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  1. #1
    PleDge
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    the love letters


    things get mad from time to time
    but thru the pain we remain me as yours you as mine
    people tell us were wrong but we both kno the truth
    people said that you cant find love so early on in your youth
    but ever since a laid eyes on you a couldnt forget
    But sometimes when you leave me i break out in cold sweats
    wondrin where you are....how you are or what you up to
    but a have faith in the relationship cuz a love you boo

    if u worry where i go dont
    if you worry if ill cheat on u i wont
    if u love me youll see the truth in ma eyes
    our relationship wount survive if we contradict or tell lies
    honesty builds relationships and ull see what i mean
    cause no matter what baby u and me were a team

    Hehas that sorta power ova me when i look deep in his eyes
    ma whole world around me vanishes..your the only thing in ma life
    wen we hae fights a cant stand it but the making up is better
    from the first time we kissed to that first love letter
    i will always be with you in soul and in mind
    in heart and in sprirt.shit love is really blind
    but you make me see and you make me beleive
    that your the only thing ill ever want and the only thing ill need
    its tru what they said they only person who deserves your tears
    should never see them fall and should stay loyal thru the years
    and even if your seperated for months you still stay true
    and have faith in the relationship and learn to love eachother too

    if u worry where i go dont
    if you worry if ill cheat on u i wont
    if u love me youll see the truth in ma eyes
    our relationship wount survive if we contradict or tell lies
    honesty builds relationships and ull see what i mean
    cause no matter what baby u and me were a team

    so you can trust me and you can love me and you can see me anytime
    and even though were apart sometimes i still see you when a close ma eyes
    your hear with me all the time and i feel you all around
    and when the room is silent at night i still hear your sounds
    even though we broke up ages ago i still feel shit for you
    A sit and wonder aout trick shit and if what you said was tru
    and as you kno that thru the times it dont get better
    its hurts worse than ever so i turn back to your letters
    which tell me of how you love me and how you never want to split
    tears roll onto the pages and start to smudge the dark blue ink
    and as i wipe ma tears away and pull a fresh peice of paper to ma hands
    i start to write down all ma feelings in hope that you will understand
    so this is what i write to you ma plea of your forgivness
    and to let you kno that in ma heart your love still lives

    if u worry where i go dont
    if you worry if ill cheat on u i wont
    if u love me youll see the truth in ma eyes
    our relationship wount survive if we contradict or tell lies
    honesty builds relationships and ull see what i mean
    cause no matter what baby u and me were a team
    Last edited by PleDge; July 19th, 2003 at 03:08 PM

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    I luved this, ... you can feel it's straight from the heart. Nice flow and well written.
    Keep droppin shit like this
    Much too dangerous
    Meet the perfect stranger
    I'm the extreme case of fire and anger
    The misguided angel with deep routed fears
    My face shows the years of blood sweating tears
    Pay attention, this gypsy that deeply senses
    Evil spirits lurking behind picket fences
    Embarking darker images and skeletal remains
    Cold hearted soldier with ice in his veins

  3. #3
    WOOSHY
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    deep shit chuck fuckin loved it nice http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=66819 check that out woosh

  4. #4
    PleDge
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    thanks peeps for the feed...uppin

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    9 Millimeter
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    nice shit

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    well written, good stuff

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    Gimme a Tenner, Bitch
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    Loads of emotion within the open mic n the flow is great never goes astray

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    things get mad from time to time
    but thru the pain we remain me as yours you as mine

    so you can trust me and you can love me and you can see me anytime
    and even though were apart sometimes i still see you when a close ma eye

    mistake wit puttin the hook first
    Fuck a Sig!

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    PleDge
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    aight all change it then lol

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    PleDge
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    uppin

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