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10 lines max
due in 10 min
goodluck
Rulez:
10 lines max
due in 10 min
goodluck
Ten minutes is awful quick...I'll try though..You droppin at the same time?
Aight make it 15 aight
ama drop at the same time.............................................. .........
Still Waitin............................................ .................................................. .............................................. Hurry up dawg
Your name says it all..you faker than peg legs with real toes..
Wood arms with ashy elbows..or four stiped Adida shell toes
I shut down defenses simply...my offense simply exemplary
Leave a boot tread in ya ass so my challengers can remember me
What more Could you say?.your flyweight..I've slept longer than you've lived
I'm pure dope..your plastic with articial additives!
I should go back in the past.. father your dad..give you a piece of me
As generations pass... hopefully... you'll inherit some heat from me
Cat in ya av is looking down..as Aesthetics record is plummeting
Holding the back of his neck.. he got tired of looking up at me!
...good luck...
....ehhh just a quick key for ya ass....
No replay!! I Will Rip this hater, Aes's raps clone faster than double homocide investigators/
you wanna serve me like a waiter? fucking traitor! take some words of advice and keep posing to be a skater!!/..lol (Tony Hawk...wannabe..lol)
You can't be felt, like brail in air! you spit your garbage/
trust me son Rb doesn't care, want some knowledge? this dude is despair and like the def at concerts/ ( I will abuse em..lol)
I'll delete the elite, with kleets we cant meet, Im the ruin of this dyke and trust you can't beat!/
re-do your profile son Im tired of sonnin you like big birds to broken planes the ground is the only thing feeling you!!..( http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109584 (Antonio Banderas...beatin his weak azz.lol)
Tha good shit.... ??? hahaha Dismiss this, brutal and cruel let you live leave you dickless,Hold ya head to ya head to defeat so you can be an close eye witness/..lol
Act hype till I step in the ring suddenly sedated,Claim that you were ill, looks like you’ve been inoculated/
~Finisher~
(C A P I T A L S (now hopefully u will understand it..lol)
I'll Roll You Up Like And L Put The Flame To Ya Dome As I Scream Out Burn-The-Dro/
Pathetic Kid You Can't Flow You Like Frozen-Rivers Learn-It-Hoe You Got No Cur-Rent-Flow...loool haha.
this was a quik shit i wusnt tryin to goodluck..........
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Work on your structure Aes...no hate...just help..
ok aesthetic took this one... His structure waz kinda fucked but he had more personal and harder punches. Quelude used the word me 3 timez in the last 4 linez and thatz kinda wack... the only good personal I saw came from aesthetic... Quelude's opener was personal but not that good... so,
vote - aesthetic
plz vote on thiz one...
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109623
U forgat to POLL VOTE!!!!!
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aight.........que u had an ok flow, sum aight punches, started off weak but got better after that. Aest u'r structure was messed, made the flow meesed, sum punches were aight i seen good uses of vocab. Overall though i felt quelude had harder punches. so vote-quelude
return the favor in my sig
yo aes took this with the wordplay and metas, structure was kind of fucked, flow was equal, at first you weren't coming off to tight, but the last lines changed my mind.
quelude was ill too, structure was better, i liked the thing at the beginning about the pig and the thing about going back generations so aes could have some skill in his bloodline.
close battle, both of you were real ill but i'm voting aesthetic
pay respect by voting the 2 battles in my sig, they've been going on since thursday and sunday, and they only need 2 more votes per each, so please vote. peace
^^thats fair Vote rite there
U should Judge the battlers on their contend not their structure cuz thats weak this aint artistic..lol Anywayz Personals and Punches and wordplay thats what wins a battle but ooh well i can't really argue with rb............
UppUN plz.
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quelude takes this. nice drop man, the closer was awesome. that was some clever shit. came strong the whole way throught with consecutive whitty punches/personals playing off his name. A you had some pretty good shit as well but youre fucked up structure really screwed you over there. it makes it hard to catch the flow and unenjoyable to read.
vote: Q
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