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Thread: ***Away in a Manger***

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    ***Away in a Manger***

    yeah, this is for the topical shit this week, so this was the best i could stretch "Away in a Manger" and make it sound good.

    flipped it into isolation and shit like that.

    Beat : me
    Lyrics : me
    Everything : me

    Lo-Fizzle

    Hizzle-Bizzle

    Keep it on the DOWNLOAD....

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    Crooked-Comical
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    Nice Track


    Man I Would Like to use Some Of your Beats There Sick

    Get Back To Me

    Peace

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    since no one copped the package deal, they are all $25

    first come first serve
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  4. #4
    Swoop
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    cheap bastards...........lmao @ at gettin shot.......i'm love that lil intro
    nice beat......samples??

    wooo....i see a lil change in ya flow.....im hearin some flippen....elevatin

    wasn't on topic too much........i thought it was isolation....
    but still on topic if you think about it.........

    everythang was you.........so.........nice everythang

    holla

  5. #5
    that was the idea of the topic, how the no money life puts u into a state of isolation...

    foo'

    lol

    um..samples?...tryin to think....nah, i played the melodies out

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    ZZZZzzzzzzzz............
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    Straie
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    nice beat........flow and lyrics nothing special........I guess I jus look for originality that stands out from the rest, but if you were trying to sound like everybody else on the east coast.........job well done.,lol........intro was coo......stay up

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    ..::TrOuBLe MaKeRz::.. TrOuBLeZ's Avatar
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    the beat was iight.....


    lyrics is good.....i like the intro, but maybe you should add sum1 else in it....like me it a convo between two people you know...cuz gunshots pop off from the person you talkin to right?...so i was guessin u should add sum 1 there too.


    this was a good for a 1:26 minute track....

  9. #9
    nice beat, flow was dope... good voice.. nice quality... lyrics is tight... dope track..

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    i guess to some people concepts/topics dont matter.

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    D-Dizzle
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    I thought this was stright, your flow rode the beat pretty decent, I like the bongos in the beat, made the whole song song full, the only thing that brings it down is your delivery, it dosn;t really match the punch of the beat to me, decent shit though.......

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    i like that kermit the frog shit lol



    you make that beat?

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    ^yes, to THIS one that you was supposed to respond to..lol..and the kermit one...

    idiot..

    i love you though!

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    AbstraX
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    listenind as i reply


    this beat is fuckin raw

    feelin ya prersence and delivery

    voice is sicc chorus is ill

    like to hear dope shit and this was dope

    i like ya style

    hit me up for a collab sumtime


    pz

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    nice beats ya got there.. mine are still better .. other wise nice track

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