STRIKE A POSE RD 1 WK6 Art(6-0) Vs Slayerr (0-0) (Art Wins)

[Art.]

Strike A Pose


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THIS WEEK NO THEME, JUST A REGULAR PIC.

YA'LL KNOW THE RULES.





@Slayerr R
@Xime
@Art.

[Slayerr.]

Edited. Into Verse

[Art.]

edited into verse.
@Slayerr

[Slayerr.]

https://i.imgur.com/K4IXSZe.jpg


Art looks like a skank, your picture is such jokes, props
this faggot needs to stop playing red bull go karts n actually try to touch a soap box
I’m turning the clock, cheesy lines won’t get you much so stop
Coz Art always smells defeat - then his nostrils get friction burn from his sock
Arts a peado, the terror on the face shows that kids shook
Yeti gets caught by the police coz he leaves a trail like big foot
You’d get murdered at a free Palestine rally by that army
Watch them record it and watch art cry on camera resembling Ariel Helwani
Ur hair is tragic, ur getting overwhelmed by the feelings I’m bringing on
Next time you tie a top knot it’ll be the noose you’re swinging from

[Art.]

https://i.ibb.co/tJwvQqt/IMG-4835.jpg

My girls a dime of course, & ugly wouldn't even describe that wife of yours
But by the looks of it, its not the first time uve found urself inside a horse
I'm an animal, openly sicker, have her suck my dick & hope that u kiss her
prop her up pool side & archer back...while ur just there posing for pictures
vacay got u feelin breezes, drinks flowin, catching tans on new beaches
But if this is your last resort.... then im cutting your life into pieces
thinkin he was built for a fight, scrawny AF, il open up ur ribs w/ a knife
u thought u were cool w/ that bo flex, but uve never hit a gym in ur life
kids a believer, u beating me is a fantasy, u must be hittin the reefer
w.e i centaur dude in half ,like u pretendin to be a mythical creature


Good Luck homie.. ( I'll edit the pic into your verse )

[miracle]

Soapbox was cool, I can’t give u any love for a defeat line.. I liked the yeti wordplay but it didn’t hit hard. Art cry wasn’t really pic related.. closer was alright.. that kinda punch is done to death but I’ll give a lil love for the personal touch
Arts opener was cool start, pool side was cool, last resort I liked the idea didn’t hit that hard tho.. bowflex was good

Vote art better hits better misses,, cool read tho

[Wuxia]

Art looks like a skank, your picture is such jokes, props
this faggot needs to stop playing red bull go karts n actually try to touch a soap box

Haha. Tbh Art has a very similar hairstyle to my own. However, he appears to be more masculine. I don't have the same physical build, and it's very difficult for me to grow the same kind of beard. He is also an attractive guy. And a bit taller. There would be plenty of legroom for me in that wagon. So it's okay to laugh in this regard.

I’m turning the clock, cheesy lines won’t get you much so stop
Coz Art always smells defeat - then his nostrils get friction burn from his sock

Lmao. A defeat line. That really takes me back. But it was an intentional flip. Poking fun at itself and still managing to get as much out of it as possible. This was cool. I'm big into satire and this is what I was able to appreciate about the bar.

Arts a peado, the terror on the face shows that kids shook
Yeti gets caught by the police coz he leaves a trail like big foot

Lmao. That kid does not look happy about what's going on at all.

You’d get murdered at a free Palestine rally by that army
Watch them record it and watch art cry on camera resembling Ariel Helwani

This was fire, but you used "watch" too much in the same breath. You could have easily just replaced one of them with "see". It was a dope bar, but suffered from lazy wording, maybe not lazy, but at the very least it was somethingthat could of been fixed on the spot had you dedicated a couple more minutes to revision.

Ur hair is tragic, ur getting overwhelmed by the feelings I’m bringing on
Next time you tie a top knot it’ll be the noose you’re swinging from


Lmfao. This was fire. Because I have a top knot. And it's actually more pronounced than Art's. So this hit differently for me. Great bar






My girls a dime of course, & ugly wouldn't even describe that wife of yours
But by the looks of it, its not the first time uve found urself inside a horse

Lmao. Dope.

I'm an animal, openly sicker, have her suck my dick & hope that u kiss her
prop her up pool side & archer back...while ur just there posing for pictures

Fire.

vacay got u feelin breezes, drinks flowin, catching tans on new beaches
But if this is your last resort.... then im cutting your life into pieces

Decent.

thinkin he was built for a fight, scrawny AF, il open up ur ribs w/ a knife
u thought u were cool w/ that bo flex, but uve never hit a gym in ur life

Nice.

kids a believer, u beating me is a fantasy, u must be hittin the reefer
w.e i centaur dude in half ,like u pretendin to be a mythical creature

Cool.


