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  1. #1
    Deceit
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    Beauty, heartbreak

    So much Beauty, a tear comes to my eyes
    As it rolls down my cheeks, this i realise
    I am in love, i see nothing but splendour
    Then i look in your eyes, perfectly rendered

    So much perfection, my throat swells
    The soft skin, so smooth and musical, i've fell
    The flowing hair, so perfect, amazing and attractive
    My appreciation insatiable, but your heart inactive

    An angel, the definition, maybe even God
    A powerful mystery, yet a blaspheme in words
    Your elegance as you flow past me, eyes shining brightly
    Your soft eratic scent following excites me

    Dear God i love you, you are the epitome of perfection
    The ocean of your eyes, your fair hair, your complexion
    The setting sun, the spring flowers, the soft autumn breeze
    All the worlds beauty is you, but you don't love me

    As my heart is shattered, dreams devoured, a tear comes to my eyes
    After all this pain subsides, the beauty of angels rejects me this i realise.

  2. #2
    Deceit
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    What do you think people? I've beared some true feelings

  3. #3
    Twiztid_chick69
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    I thought it was really good. I can actually FEEL what you were saying. You know how to put your feelings across well. I really liked it...

    peAce

  4. #4
    Deceit
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    Thanks, that was true that's why, i still see the girl, i don't know if she feels what i do, but i lost some hope, so i just released it

  5. #5
    Twiztid_chick69
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    Well, I wish you two luck. I hope she feels the same about you. And keep up the good poems

    peAce

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    tight shit, show her the poem, it may do something for you...

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