dom-N8 v.s. Forshadower

[Forshadower]

10 lines max
due at 6 pm eastern, if you miss deadline by a couple of minutes its cool, but don't post too late....

no bullshit votes

[dom-N8]

how longs that from now forshadower, I'm in a different time zone.............................................. .........................................?

[Forshadower]

in half an hour from no roughly...
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you can take an hour if you want...up to you...

[dom-N8]

1/2 hours cool.............................................. ...........
no probs............................................. ........

[Forshadower]

if you do not get something, do not vote

You beating the unbeatable is a hyperbole...da kind to 'spit' elevated action 'high verb_ally'/
I'll take you to rhyme in Harlem just so you can spit at me 'Apollo_getically'!/
U winning? highly unlikely...you're wack....even your lyrics told me/
Face it, you couldn't even be a graphic rappa if you wrote ya shit in Adobe!/
I'ma put this joke under more heat than Nyphomaniac_Dog_Breeders..
Then steal ya life like Kleptomaniac_Palm_Readers!
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6 lines doubt that I'll need any more...good luck

[dom-N8]

Yo look,

My verbal ammo will ‘e clips’ ya cos I’m wiping out this ‘shadow’ like I’m the sunset,
Like a dyslexic you confussed & beatin by my first words & I ain’t even warmed up yet/
You’re like a kamikaze pilot you go to battle & end up dead wiv my verbal shrapnel in ya head,
Ya need a ‘lyric-proof-vest’ to stop you from lying in a liquid that’s red soaking the sheets of ya death bed/
I’m just sparring, this ‘shadow boxing’ is too easy cos I punch hard but the ‘forshadower’ never hits back,
Feel the cold as ya record goes below zero, you tried, you froze comments on ya rhyme will mainly read ‘wack’/
Ya verses are so rough & incomprehensible - shit I thought I was reading Braille,
Blind men voting is ya only hope of winning this, I’m hittin ya like a wife beater hits a female/
I took this forshadower ‘bitch n slapped’ her on the the ‘front lines’ for the whole world wide web to see,
When ya peeps ask ya about this battle you tell them - ‘'I got ‘dom-N8’d’ & merked embarrassingly’’/

[dom-N8]

uppin for votes peeps............................................. ...
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[Forshadower]

hmm....I underestimated you a bit........but w/e vote honestly folks.......
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[Cels]

yo i think dom won that battle

cant vote just free postin this shit

check out my battle

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...ghlight=rhythm

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[e.coli]

this battle was pretty even in my opinon..............but domin8s wordplay put him on top of this battle......................my vote=domn8.............no hate foreshadower u had a good verse too but it just wasnt enough

[spitit]

Hmmmm

Punches.........rappad
Flow...............rappd
Structure........Niether
Personal.........Dom
Similes............rappad
Comparisons....Rappad
Vocabulary........rappad
creativity...........rappad
vote................rappad

D's verse seemedc played and basic, no hate juststatin the truth

[dom-N8]

Thorn why you talkin bout 'rappad' he aint even in this battle????

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[dom-N8]

uppin for ya votes............................................. .......
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[dom-N8]

mods this poll is fucked up, i got 2 votes for me & 1 against me for someone who aint even in this battle. My score's been altered from 2-0 to 1-1????????????????????????????????????????????????? ?????????????????????????????????????????????????? ?????????????????/

[dom-N8]

Uppin for votes............................................. ...............................
Explain ya votes peeps............................................. ........
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