WK20: (6-4) Art vs. (0-0) VERBALIZE(Art Wins)

[Wuxia]

Regular Battle
Punches due NO DUE DATES
Voting ends on NO DUE DATES

Rebuttal Option

both competitors must agree to it at time of check-in
format is A, B, B, A (A posts first, B drops next, B posts follow-up, A drops final bar)

You have 24hrs from when battle was set to agree on rebuttal battle


You know the rules, if not, refer to the rule thread.

@Art.
@VERBALIZE

[Art.]

Verbs
A herb

[VERBALIZE]

Had no clue this battle was even on.
Can I still partake in it?

[miracle]

Had no clue this battle was even on.
Can I still partake in it?

For sure. Get your bar posted

[VERBALIZE]

The black sheep, you can be missing like the milk carton,
An athlete with the sprinting, and I'm still pa(r)thing,
Your math weak, it's just addition and it's still jargon,
I don't let the mac speak, but I'll find a 'window' and it's gets dark, son

Sporadic marksman, like you wanna kill me over text for,
My flow has more arms than Dr Oc, verbal Tech stored,
Hit up spiderman and have these red and white Dots line up like connect four,
The way I'm hunting game, it's a dead sport,
My swagger has parkisons, it'll just flex more,
But I'll park in son's driveway and say forget law,

I'm thinking I should murder more,
Your shit gets submerged in ice like the slurpee straw,
C4 gets furthered stored in your dirty draws,
And you don't carry green but you're a herbivore,

[Spree]

Had no clue this battle was even on.
Can I still partake in it?

Yo dawg, this is a one bar punch league. Check out some of the battles in the archives to get an idea what’s going on homie

Welcome to RB

[Art.]

Fat fuck HAD a twin in real life, when he thinks about him his sugar still spikes
See now I don’t know if verbatim….but word for word that’s what it feels like

Welcome to RB

[miracle]

The black sheep, you can be missing like the milk carton,
An athlete with the sprinting, and I'm still pa(r)thing,
Your math weak, it's just addition and it's still jargon,
I don't let the mac speak, but I'll find a 'window' and it's gets dark, son

Sporadic marksman, like you wanna kill me over text for,
My flow has more arms than Dr Oc, verbal Tech stored,
Hit up spiderman and have these red and white Dots line up like connect four,
The way I'm hunting game, it's a dead sport,
My swagger has parkisons, it'll just flex more,
But I'll park in son's driveway and say forget law,

I'm thinking I should murder more,
Your shit gets submerged in ice like the slurpee straw,
C4 gets furthered stored in your dirty draws,
And you don't carry green but you're a herbivore,

U need to edit this down to one bar bro… this league is 1 bar a week… 1bar = 2lines

[Spree]

What ever I got art here for actually dissing his opponent

[Slashe]

Verbalize has a lot of filler lines in his verse against Arts punch. His verse was more of a self-glorified verse than a direct hit verses Art. Art was more direct and creative to with the verbalize / verbatim wordplay. If Verbalize is allowed to edit/ drop a 1-2 punch then I can update my vote and explanation, but until then:

Vote - Art.

[MV]

I'm thinking I should murder more,
Your shit gets submerged in ice like the slurpee straw,
vs
Fat fuck HAD a twin in real life, when he thinks about him his sugar still spikes
See now I don’t know if verbatim….but word for word that’s what it feels like

lol sugar still spikes. naw that shit was funny i have Art taking this one

a/Art

[daveDILLY]

art takes this
but the other dude aint bad
just need to flip that shit 2hit harder
slurpee was cool,
there was other lines that had chance
art just worked it better

winner art

[Spree]

Art wins