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    2 Poems (rookie.like 4n5 poem)

    -Deep Love-

    only tears of happiness can express my true feelings...
    because you picked my heart up of the floor and now it reached the ceilings...
    my eyes water without you because my feelins are deep...
    only when your in my arms that i know i wont weep...
    I can't sleep without think of you... my dreams and my mind carry you...
    i wish you only could know how much i cherish you...
    as i look at everything beautiful in my dreams there is you..
    with a smile that clears my dark thoughts...the girl i got
    the hotts for and alot more...
    with a mind full of sense i would raise a fist on a instance to
    provide you defense...
    my heart is yours for ever and its always going to be this way...
    And thats why i think of s.t.l.e every-day...

    -False Witness-(And the Family Falls)

    G-Unit grows as another man falls...
    The Smell of Dead flesh wreeks down the halls...
    Juvenile's charged as adults...all share there faults...
    as they stand in single file to die...unseen is the dark haired
    innocent guy...before he reaches line he tells his story...
    his lawyer proves the innocense but the judge dont follow the story...
    he sits in a electric chair infront of old glory...Bows his head
    and says a prayer...as he sits in the chair he stares at his families faces...
    tells his younger son to persue a career and try and go places...
    tears pour out the eyes of the soon widowed wife...as if her
    heart that was together was shattered by a knife... the life
    of a man treated with injustice falls to the switchs...a minute
    to early because the killer confest...a crowd of people took
    to the streets to protest...even justice and freedom fail...
    America still claims pride for justice with a cracked liberty bell...
    The cut thru the bell closes the story of justice and opens the gate to hell...
    Another head stone and a family missin a dad...each family member
    with flash backs and there eternally sad...the young son checks
    his throat with a rusty axe...his mom called the search team as the
    police gather facts...3 days she decides to search with a friend...
    as the enter the woods he puts a gun to her head... he said a few words
    and fires 2 shots..as her whole family was takin out by twisted and sick thoughts...

    links:

    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=84242
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=84423

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    HazY.B
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    this was greast and thanks for the links altho not needed realyl lmao

    i loved the form of it
    the way it saounded when i read it
    the way the words fell togther

    was a great peice dope

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    Wow, great drop. It brought my attention in close and I agree with you Hazy. Most respect. Keep droppin.

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    nice job lots of emotions
    was a really great peice
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