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@Smog
@Mac.
In 10
They sayin..
..Smog is this Smog is that, if u get Smog don’t spit shit that’s wack, y’all
Facts.. so they threw Macadam… just to have his skull mixed wit the asphalt.
Ya spouse suckin dicks, my biggest worry in life is rushin this (lol)
See we both storm thru bars.. ur just lookin fa the dudes ya wife’s fuckin wit
Im 5 his size, I’ll clap u n separate ya shoulder for throwin stones between eyes in fights
Pussy.. u’ll be in a sling shot up… for even THINKING David can beat Goliath twice.
U live virtual reality geek, if ya parents seen what goes on here they’d actually freak
Brooo, u aint gettin 100 lives permission… so u better ask moms if it’s cool battlin me
Word is u a girl, n I don’t hit tricks but I’ll beat a homo with fists, bud
Plus I don’t believe macadamia FAGGOT, n I’ll fuck up any BITCH wit nuts.
Last edited by Smog; November 26th, 2023 at 03:12 PM
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Yooo
U don’t look like a Smog, fuck ur name’s a miss to me
I’ll at least make the O fit ur face when I shoot up the Smg
I seen what u write and what u rep. all that shit’s a decadent strife
Smog u aint outta this world, we’re just strugglin to find intelligent life
Talk about sending messages, this battle’s a statement for this pup
I’ma send ya back to the drawing board after ur jaws all wired up
Fuck around and find out, now u gotta answer when the hell calls
One last wish, then ur body’ll be scattered in 7 parts like the dragon balls
U aint a tough guy, don’t ever talk prison life that crap doesn’t fit
Cuz the only number u ever did on any cell involved some Excel shit
Last edited by Mac; November 29th, 2023 at 11:07 AM
Disappointed at Smog’s opening bar and closer. Opener was fire, closer was mediocre which took away from the opener IMO. Storm through bars was nice too, however that concept is fairly old, I mean I dropped one against Greedy over 10 years ago.
Mac, your opener was creative but a total loss for me. The rest of your verses just wasn’t the usually from you (or maybe it is and I don’t read enough of your battles). Just seemed rushed and lazy with no real impact behind the punches you put together.
Smog got it.
..Smog is this Smog is that, if u get Smog don’t spit shit that’s wack, y’all
Facts.. so they threw Macadam… just to have his skull mixed wit the asphalt.
Ya spouse suckin dicks, my biggest worry in life is rushin this (lol)
See we both storm thru bars.. ur just lookin fa the dudes ya wife’s fuckin wit
Vs
I seen what u write and what u rep. all that shit’s a decadent strife
Smog u aint outta this world, we’re just strugglin to find intelligent life
Yeah man I think this was pretty once sided .. that storm through bars line was fire i thought.. Mac that smog play I can’t give ya , I wrote pretty much the same line 5 years ago and I gotta imagine it’s been used a bunch of different times as well the rest came off very statementish
Vote smog better overal
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..Smog is this Smog is that, if u get Smog don’t spit shit that’s wack, y’all
Facts.. so they threw Macadam… just to have his skull mixed wit the asphalt.
Ya spouse suckin dicks, my biggest worry in life is rushin this (lol)
See we both storm thru bars.. ur just lookin fa the dudes ya wife’s fuckin wit
Im 5 his size, I’ll clap u n separate ya shoulder for throwin stones between eyes in fights
Pussy.. u’ll be in a sling shot up… for even THINKING David can beat Goliath twice.
this is fireee asnd getting slept on. I see you smog
Word is u a girl, n I don’t hit tricks but I’ll beat a homo with fists, bud
Plus I don’t believe macadamia FAGGOT, n I’ll fuck up any BITCH wit nuts.
i thought this was dope too
vs
I seen what u write and what u rep. all that shit’s a decadent strife
Smog u aint outta this world, we’re just strugglin to find intelligent life
wasnt a huge fan of mac this week. smog had a dope verse
v/ smog
Smogs first two bars were dope.. I really liked the storm thru bars line
Mac had intelligent life.. everything else was kind of a miss for me
I just through smog came harder VOTE SMOGGY
..Smog is this Smog is that, if u get Smog don’t spit shit that’s wack, y’all
Facts.. so they threw Macadam… just to have his skull mixed wit the asphalt.
Cool.
Ya spouse suckin dicks, my biggest worry in life is rushin this (lol)
See we both storm thru bars.. ur just lookin fa the dudes ya wife’s fuckin wit
Lmao. Dope.
Im 5 his size, I’ll clap u n separate ya shoulder for throwin stones between eyes in fights
Pussy.. u’ll be in a sling shot up… for even THINKING David can beat Goliath twice.
Cool.
U live virtual reality geek, if ya parents seen what goes on here they’d actually freak
Brooo, u aint gettin 100 lives permission… so u better ask moms if it’s cool battlin me
Wasn't feeling this.
Word is u a girl, n I don’t hit tricks but I’ll beat a homo with fists, bud
Plus I don’t believe macadamia FAGGOT, n I’ll fuck up any BITCH wit nuts.
I thought this was dope. But you literally used a similar wordplay in the opener. Different meanings, I know, but...I thought this was so much better than the flip in the opener. So I'll cancel that one out and go with this.
U don’t look like a Smog, fuck ur name’s a miss to me
I’ll at least make the O fit ur face when I shoot up the Smg
Super creative and original Smog nameflip. Mad props on this.
I seen what u write and what u rep. all that shit’s a decadent strife
Smog u aint outta this world, we’re just strugglin to find intelligent life
Cool.
Talk about sending messages, this battle’s a statement for this pup
I’ma send ya back to the drawing board after ur jaws all wired up
Wasn't feeling this.
Fuck around and find out, now u gotta answer when the hell calls
One last wish, then ur body’ll be scattered in 7 parts like the dragon balls
So. A Dragonball flip. Yeah. That just happened. But I haven't seen it flipped like this lmao. I'm going to say "Okay."
U aint a tough guy, don’t ever talk prison life that crap doesn’t fit
Cuz the only number u ever did on any cell involved some Excel shit
Decent.
I have this 4-3 Mac. BUT. His last 2 were generous. Making it 3-2 Smog. BUT. It comes down to the his storm through bars punch and Mac's opener. Mac's opener was dope. Smog's punch was hilarious and nice. Worded perfectly, imo. It was lotb. So I'm going to give it to Smog here. Even though it's 4-3 Mac. That storm through bars punch was alot better than Mac's last 2.
v-Smog
Smog won here I thought rather handily
storm - never seen that flip
Opener - ok, Goliath had swag, closer worked
Mac opener could've been cool/ better if reworked
Outta this world - cute diss, eh
V smog
SMOG WINS 6-0
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