don't sleep you dicks...
don't sleep you dicks...
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the actuall concept and ideas put into this was better than the writting but dont start to cry because that isnt necessarily a bad thing
anyway wording was booty...rhyme scheme was elementary to the fulles...definitely need to work on that mug a lot...
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New Writejist Song - Tito Ortiz
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*Tear Drops*...
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this was out cold..but let me get this straight..Jake,Frank,Dwight, and Big Mike was all the same person..right..and it was like..the things that he did haunted him..because it's what he really did in his past..right?...this was tight as fuck..I really didnt notice it was all the same length until Cam pointed it out to me..this was a well rounded verse..no big errors or things missing..the vocab could have been a step up..but you tried to keep all the lines the same length, so I understand that..Dope..I will give it a ...9/10
^^^ohhh.. like that...upping for more replies please..
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well I think this was very creative and talented peice and I enjoyed this open mic post and it was exciting 2 see some good shit in here......
Please people drop a honest vote on a battle that is getting slept on,
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=104849
^^^that sounded..forced..lol...lookin for more feedback people...
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I wonder how long I could push this for...?
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