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Thread: Some fucking crazy ass shit !~~~!~~~!!~~~

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    lyrical_killer
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    Some fucking crazy ass shit !~~~!~~~!!~~~

    Growin' up in the hood, surrounded by "crack fiend's"//
    fake friends and drug addicts, bowls with "packed greens"//
    lookin up above puzzled, cold streets got me to "act mean"//
    with hate for the planet, hate for life and "hatin' my self"//
    Slangin' for minimum wealth, "under estimatin' my health"//
    lookin' in the mirror lost, i dunno "who i am"//
    livin' life in slow mo, if i had a chance ill "go if i can"//
    wit rox and "blow in my hand" "growin slow as a man"//
    rappin's a future i can make it i just "kno that can"//
    homies askin (R u ready?) but i tell em "i dunno if i am//
    ima nervous break down only "god knows that i am"//
    always ready, with both hands on the 9 like a "Quarter to Ten"//
    SMile now cry Later, im a diamond in da dirt above all, im 'greater'//
    cause i don't trust shit but my gun and the bullets in da 'chamber'//
    everynight i speak to the "savior", but he dont anwser my "prayers"//
    so my hip stay strapped wit guns, and my hands on the "Razors"//
    this "survival is nature" rollin blunts usin' "bible as papers"//
    and it seems that the "Struggles raises" and we just known as "trouble makers"//
    they don't see this is what they made us, im jus 1 of the million s of the "cycle's faces!"//

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  3. #3
    nice man, good flow n i especially liked this part

    ima nervous break down only "god knows that i am"//
    always ready, with both hands on the 9 like a "Quarter to Ten"//

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    lyrical_killer
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    need feedback thanx homie

  5. #5
    lyrical_killer
    Guest
    yo still wouldnt mind some feedback on this motha fucka

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    This was alright i thought.....your structure was ok....just watch some of the lines length they were kinda stretched out on some of the lines though.....flow was alright in this.....you had some nice multies...overall a alright piece...keep at it.

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