That's why I love him

[Lady Poet]

He put me in the flyest car
Making sure I'm tight
My man by my side
Everything's alright
He call me on the phone
even on his time
That's why I love him
He don't play no game
He spend money to his name
That's why I love him
My man gives me anything I want
Phone calls, Shopping malls
That's why I love him
He can't afford it
But he do what's best for his lady
He's my everything
He's my King
He do it all for me

[Slashe]

Hi LP, drop wasn't bad, but it is a little simplistic. Flow and topic were on point how both you and your man hold each other done. I think the title was suitable for the drop as well.

[Lady Poet]

Hello Love, thanks for the feedback.

[_Lyrics]

Hey lady
this drop needs some work, the repetition of 'thats why I love him' was really unneeded and if you are going to repeat I always recommend italicizing it so it stands apart from your verse. work a bit on flow and content and you'll be on your way.

[Lady Poet]

Hello Lyrics, thanks for the feedback.