WEEK05 LAY DOUBT (0-0) VS LENOX (3-1) (Lenox Wins)

[Art.]

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Regular Battle
Verses due NO DUE DATES*
Voting ends on NO DUE DATES*

Must check-in 24/48 hours for NO DUE DATES to take effect
*be reasonable

10-lines MAX Regular Battle
16-lines MAX Contendership and Championship Battle


You know the rules, if not, refer to the rule thread.

@LayDoubt
@Lenox

[Lenox]

16-20? @Lay Doubt

[Art.]

@Lenox sent 14
@Lay Doubt

[Lenox]

Jesus Christ art stop @ing him with one word his username is two words
@Art. @Lay Doubt

lol FIXED

[Lay Doubt.]

I actually started drunkenly writing for this about a week ago, but then had to randomly work like 6 days straight.

I didn’t even count the lines but fuck it just match me.


https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Len_Bias


ur concert would never sell tix, cuz folks ain’t a believer in scrubs
& we all know that Len Bias, plus everyone here seizure on drugs
beef w/ Lay? That’s a DOA, yeah I’m clapping this mark
pussy thought he was a baller, turned out he was lacking the heart
faggots get sparked, put me in coach so I can devour cats
spent 60 mins n Red every verse you’ve dropped, and I’m pissed I can’t get that Auerbach
so stop bumping ya gums, this bipolar pussy gets slumped n it’s done
he tried to bridge the gap between us, while we all hope he ends up jumping from one
no one knows who this geek even is, catch a beating & quit
finally started making a name for yourself, til Soule ended up deleting the shit
get killed against Lay, the blood of a coward’s what I’m spilling today
so fall back.. cuz getting aggressive with me isn’t accost you’re willing to pay
ya Napoleon complex is bogus & nonsense, I’m taking ur head & stomping
then I’ll break every Bonaparte, just to prove this motherfucker is a dead man Joaquin

[Art.]

Lenox's drop.


Ya rhymes are trash bro.. this rapping shit isn’t your bag,
The first time I liked anything u typed art was pretending to be u in the mag.
Plus your wife & daughter both getting it, them sluts str8 fiends,
Funny that you came back with 30... and I'll be coming back when she's 18.
We never considered lay elite wtf?? Stop acting like a faggot dude,
& this partisan credible.. cuz why think you’re dope when spits the ONLY ONE backing you?
Your glory days are over old timer, u sound like a fool,
Yeah, yeah, we would have got laughed off the site……….& u had to walk uphill both ways to school.
Whole site thinks you’re a clown, even Art had you looking dead soft,
give lay interviews with a mag, & questions on why I shouldn’t blow his fucking head off.
Moods swings or not, I still think you’re the biggest faggot ever,
Yeah im bipolar.. part of me wants to cut u in half while the others tryna stitch u back together.
I hate you but also care.. maybe I’ll consider you a close friend,
But I really hope he doesn’t take colostomy this time, cuz he’ll just bitch up and ghost again.

[Wuxia]

ur concert would never sell tix, cuz folks ain’t a believer in scrubs
& we all know that Len Bias, plus everyone here seizure on drugs

Len Bias is a played nameflip on Lenox, and the fact you posted a Wiki link as an expo prior to using this bar is laughable.

beef w/ Lay? That’s a DOA, yeah I’m clapping this mark
pussy thought he was a baller, turned out he was lacking the heart

Way too simple.

faggots get sparked, put me in coach so I can devour cats
spent 60 mins n Red every verse you’ve dropped, and I’m pissed I can’t get that Auerbach

Dope.

so stop bumping ya gums, this bipolar pussy gets slumped n it’s done
he tried to bridge the gap between us, while we all hope he ends up jumping from one

Played. Not only is the cliche cliche on RB, but the concept is played af. The cliche I can accept, after all that's what cliches are meant for. To be used over and over again. Not the concept, though. Back in the day you would have been accused of biting and laughed off the site.

