Avalon (0-0) vs. 13th Disciple (2-1)

[MadMan]

Alright New Rules..

8-20 LINE Maximum

Check Ins : TUESDAY

Verses By : THURSDAY

No Biting, D/R, Recycling of Any Kind..

[13th Disciple]

oh yes........check check.....................................u beat me when i
was a newb av.......................things is different this time.......gl....1

[Brandon Heat]

things are different..?

We battled once..?! Come on let's be real... There are no more Hi Fi's... look at those losses in ya record...

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[Brandon Heat]

Fuck the wait...


Damn this kid is just a challenger... that fact's no mystery,
facin Av... what happens to em..? WAIT!!! That's Nasa history...
how you battle a street vet... ya heats wet... I'm dry ice,
i'll cheat death... let cha get ya feet set... just for you to die twice...
this nazy so mad... he'll talk about Av's girl & call him a moolie,
but who's gonna take serious... a man... who's real name's COOLIE..!?
truely from Av... no punchline, leave this challenger burned and clowned,
13th could never get a date... his own fuckin calendar turned him down...
look like a stopwatch is on my belt loop? Stop waistin my time,
I could translate the 10 commandments to Japanese in the span it takes you to rhyme...
who gassed this fella..? all ya fame got you riled up kid,
I mean... who'll ever believe in a emcee... with that crew name in his sig..?!
You are a never was, never will be, can't pass the torch to dude,
with punches & multis... I bet StarWars got less force than you...
you were conceived a loser is the big picture... & you lovin the frame..?
13th was born with a L... like Sam Jackson's government name...
I'ma put some hault for hearts on the line... ya health don't bet,
let me leave out my last words... SHIT... YOU need all the help YOU can get...




18 lines... done...





get all the personals you can... junior...

Avalon...

[13th Disciple]

okay...let me key sumthing right quick for this shit..................
blah blah blah.............................................. ..........................

[13th Disciple]

cshep79: so do u luv avalon and luv me
cshep79: thats what ur saying
Aaliyah7987: no im saying i love you
cshep79: what about how av feels for u?


with that set....lets get dirty.....we all knowabout chynadoll...aka...
kendra is ur girl....the truth hurts doesn't it BRANDON?


u disappeared then reappeared...wherever u went u left ur skillz
at that spot/things kinda changed notice chynadoll acting strange
i think its time to leave Brandon a little bit shocked

u left wit props now hardly have any, Av u realize i'm gettin dirty/
Kendra said she needed a man, laughin at u like 'damn', when u
said 'I luv u' in the morning at 3:30

22 years of age.....rejected by jailbait......and u call urself pimp?...
not only are u soft....ur softer than a dick born wit a limp!!......
i'll make u feel better..........Av forgive me if i'm sounding rude...
u can have her..cuz on the phone ur bitch sounds like a dude!!
Avalon is back!...let Disciple give u the proper Introductions....
ur a figment of our imaginations....just like ur crew Productions!..

cshep79: well.........what can i say
Aaliyah7987: i dont know im jus telling u the straight up truth and how i feel... im not lyin about anything now.... brandon knows exactly how i feel about u and everything


oops........sorry Av....did i just reveal ur internet love drama?....
i know ur younger than a Juvenile....cuz u shoulda known she
gets it from her Mama!
u beat me once .....ur verse proves that u think i'm still a rook..
14 lines down ur feeling the Goosebumps....cuz i'm leavin u Shook
i'm disappointed.....ashamed.....ur points just loss a couple grades
but what can i say?....u are the son of ur father Biteshade..........
i try to understand u....but ur speaking the language of Java....
thinkin u spittin fire?...ur name even explains that u carry NOLAVA!



18.....keyed and matched.....lets the votings commence

[13th Disciple]

my first keystyle was better.....than my computer froze before i
hit submit.....i had u av wit the shit u wrote me ...lol.....but fuck
it....lets see what happens.......1

[Baxter D. Wall]

oooooooooooooo wwwweeeeeeee. this was HEATED. everything i expected it to be AND more...my god. i am impressed.


Av

Damn this kid is just a challenger... that fact's no mystery,
facin Av... what happens to em..? WAIT!!! That's Nasa history...


^^ILL. reminds of the days when Merk Squad was at its prime.

how you battle a street vet... ya heats wet... I'm dry ice,
i'll cheat death... let cha get ya feet set... just for you to die twice...

^^heated.

this nazy so mad... he'll talk about Av's girl & call him a moolie,
but who's gonna take serious... a man... who's real name's COOLIE..!?

^^lol...

truely from Av... no punchline, leave this challenger burned and clowned,
13th could never get a date... his own fuckin calendar turned him down...

^ill

look like a stopwatch is on my belt loop? Stop waistin my time,
I could translate the 10 commandments to Japanese in the span it takes you to rhyme...


^played. decent nonetheless.

who gassed this fella..? all ya fame got you riled up kid,
I mean... who'll ever believe in a emcee... with that crew name in his sig..?!

^^pretty good..


You are a never was, never will be, can't pass the torch to dude,
with punches & multis... I bet StarWars got less force than you...

^^sick. just fucking sick

you were conceived a loser is the big picture... & you lovin the frame..?
13th was born with a L... like Sam Jackson's government name.

