/\/\ send me a link with a battle against someone decent and we will see what up ait?
anyway uppin for more feed
/\/\ send me a link with a battle against someone decent and we will see what up ait?
anyway uppin for more feed
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New Writejist Song - Tito Ortiz
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I Thought the structure had no errors... Vocab was good... flowed well... definetly a good read... nice topic as well... keep them coming.
IGHT....ILL BREAK IT 4 YA
FLOW....8/10 LIKED UR FLOW...COULD HAVE UP'D IN A FEW SPOTS BUT OVERALL GOOD...
structure..was jus fine..
WORDPLAY...made this piece a lot better i think...can improve..but its good...
topic....4 ur first open mic was original...so propz there..
VOCAB...was good ...glad u didnt push it 2 the "WAT THE FUCK HE TRYIN 2 SAY" point...i hate that throws a piece...
OVERALL..like ya said u have improvements..here and there....mabe up ur intensity......but all 2gether..a well put piece...well writtin....
GOOD LOOKIN PIECE...
SPECIALLY 4 THE 1ST...
PROPZ
U KEEP WRITIN
ILL KEEP READIN AND FEEDIN 4 YA KID...
PEACE
A.rtificial I.ntelligence
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nice kid i was feelin this ncie flow it was real deep to deff feelin this piece nice drop man
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appreciated please more feedback with depth
thanks peace
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New Writejist Song - Tito Ortiz
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yo this was a phat drop dude everythin was off the hook like completely but ya dude i dont know wat else to say except this shit was dope
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=94198
hit this up if u could
Last edited by KeMy$t; November 25th, 2003 at 01:33 AM
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New Writejist Song - Tito Ortiz
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uppin fuck man!
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good bruv.....good shit....Is that herbal????????????
8/10 bruv
thanks for the feedback....you could have critiqued i though
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good vocab and flow
lots of imagery on this piece which i thought it was real dope
good job emerge
I thought this was pretty good hommie. I like the usage of the vocab, you played that real nice. It was an alright flow. The rhyme scheme was straight. I would have liked it to be longer, ya know. Nice drop hommie, be sure to peep my rap im about to put up, aight...
8 / 10 ...For A small write...
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