no one knows who this geek even is, catch a beating & quit
finally started making a name for yourself, til Soule ended up deleting the shit

Yeah. Because LENOX told him to. Lmao. If you don't have any idea what happened then don't even try to flip it into a bar you moron. This was a fake personal.

get killed against Lay, the blood of a coward’s what I’m spilling today
so fall back.. cuz getting aggressive with me isn’t accost you’re willing to pay

Decent

ya Napoleon complex is bogus & nonsense, I’m taking ur head & stomping
then I’ll break every Bonaparte, just to prove this motherfucker is a dead man Joaquin

Bonaparte is played and Joaquin isn't pronounced like that at all. It was a Fresh reference and concept, but for somebody who heavily criticizes people who use wordplays you have a very difficult time being original in using your own.




Ya rhymes are trash bro.. this rapping shit isn’t your bag,
The first time I liked anything u typed art was pretending to be u in the mag.

Lmao. Dope opener.

Plus your wife & daughter both getting it, them sluts str8 fiends,
Funny that you came back with 30... and I'll be coming back when she's 18.

Not sure if he did go 30 or not, but that's what was agreed on. Decent

We never considered lay elite wtf?? Stop acting like a faggot dude,
& this partisan credible.. cuz why think you’re dope when spits the ONLY ONE backing you?

Dope personal and wordplay.

Your glory days are over old timer, u sound like a fool,
Yeah, yeah, we would have got laughed off the site……….& u had to walk uphill both ways to school.

Lmao.

Whole site thinks you’re a clown, even Art had you looking dead soft,
give lay interviews with a mag, & questions on why I shouldn’t blow his fucking head off.

Wasn't feeling this. Already had a mag reference that was so much better than this imo.

Moods swings or not, I still think you’re the biggest faggot ever,
Yeah im bipolar.. part of me wants to cut u in half while the others tryna stitch u back together.

Nice.

I hate you but also care.. maybe I’ll consider you a close friend,
But I really hope he doesn’t take colostomy this time, cuz he’ll just bitch up and ghost again.

Wasn't feeling this. Reason being you flipped your own wp, and here you made it the focus of the bar, much like before. I get you were making reference to him no showing to that bar, however it should have been handled in a different manner where Colostomy wasn't the wordplay that tied everything together. Also, the setup should of tied into the concept, with him no showing, instead it felt like a generic setup.




I have this 5-2 Lenox. LD's absence from the site, his inactivity, makes him susceptible to the usage of played material and fake personals, and his verse was indicative of that. When you start a verse, or make a comment afterwards, saying you were drunk when you wrote it, it makes me think you have no confidence that what you wrote has the potential to win. And that's exactly what happened here with LD. Lenox was nice. He was prepared to die here, and he wrote with a passion to beat LD. It showed heavily in his verse.

v-Lenox

[Art.]

Feel like i gotta break this one down all the way through or pending which way i vote Lay will call me a hater lol

ur concert would never sell tix, cuz folks ain’t a believer in scrubs
& we all know that Len Bias, plus everyone here seizure on drugs
see it , dont think its bad idk if its played or not , but il give ya it .
beef w/ Lay? That’s a DOA, yeah I’m clapping this mark
pussy thought he was a baller, turned out he was lacking the heart
didnt like this
faggots get sparked, put me in coach so I can devour cats
spent 60 mins n Red every verse you’ve dropped, and I’m pissed I can’t get that Auerbach
yup this is cool
so stop bumping ya gums, this bipolar pussy gets slumped n it’s done
he tried to bridge the gap between us, while we all hope he ends up jumping from one
this is eh feel like its a bit basic
no one knows who this geek even is, catch a beating & quit
finally started making a name for yourself, til Soule ended up deleting the shit
love this, it didnt go down exactly like this but i thought this was a cool flip
get killed against Lay, the blood of a coward’s what I’m spilling today
so fall back.. cuz getting aggressive with me isn’t accost you’re willing to pay
ok
ya Napoleon complex is bogus & nonsense, I’m taking ur head & stomping
then I’ll break every Bonaparte, just to prove this motherfucker is a dead man Joaquin
at first glance i said gtfoh but i never know how to say this dudes name so i went and looked and i dont think its close enough so going to give ya a miss here


