"True Felonz (FreestyleFelons Diss)" *J-Day's Verse*

[DeadlySpitta]

This is my verse of "True Felonz". Me and my boy T.C.K. are doin this in audio and i wanted to post my lyrics. Tell me whachu think.

6-4 step in da place and petrifyin niggaz....
Have em stone cold starin and shookin up niggaz...
I had plenty of beef back in tha hood dayz...
Now I came back to tha hood and changed my wayz
Im still a fuckin felon only y'all wish y'all were....
U cant even do tha easiest thing right hurr....
Jmoney aint nothin but a lil pussy...
He heard my sick flows and it got him mushy
Far from pushy... I diss y'all for only one reason
Cause y'all rent cars and pose wit them cheesin...
U neva held up a bank or gave a nigga a shank
U only been charged wit eatin out a skank
U ridin on huffy wheels... not spinnaz....
Y'all eat outcha moms for sum leftover dinnaz
BoyRoy... RoyBoy... Or whateva-tha-fuck ya name is
Make like Charles Sr. and tell me What Tha Day Is?
Ryu... Gimme a dragon punch wit Ken...
Gimme a shoryu and a strong Hadou Ken...
DJ Kurz... Shit I heard fuckin Worse...
Thats why ur turntables in tha back of tha hearse
Now J-Ro... Ur name sound like a name of a ho
Except its ya mama's maiden name just to make dough
And Levi can read by just to get his ass by
But overall... None of u niggaz... ever got high
There's no point in wastin rhymes on u lil bitches
That think they tha shit and try to pull a few bitches
When u grow balls to go into a rap battle....
Then stop talkin shit and hop off ya saddle....
My flows will kill ya and make y'all asses chill
Then I take ya and bury ya up in Silent Hill....
Y'all fuckin stupid bitches actin like u got gangs
Y'all aint got shit except for Wild Mustangs...
Im tired of u Texas bastards tryina act tough
Tha flow is over niggaz... Y'all burried in tha rough....

Aight now drop ya honest feedback.... Lataz...

[DeadlySpitta]

Cmon y'all dont sleep on this open mic. Leave sum feedback.

[T.C.K.]

O SHIT you dissed tha fuck outta those mutha fuckas i was feelin it i liked this line "Jmoney aint nothin but a lil pussy...
He heard my sick flows and it got him mushy"

[DeadlySpitta]

thanx for ya reply dawg.

[redragon]

Nice reply to "Running the game" by me

[DeadlySpitta]

aight i'll check that out for ya.

[EyE QuE]

Descent, flow was off in some parts, but in audio most lyrics written down sound madd stupid, and all of us audio heads know this. Descent verse, some topics i was impressed with, stay up.
~1~

[DeadlySpitta]

Thanks for tha feed back Eye Que. And that is true.

[m.B.p.]

that was hard deadly, i was feelin it, can't wait to hear it on audio peace