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Thread: Thought Process (introspection and retrospection of issues i wanted to address...peep

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    SYNOPSIST
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    Thought Process (introspection and retrospection of issues i wanted to address...peep

    REPLIED TOO:
    ksmylez- ammunition
    Baron Mynd- Weapon Omega. .
    Eviley- B.R.E Prezents: Losing your other half...

    Divine forces muster plans for some grand design/
    Life support distorts, demand overstands the supply/
    No one stands at the side of someone on the front lines...
    Holdin fort/
    Crossbones brand the mind when its crunchtime...
    Ball rollin in the court//
    So im handlin shots addressed from the famished...
    Of any size or sort/
    If you tanglin on the block wit tha fresh and candid...
    Then you truthfully prize the sport//
    And im tryin to cope wit bullshit/
    and stomach those who pull it//
    If its injected and served by substance abusers/
    Gettin rejected and purged like the heimlich manuever//
    Brotha my depression resides in the manic/
    Stressin on issues seemingly seismic to manage//
    The truth moves optimism to a drout/
    Dreams diffuse to pessimism cloggin the routes//
    Shit Ima realist scriptin lyrics at eighteen/
    Christened a pretense when I didnt enlist inta tha mainstream//
    And Moms wasnt sad...
    When she saw a bad seed in me/
    Moms was mad...
    When she saw my dad's genes in me//
    Its funny most folks...
    i meet are ignorant to an extent/
    Only privy to the hoax of a sambo...
    And dont give two shits about African-Americans//
    Vigorously pumpin diesel for a boomin culture/
    But history doesnt signal the inhuman torture//
    Now that you see the opulence of the tools/
    Ya ready ta build houses for 40 acres and the mule//

  2. #2
    SYNOPSIST
    Guest
    ya'll know the drill...constructive criticsm is tje name of the game i'll holla back with the flames to ya mainframe at anotha date...latez

  3. #3
    Prolifik Prophet
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    I liked this piece fo' real...you had some nice multies up in there son... and I think that the topic was creative... nice drop god...but 1 thing...you ain't gotta put all the other open mics that you repied too...I think the people can figure it out for themselvez...

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    SYNOPSIST
    Guest
    big ups to this ya'll

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