Death comes fast

[Midwest]

Yiggity yo

Thoughts break,like waves off the shore
Once All the allure from the segalls to ocean floor
Today, a modern bore, back hurts from honest sores
Often torn ..with the choices I’ve made
rejoicing the days when I was dope ‘n insane.
Soaking in pain, all my hoping, I can’t hope it away
My hearts embers stoking the flames.
The Joker no Wayne, try to Stand Up to the cruel laughter
Fatherless,a true bastard,thought I grew past it
Attemp to go foward always seem to move backwards
Slightly Survived a few disasters
Hereafter,don’t matter when the present is now.
Looose the resentments and doubts
Life is definition of WOW ,enjoy everything now
Before it’s to late and your sent to the clouds

[od killa]

Mar1ey Drug$ [ PEACE KID ] likez u

[Spree]

Mar1ey Drug$ [ PEACE KID ] likez u

You need to read the rules. Or I’m banning you

[od killa]

NO BAN

[Spree]

NO BAN

I’m deleting your posts that aren’t feedback.. if I have to delete one more you are gone.

[Slashe]

Hi Midwest. Overall, the flow in this drop seemed to be put together nicely. For most of the verse, it keep my interest. The entire passage did manage to stay on topic which is definitely what I check for in topical type of drops. Thought it was a bit short, but it was a descent read.