vs


Ya rhymes are trash bro.. this rapping shit isn’t your bag,
The first time I liked anything u typed art was pretending to be u in the mag.
might be biased lol but this is fire.
Plus your wife & daughter both getting it, them sluts str8 fiends,
Funny that you came back with 30... and I'll be coming back when she's 18.
cool
We never considered lay elite wtf?? Stop acting like a faggot dude,
& this partisan credible.. cuz why think you’re dope when spits the ONLY ONE backing you?
cool word play, it works only pick is that it read a bit choppy.
Your glory days are over old timer, u sound like a fool,
Yeah, yeah, we would have got laughed off the site……….& u had to walk uphill both ways to school.
yup this made me laugh
Whole site thinks you’re a clown, even Art had you looking dead soft,
give lay interviews with a mag, & questions on why I shouldn’t blow his fucking head off.
didnt love this only because i thought the reference was already brought up and the first flip was better.
Moods swings or not, I still think you’re the biggest faggot ever,
Yeah im bipolar.. part of me wants to cut u in half while the others tryna stitch u back together.
this was cool feel like its been done together more of a self hype type thing doe
I hate you but also care.. maybe I’ll consider you a close friend,
But I really hope he doesn’t take colostomy this time, cuz he’ll just bitch up and ghost again.
weakest bar of your verse, i love the idea/concept you were going for i just dont like the overal bar if that makese sense.



Vote Len

Better overall verse lay had some misses and some basic shit i thought len had fewer and better hits . cool battle.

[Mac]

ur concert would never sell tix, cuz folks ain’t a believer in scrubs
& we all know that Len Bias, plus everyone here seizure on drugs
sorry no idea who is len bias and even after reading the wiki page i think this was a stretch

beef w/ Lay? That’s a DOA, yeah I’m clapping this mark
pussy thought he was a baller, turned out he was lacking the heart
not feeling it

faggots get sparked, put me in coach so I can devour cats
spent 60 mins n Red every verse you’ve dropped, and I’m pissed I can’t get that Auerbach
coo

so stop bumping ya gums, this bipolar pussy gets slumped n it’s done
he tried to bridge the gap between us, while we all hope he ends up jumping from one
this is too basic for me to like it. I prefer Kill's version of abridgement. that one was dope

no one knows who this geek even is, catch a beating & quit
finally started making a name for yourself, til Soule ended up deleting the shit
nice lol

get killed against Lay, the blood of a coward’s what I’m spilling today
so fall back.. cuz getting aggressive with me isn’t accost you’re willing to pay
okay I guess

ya Napoleon complex is bogus & nonsense, I’m taking ur head & stomping
then I’ll break every Bonaparte, just to prove this motherfucker is a dead man Joaquin
loved this

vs

Ya rhymes are trash bro.. this rapping shit isn’t your bag,
The first time I liked anything u typed art was pretending to be u in the mag.
nice lol. a bit choppy in the middle, lacked a comma

Plus your wife & daughter both getting it, them sluts str8 fiends,
Funny that you came back with 30... and I'll be coming back when she's 18.
not feelin this one. 30 what?

We never considered lay elite wtf?? Stop acting like a faggot dude,
& this partisan credible.. cuz why think you’re dope when spits the ONLY ONE backing you?
partisan credible.. a bit forced man. but props for the attempt

Your glory days are over old timer, u sound like a fool,
Yeah, yeah, we would have got laughed off the site……….& u had to walk uphill both ways to school.
cool

Whole site thinks you’re a clown, even Art had you looking dead soft,
give lay interviews with a mag, & questions on why I shouldn’t blow his fucking head off.
ehh a mag one agaiin? It felt a bit statementish at the end anyways. would not have included this one myself

Moods swings or not, I still think you’re the biggest faggot ever,
Yeah im bipolar.. part of me wants to cut u in half while the others tryna stitch u back together.
this is decent

I hate you but also care.. maybe I’ll consider you a close friend,
But I really hope he doesn’t take colostomy this time, cuz he’ll just bitch up and ghost again.
pls not colostomy again


I got Lay here with 4 vs 3. I did like lenoxs verse a lot but at the end of the day, I feel like Lay was a bit more consistent. I tried my best to like the partisan credible, but I felt like the placement was choppy. That probably could have been the dealbreaker.

v/lay

[Exalted.]

