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    WK04: ChampMatch (4-0) Art vs. (2-0) Fresh (ART WINS

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    Re: WK04: Championship Match (4-0) Art vs. (2-0) Fresh

    Check. I'm good with any amount 16 and up

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    Re: WK04: Championship Match (4-0) Art vs. (2-0) Fresh

    16 works

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    Re: WK04: Championship Match (4-0) Art vs. (2-0) Fresh

    Fresh is good to go. He sent 16 in.

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    Re: WK04: Championship Match (4-0) Art vs. (2-0) Fresh

    got a girl u call ur wife, yall have similar interests, both not very bright
    plus she even has that troll in her, but its Zunto fuckin her every night
    fix ya wording or get dropped, slow down, take ur time or get clocked
    i dont mean to make ya rushmore, I'm just here to leave your head rocked
    seen ya pic , u just a white ass bitch, anorexic AF, polish? irish? a damn mix
    Frail as fuck! we can see ya McRibs, someone get him a mcdonalds sandwich
    u live on RB! every second u write, take some time off have sex w/ ur wife
    it seems like u need a vacation, & hopefully soule bans u 4 the rest of ur life
    youre the biggest fag here, u and your but buddy "DS Sicness" I swear
    its like whenever you speak Amen follows like when you finish a prayer
    i wrote a mag, u wrote one lol fuckin clone, but honestly i should have known
    dude tried to give a Maga new look, corny old af and full of racist undertones
    I'll leave ur insides out its simple, murder scene clean, w/ no details or info
    only thing left was fresh prince at the door , got um thinkin of that will smith intro
    stop bitching Im sick of hearin this man cry, im on my grizzly shit u cant hide
    if i have to hear any Morants then im pullin a piece and killin u on instagram live


    @Wuxia @Fresh yall can open it up.

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    Re: WK04: Championship Match (4-0) Art vs. (2-0) Fresh

    I heard you was tiny, be cool or you’ll end up with a hematoma
    Let’s see how this impact when I hold back… and still he’s flicked into a coma
    He’s not the most pitiful member, but he isn’t too far
    We’ve all seen Solaras dirty laundry… but Art’s the one who lives in his car
    You HOFed audio lol great way for the award to be diminished
    Funny, you got the nod from Soule… but those that matter nodded off before we finished
    We took different paths to get here… it isn’t fair, honestly
    I did my part to cull Spit, you just had to deal with some poor air quality
    Thought you would help with the league, but that mag was trash, kid
    Pretended to have Lay on the Line, but he’s the one who almost made your ass quit
    It’s the part where I call his gf fat, it’ll have him ragin’ fast
    I don’t know how much that Broadway, but it’s up there with the entire stage n cast
    Your girl is a monster, each step leaves behind a giant crater
    Crazy that its hard to imagine scale… but not the bitch climbing the side of a skyscraper
    It ain’t the wild west, but I draw fast when the clock is set in motion
    I’ll be the one surrounded by shells, meanwhile it's you who's at the bottom of the ocean

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    Re: WK04: Championship Match (4-0) Art vs. (2-0) Fresh

    got a girl u call ur wife, yall have similar interests, both not very bright
    plus she even has that troll in her, but its Zunto fuckin her every night

    Lmao. Great opener.

    fix ya wording or get dropped, slow down, take ur time or get clocked
    i dont mean to make ya rushmore, I'm just here to leave your head rocked

    Dope. Cool personal.

    seen ya pic , u just a white ass bitch, anorexic AF, polish? irish? a damn mix
    Frail as fuck! we can see ya McRibs, someone get him a mcdonalds sandwich

    A little wordy, the two AF's could have been removed for better impact.

    u live on RB! every second u write, take some time off have sex w/ ur wife
    it seems like u need a vacation, & hopefully soule bans u 4 the rest of ur life

    Lmao.

    youre the biggest fag here, u and your but buddy "DS Sicness" I swear
    its like whenever you speak Amen follows like when you finish a prayer

    Lmao. Nice personal.

    i wrote a mag, u wrote one lol fuckin clone, but honestly i should have known
    dude tried to give a Maga new look, corny old af and full of racist undertones

    Another solid personal.

    I'll leave ur insides out its simple, murder scene clean, w/ no details or info
    only thing left was fresh prince at the door , got um thinkin of that will smith intro

    Wasn't feeling this.

    stop bitching Im sick of hearin this man cry, im on my grizzly shit u cant hide
    if i have to hear any Morants then im pullin a piece and killin u on instagram live

    Fire.




