Danbnas Vs. DaIllistReBel

[Essen]

Iight, here are the rules:


10lines
No Feedin, no hatin, no d/r votes
check in be4 u type ur verse, anytime tonight would be nice but if u have to, by tomorrow.
5-0 = KO


Checkin in........ the verse will be up very soon. Good Luck

[Essen]

Here I go, 10 lines:


Like any ball in a salad, ur just gettin "tossed a round"(around)//
Ya dumbfound, downed beneath-the-ground, ya just drowned//
On the top I stand alone, like a "seed", ur rhymes haven't fully grown//
Yellin on ur cell, is the only time u be gettin loud on a "micro phone"//
This battle's a nice breeze, winnin w/ ease, the result will leave u displeased//
Composin a piece for the piano, the only time it may "sound good" on "keys"//
A lyrical disease, my bars are used just to make my opponents suffer//
Ya must like "James Bond", cause these lines are leavin you hidin "undercovers"//
Ur standin still, ur surrrounded w/ a "verbal needle", u've just been "pinned"//
This was fun, come battle me whenever u want, I can always use an easy win//

Now just waitin for u...................

[Essen]

Come on man, drop ur shyt so we can get some votes goin.............................................. ........

[Bro]

I destroy your shit, pin point asteroids in orbit, that a hurl ya'll 1000's of miles towards it,god damn heathings, wrap my hands around ur neck region. then start squeezing until u stop breathing, your weaklings is playing tug of war wid ur tongues, i'll knock the teeth out ur gums, and suck the weed out urlungs,your physical frame,can never sustain,u'll probly never walk ever again,sucker,you think your rhymes sick,i'll leave u lying stiff, i'll put ur corpse in a himelick and brake ur spine bitch,the pain to make your voice change octive,from low pitch to high pitch,every hour i kill a hostage.i judge mc's by ther lyrical fitness and punish
DaiLList for putting corny stickers on his mixes,you scratch my back i'll scratch yours bitch, i'll eat your swordfish if suck my sausauge

[Essen]

ok, both verses are in, can we please see some votes now, and please explain your votes and remember to poll..............

[Essen]

Uppppppppppppppppppppin........................... .................................................. ......(1)

[Essen]

Cmon ppl, please drop in a vote upppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppin................ .................(2)

[Bro]

man we need sum votes pls can we get sum votes, preciate,......................................... ..............1

[pedro nok]

Aight- I'll vote on this one..............

Flow was much better from Rebel and so were his punches..............Dabnas was aight but basically I wasn't feelin him as much as Rebel..............

Vote = Rebel

Close shit

Hit this up seen as so I voted on your shit...............peace

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=81437

[*MoF*]

yo i liked the shit of DaIllistReBel more......he came more organized.....better punches.......

vote: DaIllistReBel

look at this:

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=78934

peace........................

[Bro]

may b he was organised cause all that shit was written b 4 hand in word may b, man come vote vote vote

[MR. Spits]

ill break it down fo these niggas

punchs illest
flow dan
wordplay illest
multi's dan
complexity dan
structure dan
vote illest punchs wins battles nuff said

[Bro]

need mre votes 2 votes dnt mean shit he cnt win on 2 votes thn again that was my 1st battle, pls vote who u think itepzzzzz

[Essen]

Thanx for votin every1, as these ppl did, drop a link for one of ur battles and I will fosho hit it up, I can't poll yet cause I don't have enough posts though. Btw, one of the ppl votin didn't poll cause I have 3 votes givin to me but it only says 2-0 me. Anyway, thanx 4 votin uppin this shyt (3)

[Essen]

Please ppl, don't sleep on this uppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppin............. .................................................. (4)