This is unfinished, but I need feedback. I still have to do another verse. I wanted to see wut yall thought so far b4 i did another verse tho. I tried to flip this beat to a different topic. And no I'm not a wannabe thug. This is actually on some real anger shit that I needed to get off my chest.
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/4/opeymusic.htm
Feedback?
*listening*
hook is funny...nice...lyrics are nice nothing bad i can say about that...
start ad libing...some of the voice overs sound a little distorted but that
could be soundclick...maybe show a bit more emotion
nice shit man keep it up
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nice drop
im loving this beat
wish tim would make a beat for melol
ANNIHILATION
OR
DESTRUCTION
the chorus is hot...Lyrics are nice....quality is good....adlibs would make it hotter but was never a fan of adlibs...nice work
Lol That Chorus Was Hot
The Lyrics Were Boring
But You Had A Nice Flow.
Decent Track.
KDotI
I'm godly
The Rebirth
This was semi hard to understand...lyrical content was really sub-par...I understand its a commercial track but ehhh...I don't like the beat...just isn't my style...delivery is kinda annoying...Flow is consistent...Not bad mun...Keep it up...Pz...
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when you said "turn that beat up" was someone actualy there to turn the beat up, or were you just sounding cool? j/w
hook - cool, i like
flow - wow, real simple
lyrics - below average
voice and quality were coo enough
hmm i dunno, i guess i just expected more
just soundin cool lol. actually i just couldnt think of an intro for shit so i just went with itOriginally Posted by Concise
lol word
listenin.. this was hot.. but my mixtape is cancelled opey..thnx for the time..
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you fuckin hoe lol. o well i'll still finish it and just post the finished version on here then. no harm no foul
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This was nice, .. beat was catchy, like it suposed to be, .. lyrical content fitted the beat in my opinon , i enjoyed listenening to it, .. nice remixed, w/ the splivit shout out, nice-ness .. *Want to hear the song when its finished ..*
Nice one Opey Dokey o.O I want ur cd
Can I have your babies too?? please?
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send me $8 and i'll send u a cd. or u can try to dl it from kazaa but i'll tell the RIAA on u... BIATCH!
where can i send it?? will u autograph it for me? youre my hero
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Strange everything is editted by Opey .. ~ I Wonder..o.O
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