10 lines....
regular rules.
no feeding.
no bad votes
all votes thoroughly explained
drop 45 minutes after check in.
blind spit.
good luck, no hate.
CarsonJetX2
Phoeniix
10 lines....
regular rules.
no feeding.
no bad votes
all votes thoroughly explained
drop 45 minutes after check in.
blind spit.
good luck, no hate.
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For those who don't know...or weren't around long enough...CarsonJet "quit/retired" some time ago...and then decided to come back as CarsonJetX2
This redefines 3 strikes, you’re back, but 2x worse
....Here’s your final merk
There will be no Carson Jet the 3rd.
That’s right: no return, the decision’s left way overdue…
....Can't make up your mind, Carson?
Then let me break it down for you!
And speakin of strikes, I’m bashin the kid wit the sonning bat
Bangin’ cranium, Why quit if you just plan on coming back?!
Ya fucking dumbass...your best luck’s to run fast…
....You couldn’t spit classic shit
even if you photographed your verse wit Kodak!
You were 61-50…in other words a big loser…
....Cuz with stats that iffy
You’re as acclaimed as a Born to Kill Junior!
^There is one instance of wordplay in the above verse.
Can you find it?
p.s. no hate BTK.
good luck dawg.
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Pheoniix
Check in's define^ this kid....niix is a waste-of-space
I could drop..hold backspace..an still remove his taste
good luck? no hate?...what u think I am your RB freind?
Hate to say it niix....but u just became a losing trend
No effort put forth still got this kid thinkin south is north
9 wins? this kid's gotta have more in his trunk than porsche
Fuk remorse I spit nuff torque to make his body parts divorce
It's a blow-out this kid only here cus he subscribed to Source
U get what I'm sayin?..if this was backwards ur shit's OK(K.O)
I murdered this bird...."some one better call the SPCA"
opening - tie...
flow - carson..phoeniix ya struct was fucked
punches - carson
multis - carson....some of phoeniix were forced
metas - phoeniix
closing - phoeniix
overall - carson
Phoeniix
To be totally honest..
You had the better verse &,
If it wudnt have been for the fact,
Half of it is played, u would've won.
I mean the 'retirment' personals..They're not even personals,
Anymore..its just a concept now..i've heared it all before..
Same goes for the Kodak lines.. thats a petty.
You could have atleast came different on certain subjects..but it was all the same..reminded me of a old battle.
The verse itself was nice but obviously ill extract alot of points for the above givin reasons.
Overall Ok.
CarsonJet
Again ill be totally honest..
I thought u didnt came with anythin special..
No extremely funny or hard hittin personals,
Yet u came creative unlike Nixx..so thats good.
The closer was ok, cudve used some rewordin'..
But overall ok verse.. & u take this cause of more originality.
Overall Ok.
vote CarsonJet
Witty Unpredicatable Talent And Natural Game
My pokemon brings all the nerds to the yard, and there like "Do you wanna trade cards?" Damn Right lets trade some cards, I'll trade you, but not my charizard.
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opening - carson
flow - carson--phoeniix i wasnt feelin ur flow at all!soz
punches - carson
multis - carson
metas - phoeniix
closing - phoeniix
overall - carson
No Beef!!!
Vote disqualified. Please see this thread on what makes a valid vote.
-strobe
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I liked both verses . Kept me entertained.
Phoeniix
You verse was entertaining. however i felt it was a bit played.
I herad that kinda shit before. Anyways no hate... It was good
Carson
At first i didnt get into you verse, but it picked up. I feel you had the better punches and flow was better 2. I liked the closer. Nice stuff.
vote Carson
No hate
please vote honestly:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=101043
it was a pretty good battle but I thought it would be more exciting
niix, the way u hyped up ur verse with that retirement shit I though u were gonna do some next level shit
but ur verse was ok, but if u had harder punches cause the ones u had were pretty weak
but carsonjets verse wasn't to amazin either but his personals like the line about havin a friend, losin trend won him the battle
and his punches were harder and just a better overall verse
vote=carsonjetx2
carson thanx for votin on my battle but i cant drop a vote here phoeniix is in my crew so sorry otherwise i would....
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ScytsoPhrenia
CrazyDope
Put down the pebbles in my hand, climbed a ladder, put a brick right through your window.
"You're gonna hear me out." Yeah, hear me out on this!
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