Auerbach
Seizure (for the personal tie in)
Accost was OK
Some played ideas hurt you. not flipped creative enough.
like bridge, bone apart come to mind.. not my cup

Partisan was decent/creative
opener personal
the angles attacking him kinda outweighed lays wordplay
kinda wish you varied more..

V Lenox. Close though..

[Zunto]

And this is the guy you people just voted into the HoF lmaoooo


Wow

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Lenox bodied this fagit

[Fresh]

ur concert would never sell tix, cuz folks ain’t a believer in scrubs
& we all know that Len Bias, plus everyone here seizure on drugs
not a fan of this. and yes i get the sees your wordplay
beef w/ Lay? That’s a DOA, yeah I’m clapping this mark
pussy thought he was a baller, turned out he was lacking the heart
not a fan
faggots get sparked, put me in coach so I can devour cats
spent 60 mins n Red every verse you’ve dropped, and I’m pissed I can’t get that Auerbach
do you have a phd in basketball trivia lmao this was cool though even though i had to look it up
so stop bumping ya gums, this bipolar pussy gets slumped n it’s done
he tried to bridge the gap between us, while we all hope he ends up jumping from one
outdated concept not flipped freshly
no one knows who this geek even is, catch a beating & quit
finally started making a name for yourself, til Soule ended up deleting the shit
loll cool
get killed against Lay, the blood of a coward’s what I’m spilling today
so fall back.. cuz getting aggressive with me isn’t accost you’re willing to pay
light
ya Napoleon complex is bogus & nonsense, I’m taking ur head & stomping
then I’ll break every Bonaparte, just to prove this motherfucker is a dead man Joaquin
fire

vs

Ya rhymes are trash bro.. this rapping shit isn’t your bag,
The first time I liked anything u typed art was pretending to be u in the mag.
solid
Plus your wife & daughter both getting it, them sluts str8 fiends,
Funny that you came back with 30... and I'll be coming back when she's 18.
not a fan
We never considered lay elite wtf?? Stop acting like a faggot dude,
& this partisan credible.. cuz why think you’re dope when spits the ONLY ONE backing you?
i fuck with it. i dont think this would transfer to audio but as a text bar i dig it
Your glory days are over old timer, u sound like a fool,
Yeah, yeah, we would have got laughed off the site……….& u had to walk uphill both ways to school.
lmao nice
Whole site thinks you’re a clown, even Art had you looking dead soft,
give lay interviews with a mag, & questions on why I shouldn’t blow his fucking head off.
not a fan
Moods swings or not, I still think you’re the biggest faggot ever,
Yeah im bipolar.. part of me wants to cut u in half while the others tryna stitch u back together.
i dig this
I hate you but also care.. maybe I’ll consider you a close friend,
But I really hope he doesn’t take colostomy this time, cuz he’ll just bitch up and ghost again.
you just used a take colostomy wp lol this one didnt really work though

cool battle here. Maybe the best verse I've seen from Lenny. Thought he had the better overall verse

v/ Lenny

[miracle]

Lay-Auerbach alright, bridge the gap was ok.. name for urself was cool.. closer was dope
Lenox had his opener was a good start, spit backing u, both ways to school..bipolar

This was a good battle .. I did think Lenox had the stronger verse with more/better attempts.. so vote LENOX

[Lenox]

@Wuxia close

[Art.]

Lenox Wins 5-1
Lenox 4-1
Lay Doubt 0-1