Ryno vs MV(OPEN FOR VOTES)

[Ryno]

10 lines
Due by Monday midnight

[MV]

bet. check

[Ryno]

Im the myth I’m the man…so I’ll kill ‘em where he stands

Whether a it’s by the clip or the hands…

I’m sayin…

Ayooooooo!!!

He a simp to the fullest, we all know chick’s regret fakes
If this ‘beta max’ out on style, I bet it’s as vintage as cassette tapes
Night time ur life line’ll kick the shit, dump n go yo
The pump’ll blow bro, u’ll catch a night cap w/ a bigger audience than unc n ocho
All that bark n no heart, yeah I’m gettin ballsy, sure
If he talk he’s floored, I move squares like him upon entrance like doggy doors
I suck at geometry but drawin rounds my only hobby
Only surface area I can relate to, is the lake I’ve decided to dump his body
Tired of tricks like u, always pretending ur dooms brutal
Last time u pulled the stick to stay alive, u almost drowned w/ ur pool noodle

[MV]

Yeah I’m steady w/ the tote but w/ the blade I’m ready for the blow
Homie If u gain an edge after this match, it’s gonna be a machete to ur throat

i pray and hope that you dont battle me with this lack of intensity and lame ass flow
or the only edging u'll be doing is haven ur masturbation ruined...to think u "came this close"

Got 10 in the chamber

u got 10 in the chamber? ALL that gas with no jewls dropping i bet
i got 10 in the chamber too, so i like your odds of winning the first round....of russian roulette
ur service is an elite tradition, knowing the documents u'd give ur life for is a wise decision
you want to uphold the constitution so a gunhole will help you focus on the body and de composition
got a girl and you love her, ill open up her mind and legs traveling the globe for a summer
if she around me i fuck her, created the perfect atmosphere 4 engaging orbital thrusters
i'd fold Ryno with my eyes closed, hands tied, blind fold
u acting John Wayne till this Gacy the resemblance to reports the guy that survived wrote
(all homo intended)

[Aero]

Night time ur life line’ll kick the shit, dump n go yo
The pump’ll blow bro, u’ll catch a night cap w/ a bigger audience than unc n ocho

Coool

Tired of tricks like u, always pretending ur dooms brutal
Last time u pulled the stick to stay alive, u almost drowned w/ ur pool noodle

Pool noodle never referred to as a stick but I liked this.

Surface area bar cool too





i pray and hope that you dont battle me with this lack of intensity and lame ass flow
or the only edging u'll be doing is haven ur masturbation ruined...to think u "came this close"

No you didn't do this


The rest of the verse was interesting. Not bad.

[Lady Poet]

both came so fresh and so clean
I felt like MV ending more creative compare to Ryno
vote-MV

[miracle]

Night time ur life line’ll kick the shit, dump n go yo
The pump’ll blow bro, u’ll catch a night cap w/ a bigger audience than unc n ocho

Coool

Tired of tricks like u, always pretending ur dooms brutal
Last time u pulled the stick to stay alive, u almost drowned w/ ur pool noodle

Pool noodle never referred to as a stick but I liked this.

Surface area bar cool too





i pray and hope that you dont battle me with this lack of intensity and lame ass flow
or the only edging u'll be doing is haven ur masturbation ruined...to think u "came this close"

No you didn't do this


The rest of the verse was interesting. Not bad.

And your vote is for ??

[Aero]

Just my presence is enough tbh.

I'll vote but next time thank me for being here first.

Ryon wins.

[mal diction]

All that bark n no heart, yeah I’m gettin ballsy, sure
If he talk he’s floored, I move squares like him upon entrance like doggy doors
str8

I suck at geometry but drawin rounds my only hobby
Only surface area I can relate to, is the lake I’ve decided to dump his body
picking up the pace... i like this

Tired of tricks like u, always pretending ur dooms brutal
Last time u pulled the stick to stay alive, u almost drowned w/ ur pool noodle
a repeat on gun bars..


your verse had poor finishes(first 2 puns) and redundancies("All that bark n no heart"... "he talk he’s floored") like it's your first time rapping


vs



u got 10 in the chamber? ALL that gas with no jewls dropping i bet
i got 10 in the chamber too, so i like your odds of winning the first round....of russian roulette
wait.. if you win you stay alive

MV this was the worst i've see you come


v-ryno

[Virbius]

Another close battle, kind of a style clash so I could happily see it go either way. Ryno’s flow was nicer. MV was a little verbose without enough internal rhymes to keep the flow going. MV’s best punches were better, Ryno was more consistent. I got MV winning again, but only just.

