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  1. #1
    /:Ayura:\
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    .:My World:.

    My existence contains insufficient information
    Drug's infiltrating the basis of my minds creation
    Im the unicorn trapped in my universe
    Four wall's govern the hordes of my downfall
    Sitting here, soaking up purple haze, a drug sponge
    I got lumps in my lungs, Im buzzing circle daze for months
    Exchanged my fridge for blunts, I aint sitting on seats
    Although I wish for TV so I can keep my imagination inspired
    To ring the doorbell, attach together both wires
    Come alone, not silent, pre advance your social alliance
    Sometimes I get paranoid, and start to believe
    That the old toys destroys themselves with my weed
    I read, and recite the words on my walls
    Till my eyes merge into force and I start seeing timewarps
    When I sit, I feeling like im standing
    When I stand I feel like im jumping on the moon's landing
    I move banging in the project's corriders
    I object to the polite offering from the people next door
    My dopy-ness opens up and wears off
    But hunger come's and moves in my stomach's loft
    My nickname on the street is the night jarga
    Hunting for a fiver to buy myself a pint of lager
    On the cornershop, I know the owner and his daughters hot
    Buy her some quavers, she'll go on the pavement for a blowjob
    Outside my mind divides from my physical entity
    As I spray away my emotions, my life trouble remedy
    I empart with breaker's, battling to expose faker's
    Low lamers requesting battles, don't know im the bone maker
    Gang's stalking, walking haunting till early morning
    Looking for the next loner to jump and force him
    For his wallet, lucky for me, I know knowledge
    Of alternative routes to prevent me from being taken a hostage
    And in my flat, I attack the page with my pen
    Storing my hero's in the face of my mind again

  2. #2
    beyond dope.
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    If this was a puzzle...the pieces, are fittin right in the story line..

    Props

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  3. #3
    /:Ayura:\
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    ye uppin still

  4. #4
    /:Ayura:\
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    guys, please dont sleep on such a good peice.

  5. #5
    /:Ayura:\
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    dont sleep

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    I found a prefix!!!! f-gee's Avatar
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    kind of abstract verse mixed with normal writing styles
    i liked it for what it was
    the flow started off really good....and then slowed down
    dont know if that was intentional...
    overall though it seemed to merge together well to tell the way of your living?
    some parts were hard to grasp what their significance was but i got the jist of most of it
    i couldnt pick out any standout lines really....just all came together well
    liked the last paragraph as well
    props
    peep mine if u will
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    it's a bold statement - the new youtube

  7. #7
    /:Ayura:\
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    lol k thanx

    still upping

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    wow...incredible man..you elavated and really put everything togethert in this piece...very well done....i wud critique it but there is nun dawg...great work
    Soft Focus
    ..Returns..

  9. #9
    yo yo this was heavy
    I wanna hear more shit from you like this
    keep the good flows flowin

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    Im, im, the, illest, illest, emcee, cee, cee

  10. #10
    flizip
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    ill piece dawg, noffin wrong with it, an every time i see one of ur drops u've lyrically adavnced onto another lever
    props

  11. #11
    /:Ayura:\
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    thanx for the replies, upping this though

  12. #12
    flump
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    opps i ment to hit new topic and i hit reply.

    ill edit this with a reply later
    Last edited by flump; October 25th, 2003 at 12:51 PM

  13. #13
    /:Ayura:\
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    ok, still upping this peice though, i put heart into dis

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