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    "Questioning Presence" (1st Open Mic in AGES So peep!!!)

    Questioning Presence.......

    The Wind talks to me, breaths of speech with the breeze
    Questions of future, past, present times in range to please
    Sometimes I feel like my only friend is the earth
    Birth, predicted, whispers starlight fam, what is it worth?
    The Questions risen again and a search for answers is in need
    Society takes heed as the foundations stood upon feel pain n bleed
    Or is it just me? Am I the only one feeling tha pain
    I look to the heavens and scream out for answers but I’m showered in rain
    Slain words rejected, shoved back in my mouth, overload a my brain
    Victories of past days now stand in shadows and failure comes to light
    I fight between my heart and my head, I pick up the knife and think I might

    Once again I’m questioned, do I hate myself? Or the society that moulds me?
    I reach out for hands but I’m rejected by the fam that won’t hold the
    Who is gonna behold me, My mind is sick of the questions I ask
    As the figure itself, I’m sick of the constant failure of task
    Found a mask on travels, There’s an inkling to adorn it
    I put head to pillow in the afterhours and drift off to another place
    I wake up and fight reality, wishing I returned to the Utopian space
    Walk the streets in observation of humanity and wonder what they think?
    I’m on the brink of Insanity and in the pool of thoughts I’m on the sink
    Hands are drawn to bottles containing sin, as I smash it and hit the drink
    There’s a link between our thoughts and what amounts from prediction
    I question against the questions I put across, It’s a doubt in ma own addiction
    Taking leaps off stoops to realise just what this life holds, wiping away feelings
    A disregard of the past and realisation through euphoria there’s healings
    The ground beneath me, shakes as my steps are stopped in their motion
    Find myself lying in bed engaged in fortification and think what was the commotion?
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    enjoyed it---as well as the audio

    like yer thoughts & content------flow

    check mine out & let me know yer host opinion-----

    thanx

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    Thanx Mun....Uppin....
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    Take notes kids...

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    that was good................liked the mulites.........the word play was good............nice topic.........shut up inspire........................................... ........................................











    take note kids

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    Originally Posted By tRiLL 05-29-03
    inspire i love you so much... i am bangladeshi and i can rap and i think i am going to win a rap tourney in queensland... how come you havent been sending me my dollar a day to live? i need that... all the other kids beat me up at school cause i suck at rapping... but i am happy because im an open mic mod...

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    HAHAHAHAHHAHAHAH.....Soon to be edited or deleted but ohh It's a good laugh hahhahaha....
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    lmao...ok then.


    verse...tight...nicely written,still shocked a tthe amount of time youve been doign this...very nicely done mead,drop more open mics!dammit theres a lack of niceness in here...i liked the second verse more then the first,seemed to ge tinto it more...was excellent all round though,nicley written...liked the euphoria line...waiting fo rthe audio meads...niceness...

    bismillah

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    ^^^agreed... lol uppin for mead...

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    uppin for mead again... hes at school...

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    Thanx for the words Ate...Respect no doubt haha..Thanx for uppin it for me Inspire haha...AND STILL THEY SLEEP!!! Quit Sleeeepiiinngggg haha........Pz.......
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    Nice peice trill got beat up only once when he was in a fight and slipped the got on his stomach and proceeded to punch himm again and again in the head till he was bleeding but apart from that he has never been beat up.lol.He also owns a 3 million dollar house and lives on a hill overlooking my town soooooooooooooothattttttttt isnt true lollllllllllllllllllllllllll

    But that was a dope drop with good multiesssssssssssssssssssssssssss
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    ^^Who cares Treach haha^^ but thanx for the reply anyway...

    ......Uppppppiiiiiinnnnnn tttthhhhiiiissssss........
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