COM
Born To Kill
Well, well, well...
Been wondering when this was gonna go down.
Two good slingas trying ta best each other.
Should be good.
10 lines.
All regular rules apply.
We're dropping at the same time.
Due by when?
45 minutes?
Cool?
Check in, man.
And good luck to ya.
Checkin in, good luck to you too, (we already battled when i was complex manthrax)
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Little COM drops very simple bombs...
With rhymes that suck so bad, he buys surplus lip balm.
And my verse like Deal a Meal, have ya eatin disses in succession...
But since ya gay like Richard Simmons ya'll just do his swallowing impression.
You could never enter buildings again and still not 'stand out'...
Have Onstar in a Navigator and still travel the wrong route.
It's why I'm a surgeon in this battle, and ya just a lowly intern...
Cuz ya the type to go in circles for hours, obeying signs that say "U Turn".
So I'll scare ya like I'm Karloff, Boris throwin punches like a young Chuck Norris...
Burn this pussy like spittin phosphorus ta leave em cryin with a scorched clitoris.
Your Rhymes Are Pointless… Like Parties With No-Kegs
I’ll Put This Pussy To The Floor… Like A Hoe With No-Legs
I’d Take Your Whole-Head But I Missed And Hacked-Your-Mind
Coz Like A Blunt Executioner… I’ve Got An Axe-To-Grind
I’ll Attack-Your-Rhymes; You Must Have Balls For Confronting-Me
You Couldn’t Win This Battle If Your Whole Crew Abducted-me
You Can’t Stand Up-To-Me… So Don’t Make Me Repeat-It
Coz Like A Vietnam Vet… You’re Permanently Seated
You Thought This Would Be Easy But Wait Until-I-Rhyme
The Only Thing YOU Were Born To Kill… Was My Time
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Born 2 KiLL
Little COM drops very simple bombs...
With rhymes that suck so bad, he buys surplus lip balm.
^LoL Pretty nice punch 7/10
And my verse like Deal a Meal, have ya eatin disses in succession...
But since ya gay like Richard Simmons ya'll just do his swallowing impression.
^Mediocore punch, not really hard hittin 4/10
You could never enter buildings again and still not 'stand out'...
Have Onstar in a Navigator and still travel the wrong route.
^Pretty good, nice concept 6/10
It's why I'm a surgeon in this battle, and ya just a lowly intern...
Cuz ya the type to go in circles for hours, obeying signs that say "U Turn".
^Pretty good here, nice punch 7/10
So I'll scare ya like I'm Karloff, Boris throwin punches like a young Chuck Norris...
Burn this pussy like spittin phosphorus ta leave em cryin with a scorched clitoris
^Nice closer, good rhyme scheme on Norris 8/10
[b]Final score: 32/50
COM
Your Rhymes Are Pointless… Like Parties With No-Kegs
I’ll Put This Pussy To The Floor… Like A Hoe With No-Legs
^LoL Good shit.....8/10
I’d Take Your Whole-Head But I Missed And Hacked-Your-Mind
Coz Like A Blunt Executioner… I’ve Got An Axe-To-Grind
^Good multies here, but the punch was so-so 5/10
I’ll Attack-Your-Rhymes; You Must Have Balls For Confronting-Me
You Couldn’t Win This Battle If Your Whole Crew Abducted-me
^Nice Diss here....7/10
You Can’t Stand Up-To-Me… So Don’t Make Me Repeat-It
Coz Like A Vietnam Vet… You’re Permanently Seated
^ok punch, but not all Viet vets are in Wheel chairs 6/10
You Thought This Would Be Easy But Wait Until-I-Rhyme
The Only Thing YOU Were Born To Kill… Was My Time
Nice Closer here....7/10
Final Score: 33/50
Winner = COM
Nice battle you two.....Both of ya'll hit up my battles in my sig aight?
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i cant vote.......but i would jus like to say i wish i seen more vets battlin each other like this....
good battle...but no vote from the jet....pc*1*
yo this was sum tight shit of both!!
id say com took this for better punches.....
"I’ll Put This Pussy To The Floor… Like A Hoe With No-Legs"
that shit made me laugh......
content and wordplay were okay from both....
vote: com
look at this please:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=78934
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hlight=xl4real
fairly close battle
multies=tie
wordplay=tie
flo=tie
punches=com (b2k had some played line like the richard simmons's 1)
opener=com
closer=com(by a little)
no hate
vote=com
Com
much harder hitting punches and the last line was amazing, it really was the winning vote for me.
peeps check my battle
Carsonjet v Liba dee
Def Poets
yo... this was kind hot, from both combatants... check it:
Born to kill... yo u had some nice shit up in there, u had probably two wack lines that didnt fit alll that well, i like ur flow it was nice for the most part... i was feelin that borris norris bullshit, nice wordplay and shit.... u could have done better on ur "flow" but it wasnt horrible like some dudes u could of used more norris clitoris shit, would of been tight...
COM.... DAMN homie, shit was nice for real, that nolegged hoe line was tight as was the "crew abductin me" shit, u had way better flow and i was feelin the repitition and multis, u last line got some teeth... wasnt greatness but its skillz... the shit i didnt like, was using ME to rhyme like 3X in a row, not great... u had a couple wack lines but no one is perfect right?...
Flow - Com, obviously better
Punchs - Com, hit harder
WordPlay - Equal, it was more of a punches battle then a showing of skill
Usage of SKillz (alliteration, vocab, multis, etc) - Com but BTK, all most got it wit one line, the borris norris shit i said earlier...
VOTE - COM... i dont know if u needed any more votes but i did anyway, and u both were hot so dont take it all bad, u both could beat most people....MOST...
HOt verses for both well the whole verse i had to give it to com while b2k was aite but Com just like whoa when he said the 1st two lines i knew he was gonna win this
Vote=Com
vote for my wack battle hollaz
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=82700
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