    I heard you was tiny, be cool or you’ll end up with a hematoma
    Let’s see how this impact when I hold back… and still he’s flicked into a coma

    Cool wordplay. The setup was nice and direct, but I didn't like the indirect execution of the punchline itself.

    He’s not the most pitiful member, but he isn’t too far
    We’ve all seen Solaras dirty laundry… but Art’s the one who lives in his car

    Dope. Much different than the opener, you went indirect the entire way through, so the pay off was clutch.

    You HOFed audio lol great way for the award to be diminished
    Funny, you got the nod from Soule… but those that matter nodded off before we finished

    Nice personal.

    We took different paths to get here… it isn’t fair, honestly
    I did my part to cull Spit, you just had to deal with some poor air quality

    Dope personal.

    Thought you would help with the league, but that mag was trash, kid
    Pretended to have Lay on the Line, but he’s the one who almost made your ass quit

    Lmao. Okay this was a fake personal. At no time did I ever witness Art threaten to leave because of Lay Doubt's emotionals. I can't give this bar any credit.

    It’s the part where I call his gf fat, it’ll have him ragin’ fast
    I don’t know how much that Broadway, but it’s up there with the entire stage n cast

    Fire.

    Your girl is a monster, each step leaves behind a giant crater
    Crazy that its hard to imagine scale… but not the bitch climbing the side of a skyscraper

    Wasn't feeling this.

    It ain’t the wild west, but I draw fast when the clock is set in motion
    I’ll be the one surrounded by shells, meanwhile it's you who's at the bottom of the ocean

    Wasn't feeling this.


    I have Art taking this 6-4, but even then I enjoyed his personals much more. Fresh last personal was fake to me, then he shifted toward the generics, with the exception of the Broadway bar, he ended the verse poorly. He finished it 1-4 while Art finished 3-4. Art closed strong. Fresh didn't.

    v-Art

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    Re: WK04: Championship Match (4-0) Art vs. (2-0) Fresh (OPEN FOR VOTES)

    troll, rushmore, mc rib, morants all nice
    lives in car, nod from soul broardway good

    4bars against 3bars, dope battle

    winner art

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    Re: WK04: Championship Match (4-0) Art vs. (2-0) Fresh

    [QUOTE=Art.;8978530]got a girl u call ur wife, yall have similar interests, both not very bright
    plus she even has that troll in her, but its Zunto fuckin her every night
    Lmfaoo ouch
    fix ya wording or get dropped, slow down, take ur time or get clocked
    i dont mean to make ya rushmore, I'm just here to leave your head rocked
    Absolutely not
    seen ya pic , u just a white ass bitch, anorexic AF, polish? irish? a damn mix
    Frail as fuck! we can see ya McRibs, someone get him a mcdonalds sandwich
    Not a fan
    u live on RB! every second u write, take some time off have sex w/ ur wife
    it seems like u need a vacation, & hopefully soule bans u 4 the rest of ur life
    Lmfao
    youre the biggest fag here, u and your but buddy "DS Sicness" I swear
    its like whenever you speak Amen follows like when you finish a prayer
    Decent
    i wrote a mag, u wrote one lol fuckin clone, but honestly i should have known
    dude tried to give a Maga new look, corny old af and full of racist undertones
    Shut the fuck up u liberal pussy
    I'll leave ur insides out its simple, murder scene clean, w/ no details or info
    only thing left was fresh prince at the door , got um thinkin of that will smith intro
    This was dope but fresh prints are so fucking played on fresh dude
    stop bitching Im sick of hearin this man cry, im on my grizzly shit u cant hide
    if i have to hear any Morants then im pullin a piece and killin u on instagram live
    Cool closer