2 entertaining verses. Both pics had a lot of ammo for the other to use, which made it more enjoyable to read.

I didn't really dislike one bar over the other. I didn't see any clear misses, both dudes connected rather well. I just think Art landed his with a bit more emphasis without any glaring mistakes on his part.

v-Art

[daveDILLY]

not wat i picutured art wud look like lol
i liked soap box and yeti from slay
they were his best lines
and the ones worth mentioning
art was throwing some hits
i liked them all cept last resort
wasnt bad but no good like the others
winner art

[Mac]

Art looks like a skank, your picture is such jokes, props
this faggot needs to stop playing red bull go karts n actually try to touch a soap box
nice

I’m turning the clock, cheesy lines won’t get you much so stop
Coz Art always smells defeat - then his nostrils get friction burn from his sock
this was cool first time i've seen this

Arts a peado, the terror on the face shows that kids shook
Yeti gets caught by the police coz he leaves a trail like big foot
not feeling this

You’d get murdered at a free Palestine rally by that army
Watch them record it and watch art cry on camera resembling Ariel Helwani
this was cool but missing the pic reference

Ur hair is tragic, ur getting overwhelmed by the feelings I’m bringing on
Next time you tie a top knot it’ll be the noose you’re swinging from
a bit predictable but nice

vs

My girls a dime of course, & ugly wouldn't even describe that wife of yours
But by the looks of it, its not the first time uve found urself inside a horse
lmaooo

I'm an animal, openly sicker, have her suck my dick & hope that u kiss her
prop her up pool side & archer back...while ur just there posing for pictures
nice

vacay got u feelin breezes, drinks flowin, catching tans on new beaches
But if this is your last resort.... then im cutting your life into pieces
okayish

thinkin he was built for a fight, scrawny AF, il open up ur ribs w/ a knife
u thought u were cool w/ that bo flex, but uve never hit a gym in ur life
decent

kids a believer, u beating me is a fantasy, u must be hittin the reefer
w.e i centaur dude in half ,like u pretendin to be a mythical creature
umm

This was a cool battle. honestly pretty equal and I almost got slayerr on this one but honestly the missing pic reference in ariel helwani line took points off when it comes to deciding on a close pic battle.. just my prrsonal preference. there was a lot of ammo in that pic

got art

[Spree]

Soap box was cool. Ariel was aight. Thought the top knot play was nice


Vs


In a horse was fire. Archer back was dope last resort was light but funny. No flex was aight. Opener was brutal


I got art though with the hard hits and harder misses. Nice stuff fellas

[MV]

Slayerr
Art looks like a skank, your picture is such jokes, props
this faggot needs to stop playing red bull go karts n actually try to touch a soap box
lol nice opener
I’m turning the clock, cheesy lines won’t get you much so stop
Coz Art always smells defeat - then his nostrils get friction burn from his sock
i was going to get on you about a defeat like but the feet fetish type finisher was funny
Arts a peado, the terror on the face shows that kids shook
Yeti gets caught by the police coz he leaves a trail like big foot
eh
You’d get murdered at a free Palestine rally by that army
Watch them record it and watch art cry on camera resembling Ariel Helwani
i liked the concept but the punch was missing something.i think i know where you were going with this but the tie in to the pic should have been a bit more pronounce imo
Ur hair is tragic, ur getting overwhelmed by the feelings I’m bringing on
Next time you tie a top knot it’ll be the noose you’re swinging from
ok finisher i liked the wording on this bar

vs


Art

My girls a dime of course, & ugly wouldn't even describe that wife of yours
But by the looks of it, its not the first time uve found urself inside a horse
ok opener
I'm an animal, openly sicker, have her suck my dick & hope that u kiss her
prop her up pool side & archer back...while ur just there posing for pictures
TRIFLING!!!!LMAOOOOO
vacay got u feelin breezes, drinks flowin, catching tans on new beaches
But if this is your last resort.... then im cutting your life into pieces
build up was good but i didnt like this
thinkin he was built for a fight, scrawny AF, il open up ur ribs w/ a knife
u thought u were cool w/ that bo flex, but uve never hit a gym in ur life
lol ok
kids a believer, u beating me is a fantasy, u must be hittin the reefer
w.e i centaur dude in half ,like u pretendin to be a mythical creature
centore/centaur is a bit of a reach but close enough


i had to go over with one a few times. at first i wanted to vote for Art, then i was looking at slayerr. those first 2 punches were dope if that had set the tone for the rest of the bars this would have definitely been yours battle. but i think Art was more consistent. but i felt Slayerr took a bit too many risk with this verse.

v/Art

[Spree]

Art wins. Good shit fellas