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    God Rest Ye Merry Gentlement (the truth bout christmas)

    God Rest Ye Merry Gentlemen

    Just a history lesson since this topic sux..
    just a reminder what Christmas is really about.
    I aint religious, but I grew up wit religious
    Grandparents so as kids, this was all I was told.
    N’ its time to use it, because Christmas has
    Been thrown way out of proportion over the
    Past years…………………………..so remember..


    .. Behold The Birth ..

    A virgin un-preparing, for the baby she didn’t knew she carried
    A vision constantly staring, at the glowing white that spoke to Mary
    A change upon her day, listened intent to what was next
    Agreed but had no say, in the babys’ purpose, name or sex
    A night never missed, for the birth of the lord of hosts
    Showered with gifts, from three men, wiser than most
    The meaning not understandable, from the star they saw
    Bent over were animals, n’ a wooden crib filled w/ straw
    Screaming Mary, a babys’ voice, a look to the truth
    The angels’ rejoiced, as they lived the book of luke
    Passages read in heaven, God has his own accord
    Quote Luke 2:11
    Originally Posted By God:
    For born to you this day in the city of David a Savior, who is Christ the Lord.
    A slave to have heard him, from death to his revival
    Under the New King James Version, spoke words of the Bible
    No fat man, no sleigh, no reindeer.. no gifts, no elves working in labor
    Only a group of people who came here, to witness the sight of the saviour
    Frankensense, gold and meir.. the gifts people continuously miss
    Mistaken sense, before it were.. before Christmas gifts filled the 25th

    .. Behold His Teachings ..

    Jesus spent no time waitin, but neither did satan
    As he pressed temptation, for temptation to greaten
    Never mistaken, Jesus objected, a discouraged Lucifer departed
    He was human, but though subjective, He prayed to God whole-hearted
    That’s when it started, no zeus or heira, or thinkgs of material
    So that started his era, of good deeds, healings, n’ miracles
    The wisdom of the man, lead to mistaken reality
    Until he touched his hand, on sick men from Galilee
    He chose 12 men, and never went anywhere without them
    He knew he’d need them, when he took 5 fish n’ fed 5 thousand
    Cured what was terrible, did what he was called to do
    Preached his parables, n’ teachings to the multitude
    He listened and heard, uplifted his best
    Taught of the word, n’ predicted his death
    His future’s mind enabled, but he had enough turned
    Visions of men in betrayal, cross n a last supper

    .. Behold His Fate ..

    A Son of a virgin, n’ another to a builder
    That’s when judas turned in.. his life for some silver
    Romans ended their search, But peter drew his knife
    Jesus calmed his worth, though he served his life
    Peter slit the guards ear, revealed the blow
    But jesus, despite his fear, healed it so
    He seen his life visibly, n’ never missed the weak
    As judas got in close proximity, to kiss his cheek
    “Judas, are you betraying the Son of Man with a Kiss?”
    N’ with this, they slapped cuffs upon his wrists
    Trial he stood, knew the day, cant bring it down
    But he knew to pray, n’ strayed from the chants of the crowd
    Let the people talk, n’ the cursings be tossed
    Let the thief walk, n’ handed the messiah the cross
    Walked down the street, standard prevailed
    Strangled his hands n’ feet, with hammers n’ nails
    Some couldn’t watch, Just to disgust to the core
    Their fires hot, for the spilled blood of his pores
    A hill bled three, one that begged for his wronging
    Men turning weak, n’ one wanted his own belonging
    The criminal was content, now he wasnt scared to die
    Originally quoted by Jesus at the cross
    Assuredly, I say to you, today you will be with me in paradise
    Taunts w/ no reason, not to bring of the news
    Pierced was Jesus.. “KING OF THE JEWS”.
    As the situation worsened, he handled his business
    For the people that hurt him, he begged forgiveness
    He would be the last to die, as it was written
    As he looked to the sky, “It Is Finished”

    .. Behold the Beholder ..

    Christmas morning, remember the roots
    This is a warning, to remember the truth
    You know the story, believe or you guess
    But before god rests ye marry gentlemen.. Remember why that ye rests..
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    Last edited by Auspicious; December 23rd, 2003 at 08:48 PM
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    this was a great piece, everything flowed decent and the feeling was perfected. this piece spoke nothing but truth. I was really feeling everything. Perfect timing for this sort of piece. Great job Aus. Keep it up.

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    this piece showed some good imagry
    contained a lot of depth and some good multis...
    which made the flow nice...
    kinda long... but ur emotion kept me reading...
    not your best...but pretty good

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    Good topic
    Nice usage of words
    Flow was perfect
    Very interesting to read
    Enjoyable .........

    Once again....
    Great peice Auspicious


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    I didnt really like the topic, a little too deep for me. Other than that the actual writing was good. Seemed more poetic script but still nice. Lots of creativity. Decent piece. Stay with it
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    topic was kinda eh
    flow was on point
    vocab fluctuated well
    nice imagery
    good structure

    and metas had me like whoa

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    showed some real skill in this...a well written piece......but i hated the topic.....you handled it well though...pZ
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