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Thread: My Rap Book

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    My Rap Book

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    The cover distorted and faded wit colors
    Red paint to keep unwanted others-out
    My faint rhymes drains the few who've read-it
    Spoken word has said-it, memorized the book
    And its bled when i've felt pain, its insane
    Cause it seems when im sad, and I write it rains
    In the night im sittin zombie-like, honesty-I-write
    Never rappin to fake, never rappin hate
    Just tryin to catch a break, wit a topical
    Hostile, because I keep it in my pocket were'ever I am
    The pages filled wit black-inc, never write wack as I think
    My next line just fills its self in, never about wealth
    Or about what I wish I had, just about my night in stealth
    About myself, and its my book of rhymes
    Threw thick & thin, the ruff and easier times
    The one thing I can turn to and repent my troubles
    Flowin to instrumentals, and writin doubles
    Instead of merkin, I add my rage to the page
    And write the pen out of ink, blink - and a whole page is filled
    These are Sacred Scriptures, never hatred-or-fixtures
    Just my book of rhymes.....
    Last edited by Vis; December 26th, 2003 at 02:17 AM

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    damn uppin this... someone reply

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    simple rhyme scheme but effective noentheless

    deep word usage in this shit, u seem like ud be good at english an shit.. nice vocab and kind of abstract emotion, ya dig

    i liked this drop neway, keep em comin mayne... hit up my thread "when faith grows"

    peace out

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    ight thanks for the reply... upp

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    Your rap book isn't even worth me wiping my ass with. Ya piece of shit, eat shit. I'll take you out og style. FROM THE BRONX!!!!!!!!

    You fucking queerrr
    Get outta heerrre
    Before you get stabbed in your earrr
    Or in the rearrr
    You fucking clown
    Get outta town
    I never liked Jordan and I never will
    Because he likes to get fucked by some guy named Bill

    FREESTYLE MIKE WILL TAKE YOU ALL ON!!!

    The Rapsss
    Yes, I AM better.

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    keep ur hate off my nuts bitch... up

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    I think you needa work on yo rapbook homie fo real............but I would go as fare as sayin I would wipe my ass wit it.

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    this was aiight a bit short but still aiight..ya Structure and flow Need Work but its not much....Ya Vocab wordplay was worken in this piece Imagery Was Nice.....so all and all nice work man keep elevaten.......Leave feed back on Never take a chance if u can..

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