^^more of the good stuff right here...

I'ma put some hault for hearts on the line... ya health don't bet,
let me leave out my last words... SHIT... YOU need all the help YOU can get...

^^strong finisher to an ill verse...

13

u disappeared then reappeared...wherever u went u left ur skillz
at that spot/things kinda changed notice chynadoll acting strange
i think its time to leave Brandon a little bit shocked

^^mad personal. good opener

u left wit props now hardly have any, Av u realize i'm gettin dirty/
Kendra said she needed a man, laughin at u like 'damn', when u
said 'I luv u' in the morning at 3:30

^ouch.

22 years of age.....rejected by jailbait......and u call urself pimp?...
not only are u soft....ur softer than a dick born wit a limp!!......
i'll make u feel better..........Av forgive me if i'm sounding rude...
u can have her..cuz on the phone ur bitch sounds like a dude!!
Avalon is back!...let Disciple give u the proper Introductions....
ur a figment of our imaginations....just like ur crew Productions!..

^^normally this would be wack. but you mixed it in with the personals and made it above average

oops........sorry Av....did i just reveal ur internet love drama?....
i know ur younger than a Juvenile....cuz u shoulda known she
gets it from her Mama!

^^lol


u beat me once .....ur verse proves that u think i'm still a rook..
14 lines down ur feeling the Goosebumps....cuz i'm leavin u Shook

^^played.

i'm disappointed.....ashamed.....ur points just loss a couple grades
but what can i say?....u are the son of ur father Biteshade..........

^decent personal


i try to understand u....but ur speaking the language of Java....
thinkin u spittin fire?...ur name even explains that u carry NOLAVA


^lol.

wow. this was the best battle ive seen since Unemceeable Vs. OnE. this shit was heated...through and through. its stuff like this that makes me stay at RB despite herbs..

ok. Av this is the second best ive seen you do. the exception being your battle with Mind Theory. Multis, Punches, flow..everything was off the charts.

13th. some of your stuff was a bit elementary. however, you more than made up for it with those oh-so-deep personals.

this was close...extremely close. i feel that 13th took this do to the fact that his personals outweighed Avs punches. but, i think that Av will win the battle cause newbs wont recognize the personals.

anyways, much respect to the both of you.

vote= 13th

[AraTeo]

im glad you did this early.....

Avalon...

this nazy so mad... he'll talk about Av's girl & call him a moolie,
but who's gonna take serious... a man... who's real name's COOLIE..!?

truely from Av... no punchline, leave this challenger burned and clowned,
13th could never get a date... his own fuckin calendar turned him down...

You are a never was, never will be, can't pass the torch to dude,
with punches & multis... I bet StarWars got less force than you...

you were conceived a loser is the big picture... & you lovin the frame..?
13th was born with a L... like Sam Jackson's government name...

^^^ all those stood out to me and were funny and dope as fuck

13th.....

u left wit props now hardly have any, Av u realize i'm gettin dirty/
Kendra said she needed a man, laughin at u like 'damn', when u
said 'I luv u' in the morning at 3:30

i'll make u feel better..........Av forgive me if i'm sounding rude...
u can have her..cuz on the phone ur bitch sounds like a dude!!

i try to understand u....but ur speaking the language of Java....
thinkin u spittin fire?...ur name even explains that u carry NOLAVA!

u beat me once .....ur verse proves that u think i'm still a rook..

^^^they were all so personal which really took it for me....Avalons lines were real good but i mean he could of used those ones i liked on anyone except da coolie line(lol)...13th personals verse was like Dezyir said a bit more basic than he normally does but the personals really took it.....

so vote=13th

[Frame]

an ILL battle... it's legendary........
iight here's what i thought
Av hit wit some nice ass punz but 13 took it wit da personalz
and multi's.... i waz cryin laughin as i read 13th's verse.........
although i cant poll vote

Vote=13th....

[Brandon Heat]

Damn..! I underestimated you on this one... predicted you'd spit that verse... but underestimated you non-the-less... I'll let votes decide but damn good verse... lmao...

[Derive]

iight this battle was good, heres the breakup

punches-av
personals-13th
multis-13th
flo-13th

so overall 13th took this battle all av had were punches, both were good verses but ama give this one to 13th

vote-13th

[Violent~Wordz]

Ok...I Thought...Hmmmm.....

Both Had Good Personals/Punches.Ok..Flow..By Both
On Those Facts..13th..Won...His Shit..Was Much More Direct...Wasnt Really Much Harder..But..His Was Just More Direct..Ya Know What I Mean..Yo...Althouh AV Did Have Much More Quotable Material...3th Disciple Put Personals Behind His...hmmm...nething else to say..NOPE..



~~UuNnOo~~

[ILLunatic]

Good fuckin battle
both had some nice shit

Punches=Tie
Personals=Tie
WordPlay=Tie
Flow=Tie
Multi's=13th

Vote-13th disciple

[13th Disciple]

whatever happens.....just let me say right quick....much respect
to Av.....i knew his skillz and i knew he could prolly outmatch me
in wordplay and punches....so i decided to keep it basic and go
strait for the heart...lmao.....either way.....i enjoyed this battle and
going up against someone wit talent........blah blah blah......back
to the votes....1