Topical-SyaNidal \v/S. Rule

[Steven William]

Topical...
Due:Thursday(I might not make wednesday got basketball N stuff like it...)
Topic:Ordinary Sunday
Lines:40(Excluding 4line Hooks if you use one)
Good Luck...

[Steven William]

Checkin' check check...
the Mic workin?
good luck man I know I'll need it...
_-SyaNidal-_OUT...

[rule]

Good luck to you to...and thursday is better for me as well...peace

[rule]

Woke Up Worry With Goose Bumps Stretching Out Of My Skin
Unsatisified With The Feelings I Am Touched By Deep Within
But As The Morning Awakes To Be Brightened By The Sun
I Crawl On The Depths Of Hell To Strive To Become Some One
Go To Church To Pray Before Lunch To Eat Without Sins
Swollow My Pride Ensure Today Is The Day Happiness Begins
Thus Today Is The Day Christians Are Unprovoked By Evil
So I Smile At My Life Bad Times Or Good An Love All People
Even Though I've Met Frustration My Angers Reached Climax
I'll Take The Last Day Of The Week To Dream Pray & Relax
Thank Everybody That Has Been Brutally Honest With Me
For It Helps Create The Man Within Grow From Negitivity
People May Not Understand The Picture I'm Trying To Create
..Read EveryLine..
As You Follow Every Aspect Of Lifes Journy To Learn From Mistakes
Sunday Angels Reach Down From The Heavons To Give Hope
Granted Me The Strenth To Forgive Envy Doesn't Need Prevoked
Jelousy Takes Over Me I Admit It Is True It Plays A Big Factor
Helps Me See What I Want Declares What Dreams Matter
Sunday I Greet At the End Of The Week To Understand Satisfaction
..Because Everything Happens For A Reason..
Complicating It Seems Until You Take A Day To Breath For Glorification
That's What I Do An Feel On A Typical Sunday Bring Bliss In My Direction
Enphasizes On My Lifes Love From Engadging In Sundays Protection

'Edited' For That Spelling word Thanks Syn.

[Steven William]

yo rule that wus hott Ill try to drop asap...
but one thing
Sunday I Greet At the End Of The Week To Understand Satisficationits Satisfaction
..Because Everything Happens For A Reason..
Complicating It Seems Until You Take A Day To Breath For Glorification

[Steven William]

...An Ordinary Sunday, Rolled Out Of Bed With One Foot...
...The One I Had Left Torn Apart, Plastered In Blood Is How It's Put...
...The Day Before Is Where This Occured, I Got Out On The Wrong Side...
...Burned Feet On Hot Coals, Feels Like Toes Being Deep Fried...
...Snatched My Gat For War, I'm Ready To Back My-Self...
...Equipped To Back Anyone, As Long As They Can Help...
_Attempting To Rescue Friends, From Devestating Conflict_
...Bring Me Wheelchair To A Halt, As Soon As I Spot This...
...I Notice A Human Buried In Blood, This Man Is My Mate...
...I Hop Up Short Of A Foot, And Pray or His Better Fate...
...Running Wild One Foot Short Of A Set...
...Attempting To Parade Acrossed Fire, That's What i Get...
...Nightmares Of This Tragedy, I've Dreamt Of More Than Once...
_Dreams Of Surviving, After Rendering Foolish Stunts_
...An Ordinary Sunday, Quick To Rise Early To Rest...
...Kneeling To My God, Hoping To Be My Very Best..
...I'm The One That's Blessed, With A Passion For These Ways...
...To Come Up With A Life, During These Ordinary Sundays...
...An Ordinary Sunday, A Time Full Of Agony And Stress...
...Put On One Sock, Because I'm One Foot Less...


...An Ordinary Sunday, I'm One Foot Less Than Most Men...
...Not That I Don't Have Two Feet, But About How Tall I Am...
...An Ordianry Sunday, In The Life Of Leprachauns...
...Formatted In Pots Of Gold, Brass, Silver, And Bronze...
...One Foot Less Than Most Men, But Taller Than A Dwarf...
...We Run For Cover Underground, When Citizens Aprroach Our Shores...
_Kiss The Stone Of Blarney, Your Destiny Is Now Drawn_
...The King Of Leprachauns Is In No Power He Is Fallen...
...This Ordinary Sunday, It's O So Ordinary To Me...
...But I Notice How You People Laugh As I Tell This Story...
...Sunday To Me Is Not A Time Of Praying To This God...
...An Ordinary Sunday Of Mine, To You May Seem Odd..
...They Way You Squint And Sigh As I Finish This Tale Up...
_You May Find Peculiar, The Many Ways I Spend My Time_
...Or The Way I Talk About Dreams, Because That World Is Mine...
...Things I Do You May Not, This Is Why We Differ...
...But When People Call Me Names, I Begin To Shiver...
...I Have Dreams Too, I'm Glad Doctor King Spoke Up...
...As I Recited My Own Speech, That's When I Woke Up...

[Steven William]

uppin..... Anyone...
stop sleepin....
_-SyaNidal-_...OUT

[rule]

Good verse my man....uppen for votes#2

[Steven William]

wtf no votes... cmon people stop sleepin'...
leave a link we'll hit it up...
Pz...
_-SyaNidal-_...O-U-T...Out...

[Steven William]

wtf this is a dope topical battle...
why no votes? I think I did pretty good anywayz...
rule had a sick verse wtf... No votes? god damn sleeprz..
Up/\UP/\uP
_-SyaNidal-_...OUT

[rule]

Okie Synz upped this lots of times for people to see this but still nothing....drop some votes...both verses are enjoyable reads hopefully so take 10 minutes and vote honestly

[Laureate]

I have to go with SyaNidal on this one...Both had nice versus...props to both fo sho...but I think Sya came more original and creative and Rule took the side that everyone expects you to take. Sya had some nice wordplay...comnbo words and shit that rolls off the tongue nice..Rule I really liked your vopcab too, but it didn't hit me with as much imagry as Syas. Good topical guys

Please drop an honest vote here guys..thanks http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=114158

[rule]

alright uppen for votes....stop sleeping

[Steven William]

Uppin for some more votes...
Drop A Link n' I'll hit it...
_-SyaNidal-_

[Penskills]

Rule wins this his verse was more detailed and in depth,this is a topical battle and to me that is the most important,SyaNidal's verse was okay,his flow was decent,wordplay was below average,where Rule's flow and wordplay was above par,plus rule dropped a day ahead,I'm sure Syn is thinking "I didn't see his verse mine was written before he had his up blah~blah~" ethier way,rule had a better verse with his more in depth piece....Vote-rule