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check out any song(s) you want leave the name of it and what you thought and leave a link to ya own shit and i'll take a listen
thnx
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check out any song(s) you want leave the name of it and what you thought and leave a link to ya own shit and i'll take a listen
thnx
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Fuckin The Tracks Nasty
intro;s kinda annoyin'.... beat grimey.... you flow is off a bit, verbals nice for a freestyle, i dno if this is a 2nd person, but flow is smoother, punches an' shit is jokes as fuck, i think this another next man.... very basic lyrically, flow is nice,... next man... too slow on the bounce, i ain't feelin' that verse, next... slow smooth flow, lyrics got nice wordplay... i lost track now.... lol
nice cyfa tho still.. 1
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Fuckin The Tracks Nasty
lol since when are freestyles written? ... the echo effect is annoying..
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Fuckin the tracks nasty
I agree with david wordplay...the echo is crappy and gets on my nerves.....shit and sometimes you have nothin to say.......I'm not feelin your beat......your emotions not there but I like the rotation this, keep us in your song.....lyrically good,
nice men
return favor plz
thxs
PIC Peace
aight i'll get at you pic!!
and david what you mean written?
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ayo,
overall, you got flows.... What it hink is holdin you back is your beats... try spitin to something that you woulden't normally spit to... it could still be a dope beat, but all these high dramatic beats are swollin you voice.
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Get Aktive Nigga...
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aight thnx for the advice i'll try dat that very well could be my prob we'll see
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I listed to yours, It's aight, but lose that echo thing on your voice, sounds to loud and misplaced. Also, when your spitting on a beat that is heavy in both treble and base, you HAVE to spit louder, and mark your flow consistantly...........
Better than YOU.
the echo was trribly annoying, you got a couple okay songs.....definition of ghetto was good, but i didint like Playin mind tricks...keep makin shit brah its commin
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aight thnx man i'll check dat
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sup man
u got some tite shit
keep doing you
peece
thnx man what did you listen too? just curious so i know what is tight
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it was aight ....keep up tha good work
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