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@miracle
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you should diet quick. the stomach easily covers your inner thighs.
This clown been penny-pinchin so long 'IT's face look like penny-wise
but you won't scare many guys. last week's status. how can we fear that
I walked in battlin with drunken-fist, u keep askin where the beer's at
Is this panthera mir-kat? pussy either way. the femine type
he exhibited di-morphism. n that's before I skinned him alive
It's Sly how I Snipe the fakes. Stop the lies or get demolition man to face
You been on a pump ad-Ventura skin n bone with a body that always looked that way
Ain't hard to bash n champs. Come into battles with cash in hand
last food for thought you brought came after you had to cash in stamps.
Your easy work my dude… everything u write is trash
My punches leaving voters in stitches…wtf you think I’ll do to a slash
The 9 will rip thru you,.. mir will murder your ass
Hollow points send you to a better place like being bumped to first class
Y bother making fun... he’s getting laid out in the mud
The only people ragging on him will be paramedics soaking up the blood
I’ll taekwon-do this faggot bro… kick ya head off into a spiral
Bring the foot to your face like getting confronted by ninja turtles rival
You think I fear this queer?? pleaseee I’m built for combat
If slash alarming to me, hes screaming n showing police where I’m at
Last edited by miracle; March 21st, 2024 at 09:06 PM
you should diet quick. the stomach easily covers your inner thighs.
This clown been penny-pinchin so long 'IT's face look like penny-wise
IT the clown?... the wording needs work
but you won't scare many guys. last week's status. how can we fear that
I walked in battlin with drunken-fist, u keep askin where the beer's at
the wording again
Is this panthera mir-kat? pussy either way. the femine type
he exhibited di-morphism. n that's before I skinned him alive
i've seem mir-kat used before but yours was a better take
as for the second line.. "n that's after" would ave been better
It's Sly how I Snipe the fakes. Stop the lies or get demolition man to face
You been on a pump ad-Ventura skin n bone with a body that always looked that way
this could be alot better... no pun intended but miracle aint skinny
Ain't hard to bash n champs. Come into battles with cash in hand
last food for thought you brought came after you had to cash in stamps.
this makes not sence.. sorry bro
vs
Your easy work my dude… everything u write is trash
My punches leaving voters in stitches…wtf you think I’ll do to a slash
dope
The 9 will rip thru you,.. mir will murder your ass
Hollow points send you to a better place like being bumped to first class
new.. see you tri to take the first class cocepts...
Y bother making fun... he’s getting laid out in the mud
The only people ragging on him will be paramedics soaking up the blood
i can tell the is a key ... not bad though
I’ll taekwon-do this faggot bro… kick ya head off into a spiral
Bring the foot to your face like getting confronted by ninja turtles rival
a foot clan punch.. not bad though.. like i said.. can tell this is a key
You think I fear this queer?? pleaseee I’m built for combat
If slash alarming to me, hes screaming n showing police where I’m at
no miracle no... bad mir bad
overall i got miracle winning this easily
vote- miracle
aka Sorrow: the Broken Wing
It's Sly how I Snipe the fakes. Stop the lies or get demolition man to face
You been on a pump ad-Ventura skin n bone with a body that always looked that way
Ain't hard to bash n champs. Come into battles with cash in hand
last food for thought you brought came after you had to cash in stamps.
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I’ll taekwon-do this faggot bro… kick ya head off into a spiral
Bring the foot to your face like getting confronted by ninja turtles rival
But Miracle's verse was more consistently written and easier to understand.
Vote - Miracle.
I think like slash had some dope af concepts but just didn’t execute them that cleanly which was a shame. It was a bit wordy and the actually delivery lacked impact on a lot of the bars. Miracles was okay enough for the win but no haymaker in his verse I think miracles closer was lotb
V/mir
Ain't hard to bash n champs. Come into battles with cash in hand
last food for thought you brought came after you had to cash in stamps.
vs
Your easy work my dude… everything u write is trash
My punches leaving voters in stitches…wtf you think I’ll do to a slash
Y bother making fun... he’s getting laid out in the mud
The only people ragging on him will be paramedics soaking up the blood
I felt like slash wording hurt him as i could not understand some of the lines. Some good concepts in there but felt a bit lackluster in terms of execution. Miracle didnt need to do much here highlights are these 2 that I felt were dope
v / FGR
Is this panthera mir-kat? pussy either way. the femine type
he exhibited di-morphism. n that's before I skinned him alive
vs
Y bother making fun... he’s getting laid out in the mud
The only people ragging on him will be paramedics soaking up the blood
You think I fear this queer?? pleaseee I’m built for combat
If slash alarming to me, hes screaming n showing police where I’m at
This battle isn’t as close as the quotes would make it seem. Dimorphism is the only one I like from Slash. I considered about the food for thought line but you gotta flip that better because it isn’t a new concept and your flip on it wasn’t anything special.
I actually think Mir was more consistent overall, despite me only quoting two of his punches. The others were ok as well. I think this is clear for Miracle.
v/Mir
Mir wins
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