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    Enter The Nebula.



    I keep having this dream.....

    I'm walking down this long hallway. It is dark but has dim lighting, I can't really tell. It feels like a dream, but my sub conscience wont allow me to make that decision. I believe It's real. This hallway never seems to end.
    The walls are in a color I cant quite make out. It's red and blackish but also not. It is not a color I have ever seen before but it feels to surreal to distinguish.
    maybe it's a dark burgundy. Maybe not.
    I'm walking down this hallway and notice a statue ahead that is so beautifully crafted. I cant seem to take my eyes off it, but I can't stop walking towards the end of this hallway. It never seems to end.
    Where am I going? I want to leave this place.
    I admire this statue as I'm slowly getting closer to it, but can only look straight ahead towards this never ending hallway.
    As I walk pass this statue I feel a sense of dread that feels so real that I'm terrified but also calm at the same time.
    I just keep walking.
    This inanimate statue, why is it here? It is so beautifully crafted.
    I walk past the statue and continue down this dark hallway looking straight ahead. I want to look back but can't.
    The Statue's head turns to follow me down the Hallway as I walk past it.

    I will never escape this matrix. It will basically enslave my brain Next.
    Stay set. I'm reaching for the pinnacle of an Apex.
    So I equate stress to A theory that never takes rest.
    There is no reality. Reality is what you make it.
    This thought? Can't seem to break it. Experiment till it makes sense.
    Wait, shit.

    "How are you feeling today?"
    "I keep having this dream. I don't want to fall asleep anymore, I feel like I'm losing my grip on reality"
    "You have been making much progress, Don't you agree?"
    "I'm not so sure, Everything seems so real, even now"
    "This is real, You have been coming here everyday for three years now, Would you like me to prove this is reality?"
    "Even if you can prove it doesn't make this real, We do not realize we are dreaming until we wake up"
    "That is an astute observation. I'll tell you what, Look at the clock, what time is it right now?"
    "3:23"
    "so then, If it is 3:23 PM how can this be a dream?"

    The telescope only shows those things at a distance. The universe dimensions are vastly suspended.
    If you're looking you can't miss it. When you listen it sounds tremendous.
    Hieroglyphics to witness. Love. Forgiveness.
    This pursuit is relentless. The truth of religions.
    Not to mention there's no beginning or an end to A vision.
    My existence is only limited by clueless precision.
    Youth and ambition. Losing and Winning.
    Each chapter is amended by a useless submission.
    Ruthless addiction. Why try defying the limits.
    Even the smallest cricket is disguised by it's brilliance.
    We are thrown into the abyss like a kite or a discus.
    Such a beautiful horizon just off in the distance.

    I just keep walking down this hallway, It never seems to end.
    The walls don't even seem real anymore.
    I keep walking, but I feel so panicked. I want to run away from this place but I just keep walking.
    I see someone further down this dark hallway. Hello?! HELLO?! no answer.
    I am closer. I feel panicked.
    I notice it is the same statue I just passed, it is so beautifully crafted. But how can this be?
    This hallway never seems to end.

    I'm lost in a dream. A glitch in the conciseness stream.
    It's all that it seems. Or is it? Yelling HELP as I Scream.
    gnihtyreve si sdrawkcab. Ma I llits ni a peels?
    PLEH EM! I peek gnillaf dna siht noynac si peed.
    M'i gnileef decinap dna t'nac ehtareb!
    M'i degamad dna oot kaew, ydobemos pleh em esaelp!

    "So how does that prove that this is reality?"
    "When you are dreaming you can not make out numbers clearly, It is a side effect of the Dimethyitryptamine that is being released from your pineal gland during REM cycle sleeping"
    "What if my brain released too much of it, and that's the reason I can't seem to differentiate reality from illusion?"
    "That is not the case, I assure you this is reality. It is 3:2^z and you are on my couch talking to me"

    Said the beautifully crafted statue.

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    Re: Enter The Nebula.

    Very dope. I’d suggest posting smaller verse thou . Its like pulling teeth to get feedback here .

    “ Hieroglyphics to witness. Love. Forgiveness.
    This pursuit is relentless. The truth of religions.
    Not to mention there's no beginning or an end to A vision.
    My existence is only limited by clueless precision.
    Youth and ambition. Losing and Winning.”

    Segment was amazing yo

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    Re: Enter The Nebula.

    i made sum Trap ver$u$

    1

    im in da game
    player 1
    phoenix suns
    in da trap
    a caddilac
    out da window w/ a mak
    im bak from da sto
    like a pro
    in my throwback
    its called cookie dough

    2

    im in da south
    its gritty
    diamondz in my mouth
    all da crimes not pretty
    walk another route
    got cops on da watch
    murder never stops
    all for a playstation
    black ops

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