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    Pain Of Plane...

    "The Lonlieness, The Solitude, When The Voices In The Wind Start Callin' You"....

    So Even After The Hurt After The Lies The Darkness Is In The Skies
    Remains The Thought Remains The Shy (S)o(A)lex(N)ever(D)ies
    He Weeps And Cries And Lets That Beast Of Lies Tear The Sides
    Of His Mind Leave It Dismembered Then Looks Into His Eyes
    Faces Comprise The Voices Deny The Love That Lurks The Inside
    The Love That Hurts Not Right And Even Makes Him Want To Die
    "God Why" Expected That Silent Reply The Vacation He's Hatin'
    The Summers He's Been Awaitin' Makes Him Sigh Lost His Patience
    And He Can't Comply With How He Doesn't Like The Vacation
    To Love's Other Side Feels Like The End Of God's Creation
    So If He Has To Die He Has To Make It Special For Conditions
    Without Her Knowing, He Goes Online, Purchases A Plane Ticket
    Spent All His Cash To Pay San Antonio one Last Terrible Visit
    And Swim The Skies And Escapes Life's Love Bar's And Prison ....


    "Southwest Airlines Flight 387 Is Now Boarding With Non-Stop Pa Thenssage To San Antonio Texas....Enjoy Your Flight..."


    Bored With Living So He Boarded The Death Walked To The Back
    He Sat, Passed Her By, She Didn't Notice, She Sat In 1st Class
    Where's The Love At? Through The Curtains He Could See
    Smiles, She Called Him From The Phone In The Back Of That Seat
    "Taking Off Now, About 3 Hours Sweetie" What?! Could It Be
    She Uses The Same Name For Him That She Does For Me? God...
    I Sat Patiently Hoping For What I Already Knew In The Dreams
    And I See. Fuck. How Could She Do This Knowing That She Loved
    The Victim, Was Like She Budged And Hit Him Is Heart Was What?
    Compared To Pennies In A Cup It Wasn't Too Much God Please...
    Take Away The Dreams Let Me Sleep With Out Having To See
    Disease Weakens My Knees Death Lets Depression Slip Some...
    So Then One Hour Into The Flight The Time Had Finally Come...
    The Sigh Of Love The Games She Had Tortured His Head With
    He Glanced "The Thoughts" Sitting in This Emergency Exit
    Ready To Exit Step Out Of The Door The Turned The Knob More
    Screamed Out "Whore!" She Looked Over And She Saw Him
    Still Talkin' Enjoyin Goodtimes Too Much To Even Stop Him....
    His Last Words Echoed "The Grin The Smile That Stare Was Cute"
    And Alex Daskalos Skydived, Without A Fucking Parachute...


    "Ladies And Gentlemen On Behalf On Southwest Airlines We Give Our Deepest Apoligies For The Antics On This Flight...Welcome To San Antonio"


    Now He Was Surely Dead, His Body Thrashed Found In Pieces
    But He Hadn't Met Satan , And Sure As Fucking Hell Not Jesus
    All He Had Tried Was To Please He Needs Her In The Dark
    His Soul Had Traveled To The Deepest Part Of Her Heart The Start
    Of The End The Darkness Blends With The Light Look At her Face
    Sense The Dismay All His Purpose Was To Make Those Flares Stop
    'N When She Saw Him Happiness' Bubbles Hurled Him Out The Top
    He Fell Out Her Mouth With A Cough. What In The Fuck?!
    He Ended Up In His...Swam Around The Inside Of His Mind...
    Amazed At The Suprises He'd Find . The Start Of The End Of Time
    He Couldn't Tell If He Had Loved Eva Or Not. He Prayed he Did...
    Because He Was Gone She Should Be Happy Whoever She's With
    So He Climbed Out, Finished Not Caring What Anything Else Was About...
    But It All Changed....When Ryan Coughed Him Up....In Someone Elses Mouth...

    Oops...



    Pain Of Plane....
    Last edited by Sand; June 7th, 2003 at 04:22 AM
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    oooooooooooooooooooooooooooo Sand I was loving this Piece dawg.....This shit would be A Sickkkkk Audio......U stayed on topic , u never fell off......Man U tore this shit up dawg

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    damn.
    dude, you leave me fucking speachless.....
    but I'll point out that if you opened the door on a plane, most of the people in that section would've been sucked out too...
    and even Arnold couldn't have opened one in his Conan days....
    but, thats just a technicality.

    the last verse was amazing. I wasn't aware souls could be passed around and such, but it was still wicked awesome sweetness, to use a few adjectives.
    so much for speechless, eh?
    Peace
    wordperfect?
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    Sweet post, man. The story was captivating, the rhymes were tight...you kept me reading. Props.

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    this was awesome
    i liked it full of
    emotion tons of it
    ILove you....

    good writing
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    Another legend i think
    Very very nice

    damn.
    dude, you leave me fucking speachless.....
    but I'll point out that if you opened the door on a plane, most of the people in that section would've been sucked out too...
    and even Arnold couldn't have opened one in his Conan days....
    but, thats just a technicality.
    LoL

    Yes this was very creative and a wonderful piece

    His Last Words Echoed "The Grin The Smile That Stare Was Cute"
    And Alex Daskalos Skydived, Without A Fucking Parachute...
    ^^I really liked that bit

    Yeah really great piece to read *read's it aova 5 times*
    Blinding****

    -one love-

    Really glad you put this back up.

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    daaaaamn sand, this shit was hotttttttt
    i was feelin the whole topic and the whole verse
    shit...
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    Hence Forward.. BURR!
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    up...legend votes?
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    This is Legends material....4 sho......Return da favour http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=54967

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    this shit was fuckin great. man....it was a wonderful topic, great lyrics and just overall wonderful. keep spittin man..........wow

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    holy shit,that soem sicc shit kid,perfect topic u stayed on point ima go re read this and have to step mah game,good work.1
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    defianately legend
    "Heaven sees no rage like love to hatred turn, no hell a fury like a Woman scorned

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    werd....

    kind weird eva thinks
    this is a legend....but
    thats really cool thank
    you....

    ill get at that eventually
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