explicitot vs c-dolla

[Hennessy.]

iight kid rules is simple
no dick ridin crew or hate votes
gotta be explained votes and all voters plz dont forget to poll
5 barz min
spit due today
spit after u check-in
iight good luck


checkin in

[Hennessy.]

welcome noob, this is the realist shit ever//
you dont qualify u like wine witout da cheddar//

whatever you aint gonna win dawg never, so just quit//
you might as well be a voter, cuz u know how to ride da dick, "prick"//

dont fuck wit me, explicit bust a cap or three, decapatate ya head wit a guilotine//
who ill as me? nobody dats why i drop lines to crush bitches like you, you feelin me?//

na dawg you killin me, makin me laugh kuz ya dumb bitch ass just cant rap//
so im sittin here wonderin why am i wastin time in my class, i could be workin to pass but in stead im murkin ya ass//

so just stop, drop, pray for da cops but its too late i got killa rhymez on every block//
u cant avoid the inevitble, to you thats like rufusin the cock, just shut up im about to murk you bitch "pop-pop"//

[C-Dolla]

why u wana waste ya time get to ya boyfriends his dick needs emptyin/
suck it like ya mam on mine then u no ya doin jus fine
u cant even rhyme en ya flows are shit/
like ja rule u shud jus pack up en quit
"whos ill as me?" i no u make me sick/
fuk off,die en give ya mam a lick
go join ya mum, ya gran en grandad to/
i'll take ya gun en kill u like elvis on the loo
am sittin here now, knowin am guna win/
start again get some other cunt, ya know its a sin

[Hennessy.]

w/e uppin
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[Harlem's Finest]

Wack battle... both of you need to elevate...

Basically there were no decent punches.. flow was off..

C-Dolla.. don't use mum, gran, gay lines etc... they have no effect, its too easy..
Explicit.. shorten ya bars and try and add some creativity..
For the use of multies, and a slightly better verse in most aspects overall tho..

Vote - Explicitot

Return the favour - http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108097

[menolin]

was a pretty wack battle,
explicitot, wins, he hard more original hard hitting punches,
he wasnt too good!!!

but c-dolla came even worse!!!

plz!! drop an honest vote on this
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108420

[Richard Parker]

u lose for improperly voting on another battle... read all voting rules....

[Hennessy.]

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[Penskills]

..Fuck...this was pure garbage...but..Exp. came a little stronger(not by much!),
this shit isn't even worth breaking it down..both had virtually no punches or personals that stood out..ot had they came with decent flow...Vote-Exp.

..Click 'Battle on my sig~

[Trahedy Siphon]

C-Dolla got merked in this battle...Weak as an Aids victim...
One winner all the way..............Ex

[Hennessy.]

uppin votes ...................

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[RaveMission8]

Your battle was kinda weak. But whatever. I guess Expliciot wins. Nothin special out of either of tou.

[Born To Kill]

Ex wins hands down...

C's was too short, the "mama" concept was done about 3 times in that tiny verse, and he mentioned Elvis, which is old, for one, and played for another.
The opening bar didn't rhyme. The concepts were childish...I could go on...

Ex didn't come with anything more than multi's and pitty pat punches.
The // format is newbish, stop it.
But his punches, light as they were connected some, the vocab was much better and he used metas which really helped.

Easily: Ex

Peace

Hit this up...

[J-CUTE]

why u wana waste ya time get to ya boyfriends his dick needs emptyin/
suck it like ya mam on mine then u no ya doin jus fine
u cant even rhyme en ya flows are shit/
like ja rule u shud jus pack up en quit
"whos ill as me?" i no u make me sick/
fuk off,die en give ya mam a lick
go join ya mum, ya gran en grandad to/
i'll take ya gun en kill u like elvis on the loo
am sittin here now, knowin am guna win/
start again get some other cunt, ya know its a sin

C-Dolla ya aint nothing but a dick dipp
ya raped ya gandma so ya got yo dick whipped
aint dat sad
ya talk shit n think like yo so bad
fuck man ya cant rhyme
go back to yo corner n ask peeps for some dimes
dawg ya shuld quit
yo verse r shit
go suck yo dads dick
ya dont belong here ya little prick
dont eva post no more cuz yo verse makes me sick