Vote- MV

[YG]

Im the myth I’m the man…so I’ll kill ‘em where he stands

Whether a it’s by the clip or the hands…

BARS

I’m sayin…

Ayooooooo!!!

He a simp to the fullest, we all know chick’s regret fakes
If this ‘beta max’ out on style, I bet it’s as vintage as cassette tapes
Cool opener
Night time ur life line’ll kick the shit, dump n go yo
The pump’ll blow bro, u’ll catch a night cap w/ a bigger audience than unc n ocho
Dope bar
All that bark n no heart, yeah I’m gettin ballsy, sure
If he talk he’s floored, I move squares like him upon entrance like doggy doors
I digg it, fresh concept. Coulda worded better imo, seen a lot harsher wording from u. ‘Upon’ kinda loses it for me. But I digg
I suck at geometry but drawin rounds my only hobby
Only surface area I can relate to, is the lake I’ve decided to dump his body
Aiiight weakest so far
Tired of tricks like u, always pretending ur dooms brutal
Last time u pulled the stick to stay alive, u almost drowned w/ ur pool noodle
Nahh I like the concept but never seen one of those called a stick. But I dig what you’re going for

i pray and hope that you dont battle me with this lack of intensity and lame ass flow
or the only edging u'll be doing is haven ur masturbation ruined...to think u "came this close"
Dope
u got 10 in the chamber? ALL that gas with no jewls dropping i bet
i got 10 in the chamber too, so i like your odds of winning the first round....of russian roulette
Dope
ur service is an elite tradition, knowing the documents u'd give ur life for is a wise decision
you want to uphold the constitution so a gunhole will help you focus on the body and de composition
Kinda lost me
got a girl and you love her, ill open up her mind and legs traveling the globe for a summer
if she around me i fuck her, created the perfect atmosphere 4 engaging orbital thrusters
Nahh
i'd fold Ryno with my eyes closed, hands tied, blind fold
u acting John Wayne till this Gacy the resemblance to reports the guy that survived wrote
Kinda drawn out, I dig the Gacy wordplay wish you woulda done it better
(all homo intended)

So I got this at Unc and Ocho vs MV’s opening two bars

Beta max out was cool too

Between those two I’ll give it to MV for a lil harder of a drop

Dope work fellaz

[Ion Metatron]

He a simp to the fullest, we all know chick’s regret fakes
If this ‘beta max’ out on style, I bet it’s as vintage as cassette tapes
Ehhh a lil stretched but I get it.. decent opener

Night time ur life line’ll kick the shit, dump n go yo
The pump’ll blow bro, u’ll catch a night cap w/ a bigger audience than unc n ocho
Not bad.. had more potential then you put in it

All that bark n no heart, yeah I’m gettin ballsy, sure
If he talk he’s floored, I move squares like him upon entrance like doggy doors
Much better.. tight
I suck at geometry but drawin rounds my only hobby
Only surface area I can relate to, is the lake I’ve decided to dump his body
A lil stretched.. decent

Tired of tricks like u, always pretending ur dooms brutal
Last time u pulled the stick to stay alive, u almost drowned w/ ur pool noodle
ehh.. weak closer..

i pray and hope that you dont battle me with this lack of intensity and lame ass flow
or the only edging u'll be doing is haven ur masturbation ruined...to think u "came this close"
Damn that was stretched as fuck

u got 10 in the chamber? ALL that gas with no jewls dropping i bet
i got 10 in the chamber too, so i like your odds of winning the first round....of russian roulette
Ehhh.. damn.. stretched

ur service is an elite tradition, knowing the documents u'd give ur life for is a wise decision
you want to uphold the constitution so a gunhole will help you focus on the body and de composition
Got damn you stretched that crazy.. nah.. no good

got a girl and you love her, ill open up her mind and legs traveling the globe for a summer
if she around me i fuck her, created the perfect atmosphere 4 engaging orbital thrusters
Nah

i'd fold Ryno with my eyes closed, hands tied, blind fold
u acting John Wayne till this Gacy the resemblance to reports the guy that survived wrote
Decent closer but stretched

Good battle fellas.. MV had pretty good concepts but finished them poorly.. and the cadence or flow of the peice was very eeehh.. I gave this to Ryhno for Better punches, better flow & Better concept finishes.
Vote= Ryhno

Good job to both.