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Word why are u here? when you belong in a promdress?
Far from skill....Your getting beat by Killaconcepz/1
Call a Pharmasist...You gon need summin to numb your face...
This kid's like his structure, He just takes up space!/2
Chalk line traced...your best play is to plead insanity...
It's clear ta see, Keep Goin...
An you gon' be endangered like them Manatee's/3
your 0-2 for a reason,WordPlay? You don't carry your name
It's easy to see thru...The fact your whiter than Hanes/4
Think it's cus disqualified? then keep quoting them lie's..
I'll sit an watch....as your Loss column multiplies/5
my name jumped the VS. stampeded em weak and verbless/
leavin' ya chained and burnin'...beggin' for gauze and surgeons/
oakley fucked up and battled someone better than/
half of this site, on one account, after my rhymes melted them/
after I retort, you'll require life support, you best aquire rhyme resource/
reply, and end up with shades, turned blades, with me applyin' force/
you can peep the morgue...after I leap the board/
retreat...before you recieve the beating you've been askin' for/
preda-tor, oh muther fuck a metphor, you couldn't turn a vote/
with a propellar, and a crooked new york senator/
sorry I took so long
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my structure is kinda fucked...ah welll
uppin once
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hmm....i think oakley wins
he threw some nice punches..wordplay had
killer flow and multies but not enuff cool punches...
both came nice...
just oakley hit harder and what not
cant poll...but please poll here
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112445
yeah, oakley definetly won this won, the only thing i saw wrong with this verse is tha damn chalk line, i swear i might have heard that line like 10 times on this site, its played to hell. Anyway, both of you could work on multies, and you both had good flow, but i think oakley had a better one. some good personals and punches from oakley, with a few from word too, but they just didnt seem to land as directly and frequently.
v/oakley(just never use the chalk line again)
drop an honest vote here http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113763
up up and aww fuck it.............................
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wake your asses up...........you lazy fucks
vote....hate.....boo..I dont care, get in here
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dis was a good battle,not da best tho...
wordplay made some good punches but some were a bit played...structure was pretty elmentry and flow wasnt really there....work on it bro..
oakley...ur verse wan'st bad for a newb......some good punches but some were a soft....not really any structure and flow wasn't there at all....as i said not bad 4 a new boy tho......both had no personals witch usaly wins battles...so both of uwork on dat....overall wordplay's punches were a bit stronger and did have a little flow not much tho.....both keep it up...
v/wordplay!!!
MY VERDICT
Flow:word
Stucture:Word
Punches:Word
multies:None
MY COMMENT
Word: good shit - needed stronger punches
Oak: fix ya structure
all around ok battle but overall WORDPLAY won
my unofficial vote WORDPLAY
Please drop sum feedbak or votes at
BlackGrenade VS ShortY
OK uppin
WOW a NEWB has beatin a fly weight....word play why is that your name you have no word play and a bad structuer you had some ok punches but u need to elevate..dont under estamate the NEWB's.......................ELEVATE
oakley same 4 you but u had alittle better structuer and same some ok punches didnt see and personals and not much of any word play..........both of u cheak out LL for some help and how it's done......................
v/oakley
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