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    I heard you was tiny, be cool or you’ll end up with a hematoma
    Let’s see how this impact when I hold back… and still he’s flicked into a coma
    Wasn’t feeling this decent attempt tho
    He’s not the most pitiful member, but he isn’t too far
    We’ve all seen Solaras dirty laundry… but Art’s the one who lives in his car
    Pretty good wp here
    You HOFed audio lol great way for the award to be diminished
    Funny, you got the nod from Soule… but those that matter nodded off before we finished
    This was hot
    We took different paths to get here… it isn’t fair, honestly
    I did my part to cull Spit, you just had to deal with some poor air quality
    Nice coulda flipped it harsher tho
    Thought you would help with the league, but that mag was trash, kid
    Pretended to have Lay on the Line, but he’s the one who almost made your ass quit
    Nice
    It’s the part where I call his gf fat, it’ll have him ragin’ fast
    I don’t know how much that Broadway, but it’s up there with the entire stage n cast
    is broadway played? Idk if it is but this was funny
    Your girl is a monster, each step leaves behind a giant crater
    Crazy that its hard to imagine scale… but not the bitch climbing the side of a skyscraper
    Decent
    It ain’t the wild west, but I draw fast when the clock is set in motion
    I’ll be the one surrounded by shells, meanwhile it's you who's at the bottom of the ocean
    Nah


    Ngl thought art was surprisingly weak. Not sure why he thought fresh prints was a good idea on him the McRib line wasn’t feeling either. His opener was dope tho. No hate art u know I fuck with u I just thought you’d come harder against fresh and edge it out but I didn’t think you did that. Fresh wasn’t too crazy here either but he had a few really nice personals and some stuff that I thought were soft and could have been flipped harsher

    v/ Fresh
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    Re: WK04: Championship Match (4-0) Art vs. (2-0) Fresh (OPEN FOR VOTES)

    Art had Rushmore which I thought was pretty good, amen was alright
    Maga was also just alright.. fresh prince was a nice bar, liked the build up too
    Instagram line was ok.. overall not a bad verse, I’ve seen ya drop better but this was still cool
    Consistent pretty much the whole way thru
    Fresh had Solaris was cool.. opener was a miss.. nodded off was nice
    Lay on the line was alright.. broadway seems to easy.. I can’t recall seeing it just seems like a bar that’s played
    Last two were a miss..
    this is actually crazy close.. I think fresh had the line of the battle with nodded off
    But art was more consistent with his jabs.. overall his misses didn’t miss as much as freshes

    VOTE ART

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    Re: WK04: Championship Match (4-0) Art vs. (2-0) Fresh (OPEN FOR VOTES)

    Art

    Opener dope
    Rushmore a played wp but the personal made it fire with a dope tie in
    McRibs was too choppy kinda fucked it up
    Ban joint was ok. Set up doper
    The double like fucks up the amen bar a little. Cool personal tho
    Maga was ok. lol funny
    Fresh prince was ehh to played
    Closer was fire


    Vs


    Fresh
    Didn’t like opener
    Solaras was dope
    Nod from soul was dope
    Cull spit was dope
    On the line was ehh
    Broadway was fire
    Didn’t like imagine scale
    Closer was weak too


    This close af actually, art uses some played concepts but turns um into dope personals. Makes it fresh af with cool flips. Fresh seemed like he was gonna run his Im whole verse hard Af but fell off and strayed away from the personal attack which I feel if he stayed with it he’d a won. Dope shit all thru both verse but I’m edging art here. Great read fellas


    Vote Art

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    Re: WK04: Championship Match (4-0) Art vs. (2-0) Fresh (OPEN FOR VOTES)

    got a girl u call ur wife, yall have similar interests, both not very bright
    plus she even has that troll in her, but its Zunto fuckin her every night
    fix ya wording or get dropped, slow down, take ur time or get clocked
    i dont mean to make ya rushmore, I'm just here to leave your head rocked
    u live on RB! every second u write, take some time off have sex w/ ur wife
    it seems like u need a vacation, & hopefully soule bans u 4 the rest of ur life
    stop bitching Im sick of hearin this man cry, im on my grizzly shit u cant hide
    if i have to hear any Morants then im pullin a piece and killin u on instagram live


    Mcrib was terrible and the Amen personal could have been waaaay better


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    He’s not the most pitiful member, but he isn’t too far
    We’ve all seen Solaras dirty laundry… but Art’s the one who lives in his car
    You HOFed audio lol great way for the award to be diminished
    Funny, you got the nod from Soule… but those that matter nodded off before we finished
    We took different paths to get here… it isn’t fair, honestly
    I did my part to cull Spit, you just had to deal with some poor air quality

    Broadway was ok…

    You last two bars were absolute trash and back in the day you would have been laughed off the site.


    Its close. Fresh had the harsher three bars i quoted and noce personals but Art had a more consistent verse, more quotes and gis misses werent as bad as Fresh’s

    V Art

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    Re: WK04: Championship Match (4-0) Art vs. (2-0) Fresh (OPEN FOR VOTES)

    art wins 5-1

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