User Tag List

Showing results 1 to 15 of 15

Thread: Son Of The Mourning

  1. November 24th, 2003, 09:04 PM #1
    Sir Skiddz SoPhrenic
    Sir Skiddz SoPhrenic is offline
    Rock you in the Face Sir Skiddz SoPhrenic's Avatar
    Join Date
    Apr 2003
    Location
    Bronx
    Age
    34
    Posts
    12,574
    Battle Record
    7-15

    Son Of The Mourning

    I look outside, and What do I see?
    You tell me, As I speak, your here with me
    I see things of great proportion
    the Devil's package drops
    and when it lands, it brings upon explosion
    and leaves not a trace of life
    I see a person, walking down Wall St.
    With Satan's Smile
    And another person forced to go bankrupt
    I read, books of pain
    written in text, but with missteps
    no novel is perfect,and a perfect book isn't a novel
    I turn a page, and I'm amazed, The book got me startled
    Lucifer presents light to those who come near
    THen closes his jaws on people, who he brings upon fear
    and darkness overcomes the light
    its getting cold
    they find their reciept on hell's hard floor
    I can't sleep, the stories unfold, Im in too deep
    Satan, the son of the mourning
    And I see the sun in the East.
    Hence Forward.. BURR!
    [YOUTUBE]seYxVBIsycE[/YOUTUBE]
    Just watch My Back, I got the front.
    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote
  2. November 24th, 2003, 09:53 PM #2
    Duke_AkA_I*k
    Duke_AkA_I*k is offline
    Newbie Duke_AkA_I*k's Avatar
    Join Date
    Sep 2003
    Location
    _-=N~Y=-_
    Age
    35
    Posts
    19
    damn--i was deffinately feelin that shit, wit out a doubt--ive been tryin to get into some more deep shit and this shit is real im deff feellin it...i like the name too
    keep it up homie
    UnO
    Wins--1
    Loses--0
    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote
  3. November 25th, 2003, 02:41 PM #3
    Sir Skiddz SoPhrenic
    Sir Skiddz SoPhrenic is offline
    Rock you in the Face Sir Skiddz SoPhrenic's Avatar
    Join Date
    Apr 2003
    Location
    Bronx
    Age
    34
    Posts
    12,574
    Battle Record
    7-15
    ^
    Hence Forward.. BURR!
    [YOUTUBE]seYxVBIsycE[/YOUTUBE]
    Just watch My Back, I got the front.
    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote
  4. November 25th, 2003, 08:01 PM #4
    Bounce
    Bounce is offline
    Green Hour Madness Bounce's Avatar
    Join Date
    Jun 2003
    Location
    Los Angeles
    Posts
    12,158
    Battle Record
    3-0
    Awards WOP Champion
    Structure was a bit uneven, not enough to disrupt the flow, but enough to be noticed. I'm not sure, you might have done this for reasons. I enjoyed reading this one, but for some reason i wanted to read more. Ryhme scheme was simple, could have used some twist and such. Topic, really nice, I wouldn't have guessed what your drop was about without reading the entire thing. Some peolpe are just too predictable, not this though. Other than the minor things I tried to point out here there is not much I would do to this. Keep them coming, it's nice to see you taking advantage fo the scriptures thread.

    Bounce...

    [YOUTUBE]Av7yOXafS40?hd=1[/YOUTUBE]
    "World Class War" Official Music Video
    We can use all the views we can get, please support the Father/Daughter movement in hip hop. Do us a favor and post on your Facebook walls and such. Thank you


    To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 50 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.
    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote
  5. November 25th, 2003, 10:25 PM #5
    Prince Escobar
    Prince Escobar is offline
    Conquering Lion Prince Escobar's Avatar
    Join Date
    May 2002
    Location
    New Jerusalem
    Posts
    9,745
    Battle Record
    8-6
    This shit was on another level, i was deeply feeling just the way it seemed like concentrated rambling, it was deep and profound yet easy to understand, it felt as if i were unlocking the answer to the most thought puzzling question i had ever been asked, respect...1luv.
    Laying face down in the mainstream.
    Po.Ethics.
    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote
  6. November 26th, 2003, 03:31 AM #6
    Civilized Rebel
    Civilized Rebel is offline
    Banned Civilized Rebel's Avatar
    Join Date
    Feb 2002
    Location
    The Beach
    Age
    36
    Posts
    3,625
    Battle Record
    3-1
    Hm... bouncedoggydog pretty much summed up the technical aspect, so aint nothing there for me to say.

    As for the peice itself, it befuddles me. Assuming that's a word. I guess I'm perplexed by it's meaning. I can understand the whole Lucifer consuming people thing, but that's about it. Something tells me there is more to it. Hm...

