur girl you're a coward, soft.
    now she never sleeper cell, blowing up my phone til hers powers off
    7/10

    the fuck we even matched up? I'm hot, ur writing stay shit.
    in fact I'm the top seed ur girl wanna fertilize her eggs with
    4/10

    Fresh ain't thuggin, you do crime cuz getting locked up is your passion
    you love it. incels the only time you ever get any action
    3/10

    get stomped. every time you drop, it gets worse & missing heat
    can't tell if ur going toe to toe or keying verses with your feet
    8/10

    it's a sprint for the top. but you make it hard to strive for.
    ur not even in the race, just some pathetic lower life form
    7/10

    bitch you'll get eaten alive, ur scared when I brandish the mac.
    I'm bloodthirsty, & all this gourmet cause a panic attack
    2/10 also.. nobody brandishes me

    ur name's ironic. cuz Fresh breath something you've never known
    all you ever do is keep mentos curling by giving dome
    1/10

    no need to share ya leftist views. bitch soon to be deceased
    everyone knows ur anti-guns when you hit the gym in sleeveless tees
    6/10

    never won a title in ur life. the problem's bigger than simply rust
    if you EVER champ back-to-back seasons, you'll be watching Disney Plus
    5/10



    lmaooo
    75 fresh
    75 spit

    I had to try something different here. battle's too long and I felt it was very close, and its literally a tie based on the points. to be clear, the points is just a scale from 1 to 10 of how much I liked the bar. I had to read this like 3 times which at some point is not fun because theres 30 bars. I personally got Fresh here with harder punches, but the difference is literally minimal..

    Also vote is no, the average points for each was 5 and I don't think that represents I liked these verses enough to be in a HOF. I think perhaps it was too long and there were many misses in between haymakers. but was definitely an enjoyable read

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    Re: WK03 HOF Battle: Contendership Match (1-1) The Real Spit vs. (1-0) Fresh

    this the battle of the week, Fresh & $pit are vote bringers
    ur the showpiece, I'm just here snapping ur white flag & both fingers

    okay
    time for an ass whipping. bitch you're never felt, pipe down
    I won't hand over the title but you can get the belt right now

    alright

    you don't respect the Golden age. I'm sick of you damn brats
    dog who cares how old I am, ur gonna be 86 from the champ match

    nah not for me

    we're not 'migos. might end up in an OM, watch me unveil carnage
    everyone's excited for a Fresh verse. to offset ur stale garbage

    okay

    like Barcotic, you come from the land of fags. I always knew so.
    we joke Canadian's are effeminate pussies. with you it's Trudeau.

    fire, LOTB so far for me

    I'm from the USA, and trust me dog it matters to whores
    won't compare bacon, but ur girl said my hog is fatter than yours

    lol

    terrorize your love life. showed ur girl you're a coward, soft.
    now she never sleeper cell, blowing up my phone til hers powers off

    not keen on the comma use here but okay

    the fuck we even matched up? I'm hot, ur writing stay shit.
    in fact I'm the top seed ur girl wanna fertilize her eggs with

    alright I guess

    Fresh ain't thuggin, you do crime cuz getting locked up is your passion
    you love it. incels the only time you ever get any action

    okay

    get stomped. every time you drop, it gets worse & missing heat
    can't tell if ur going toe to toe or keying verses with your feet

    nah didn’t like this one

    it's a sprint for the top. but you make it hard to strive for.
    ur not even in the race, just some pathetic lower life form

    ehhhh not feeling personally

    bitch you'll get eaten alive, ur scared when I brandish the mac.
    I'm bloodthirsty & all this gourmet cause a panic attack

    seen gourmet used but thought this could have been utilised better

    ur name's ironic. cuz Fresh breath something you've never known
    all you ever do is keep mentos curling by giving dome

    okay

    no need to share ya leftist views. bitch soon to be deceased
    everyone knows ur anti-guns when you hit the gym in sleeveless tees

    lol cool

    never won a title in ur life. the problem's bigger than simply rust
    if you EVER champ back to back seasons, you'll be watching Disney Plus

    okay closer

    damn, that’s a lot of lines, Spit prob has my favourite with that Trudeau shit. pretty even battle in truth but I got Spit slightly editing it I think off first read, both pretty consistent though and not much I didn’t like to some extent from either.

    Vote - Spit

    good. night.[/QUOTE]

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    Re: WK03 HOF Battle: Contendership Match (1-1) The Real Spit vs. (1-0) Fresh (OPEN FOR VOTES)

    5-4 fresh wins

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