''THE RAVEN''

[Echelon]

A orchid blooms in the pasture, doom is the rapture
Many missiles are falling down as the master
I am disaster/evisceration.. slash your face in..
Bash your face in.. masturbation...
War has begun.. and i don't fear it
CLEAR IT..or I'll PERSERVERANCE..
It's between GOD AND THE GOVERNMENT
What did the GOVER.MEANT WHEN IT SAID it wanted to KilL GOD..?
It meant it..everlasting war.. everlasting gore
THE RAVEN STOOD THERE AS THE EVERLASTING POUR//
EVERYTHING WENT EXTINCT EXCEPT THE RAVEN..//

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FOREVERMORE..

[Slashe]

Hi Echelon. Not to hate on your drop but this seemed to be a bit simplistic. I think the first and last couple of lines were the strongest in the verse. It did flow descent, but I believe that the middle of the passage could have had some stronger content in it.

[EyeDealIstic]

This was mens ass hair.