    ~Shalom~
    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote
  7. November 27th, 2003, 01:16 AM #7
    It
    It is offline
    You've Earned a Custom Title! It's Avatar
    Join Date
    Nov 2003
    Posts
    1,132
    Battle Record
    26-21
    i agree it was very unique
    i injoyed reading this piece a lot
    <center><table style=filter:glow(color=black)>‡†</table></center><center>
    To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 50 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.
    </center>
    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote
  8. December 16th, 2003, 04:43 PM #8
    eiwBsin
    Guest

    check this out

    www.sonofthemourning.com
    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote
  9. December 16th, 2003, 04:49 PM #9
    Sir Skiddz SoPhrenic
    Sir Skiddz SoPhrenic is offline
    Rock you in the Face Sir Skiddz SoPhrenic's Avatar
    Join Date
    Apr 2003
    Location
    Bronx
    Age
    34
    Posts
    12,574
    Battle Record
    7-15
    ^WTF?
    Hence Forward.. BURR!
    [YOUTUBE]seYxVBIsycE[/YOUTUBE]
    Just watch My Back, I got the front.
    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote
  10. December 16th, 2003, 04:59 PM #10
    eiwBsin
    Guest
    sites down give it awhile
    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote
  11. December 16th, 2003, 05:52 PM #11
    Sir Skiddz SoPhrenic
    Sir Skiddz SoPhrenic is offline
    Rock you in the Face Sir Skiddz SoPhrenic's Avatar
    Join Date
    Apr 2003
    Location
    Bronx
    Age
    34
    Posts
    12,574
    Battle Record
    7-15
    ^What the fuck is it?
    Hence Forward.. BURR!
    [YOUTUBE]seYxVBIsycE[/YOUTUBE]
    Just watch My Back, I got the front.
    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote
  12. December 16th, 2003, 08:17 PM #12
    Bounce
    Bounce is offline
    Green Hour Madness Bounce's Avatar
    Join Date
    Jun 2003
    Location
    Los Angeles
    Posts
    12,158
    Battle Record
    3-0
    Awards WOP Champion
    I think it's a bands web site skidz!

    [YOUTUBE]Av7yOXafS40?hd=1[/YOUTUBE]
    "World Class War" Official Music Video
    We can use all the views we can get, please support the Father/Daughter movement in hip hop. Do us a favor and post on your Facebook walls and such. Thank you


    To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 50 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.
    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote
  13. December 16th, 2003, 08:29 PM #13
    eiwBsin
    Guest
    if the content of quite amazing poem interested you in anyway, then I recommend this site. I promise it isnt any fucked up religious type god bothering shit.

    nor is it as deep and profound (in most part)

    its just right

    it is a band site, but it is also an important one

    It is mint as fuck lads

    SALFORD POWER
    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote
  14. December 17th, 2003, 07:46 PM #14
    blyndedsoul
    blyndedsoul is offline
    Newbie
    Join Date
    Dec 2003
    Location
    va
    Posts
    49
    i really like this poem..everything i would say was pretty well summed up by the other replies but one thing i would like to add is this kinda thing IS SO TRUE... i love the way ur visions were so clear to us readers and its a wake up call to reality i like this man aint got much to say on workdetails caws i personally like it just like this...keep this up..
    my head is clouded with senseless doubt
    but this seems to be my only escape route
    so ill slither my way across the ground
    to avoid my blyndedsoul from being found
    ~*~YOU LIVE YOU LEARN~*~
    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote
  15. December 17th, 2003, 09:08 PM #15
    TheAnointeD
    TheAnointeD is offline
    Newbie TheAnointeD's Avatar
    Join Date
    Dec 2003
    Location
    in the shadows of your mind
    Posts
    6
    i had to read this a couple of times.......it was a good drop....some real deep shit....................i liked
    if were living to die......why should i care who lives......
    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote
« Previous Thread | Next Thread »

Similar Threads

  1. Mourning Due
    By Prince Escobar in forum Poetic Scriptures
    Replies: 11
    Last Post: July 7th, 2007, 05:43 AM
  2. Philosopha - The Mourning
    By Tony Brown in forum Audio Tracks/Songs
    Replies: 0
    Last Post: January 5th, 2007, 02:30 AM
  3. Good Mourning Vietnam!!!
    By Billie Da Vinci in forum Open Mic
    Replies: 3
    Last Post: December 13th, 2006, 09:06 PM
  4. When Mourning Comes
    By A.T. in forum Open Mic
    Replies: 8
    Last Post: October 25th, 2005, 05:00 PM

Posting Rules

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts
  •  

Forum Rules