Verses by Friday, 11:59 PM eastern.
check in by wednesday ..
10-20 lines, agree on in check in
oh & .. Try to KO your opponent.
Verses by Friday, 11:59 PM eastern.
check in by wednesday ..
10-20 lines, agree on in check in
oh & .. Try to KO your opponent.
Hi......i always like to keep the option up for 20..
Bye..
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=135120
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=135126
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=135114
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=135113
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=135128
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=135117
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=135129
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=135130
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=135127
Last edited by Sergio...; July 4th, 2004 at 05:14 PM
"And I feel like an idiot working my day
around a call but when I pick up I don't know what to say"
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20's cool...
Savir's…
Too stupid to know stupid, so it hit him like a bomb…
When the mind reader gave up, and just read his palm.
And his face offends, lookin at Sav’s a tough task…
Got jacked for ends, robber made him wear the mask.
You'll never get there, all ya rhymes are crap…
We’re all born gifted, yours just wasn't wRap'd.
Sees himself as dope, but I'll leave a contusion...
Cuz Sav's like Axl Rose, can't put to use his illusion.
Naive fool, only in threads do you earn top billing…
If dumb was painful, you’d also earn a mercy killing.
You remind me of a friend whose memory I can’t erase…
He’s 6 feet underground, and I want you to take his place.
Everyone hates you, how many times have ya cried…
Cuz the only place ya ever invited, is to step outside.
S’why no one’s voting for you, so don’t try and talk…
You’ll make no sense, ya speech impediment’s Reebok.
Gotcha mind past twisted, in fact, full on sprained...
S'why Sav stands still; nothing ventured, nothing gained.
You won’t pass this test…my fam, my age? They’re played…
Even if Sav got twice as smart, he’d just get two failing grades.
woot fucking wooooooot
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dude and his glock avy...use my dreadnaught & it hurts
to be vylint..
...but he's sonned u enough, to earn a guest spot in my verse
born's lost his niche...from fresh to the most common spits
bought this win..... cuz no way can your bargain wit
create what u cant touch...have u done in minimal time and
I hate this fuck as much...... .as that of one syllable rhyming
and its common sense, the way im gonna scoff this bitch
but born’s my pier......after I throw him off of it
save yaself the embarrasment....but this kid is through
the way my punches leave born......with a pinkish hue
u can't verse man...ya whole style is dormant, a drag
the Barbara Walters of RB...stick to interviewing kids for the mag
lack any satisfaction...no doubt u beaten the most, lose
and if i was ya wife..i'da nominated a penis revolt too
ya know death is approved after hearing the crowds boo's
yeah, lifes a bitch or two......and three if we count you
kill ya adrenaline rush...i'll leave this geezer molded in decaf
cuz my page stays sharp..while i just Folgers in three halves
bout to fire this chump.....and whats left is dead and gone
i've no respect for a guy...
..................who's bossed around by his best friends mom
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wordage of the gayness.
"And I feel like an idiot working my day
around a call but when I pick up I don't know what to say"
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votes like whoa, votes like whoa, votes like whoa.
"And I feel like an idiot working my day
around a call but when I pick up I don't know what to say"
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pretty close here... i have savir taking it although you gotta work on the wording here and there... the pier line didn't really make all that much sense. folgers was nice. closer was decent. btk had some nice lines too, but not quite enough in my eyes.
Last Word
I must last... word
LMFAOOriginally Posted by Savir.
vote BTK
cuz i hate savir
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Vote-Savir.
Ive came to the conclusion that punches dont win battles anymore. Wording does.
BTK had decent potentially good punches. Like his second line of his entire verse was dope because of the way it was worded. & then after that, the effectiveness of each punch slowly fell off & the potential became eh. Then I read Savir's...
u can't verse man...ya whole style is dormant, a drag
the Barbara Walters of RB...stick to interviewing kids for the mag
lack any satisfaction...no doubt u beaten the most, lose
and if i was ya wife..i'da nominated a penis revolt too
ya know death is approved after hearing the crowds boo's
yeah, lifes a bitch or two......and three if we count you
kill ya adrenaline rush...i'll leave this geezer molded in decaf
cuz my page stays sharp..while i just Folgers in three halves
He damn near personalized you to death. The wording of the Barbara Walters line was eh, but I was feeling the others. He gets my vote.
Decent battle.
i'll bitch slap yo bruva, i'll bitch slap yo papi cuz.
uppin...
"And I feel like an idiot working my day
around a call but when I pick up I don't know what to say"
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V/ Savir aka the revival of GameTime.
BtK's wording is just not very good, one syllable lines usually don't win it for me, i wasn't feelin much though, i know you can come better but i just don't think those one syllable rhymes can win you much
Savir, pretty ill verse, folgers line was nice, everything else was ok to ill, nice verse sergio, you've come a long way like Young P son...
^Agree....BTK your wording made your punches kinda eh here.....and dont get me wrong...some of your lines were ok...and one or two were nice...but you didnt seem to try too hard in this one....honestly....Savir had a few nice lines and better wording...plus consistency...meaning he tried a bit more.......best line was the folgers line...most of it stayed personal also...
Vote - Savir
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Vote - Savir
I felt Sav came wittier and fresher than BTK .. BTK had a few nice lines .. The gift one was the best from your verse .. Sav just came with a more comedic feel .. The guest spot line .. The Folgers line .. LoL .. Nice .. Sav just came more consistent .. And got this battle ..
A.i
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Savir wins by Shutout .. +15
BTK loses .. -10
A.i
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