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    Quick Keystyle

    Freestylin on this page releasing my rage
    watchin the pen work like a wand i'm a mage
    droppin this shit is magic, but i ain't got no trick
    my rhymes are so whack, it's startin to make me sick
    people sayin i'm elevating but yet i'm still furious
    what am i doing different, i'm a little curious
    actually i'm kiddin i really don't give a fuck
    my bars and structure i'm slowly startin to constuct
    I'm a part of cryptic lyrics and i know you care bitch
    when i grab the mic back up cuz i know you fear it
    fuck this freestyle it's whack enough as it is
    was gonna try another verse but fuck thissss...

    i dunn been a while since i dropped a keystyle freestyle whatever ya wanna call it

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    This was pretty dope.........very short sweet and to the point........pretty good for a key........i liked cause i feel the same way a lot of the time........

    droppin this shit is magic, but i ain't got no trick
    my rhymes are so whack, it's startin to make me sick<--Nice

    Good shit my man........hit my latest Open Mics when you get the chance......theyre in my sig......thanks man appreciate it!
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    thanks,
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    oh the realness i wasn't feelin it.. first its not a freestyle (can't stand herb dat do dat ish) IT WAS TYPED ASS...

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    droppin this shit is magic, but i ain't got no trick
    my rhymes are so whack, it's startin to make me sick <---- was nice

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    krem that was tight.
    People say im elavated but yet im still furious
    what am i doing different, i'm a little curious.

    Illist key ive heard in a while
    good work, peace

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    definitely nice............especially for being.......a keystyle/freestyle
    okay vocab.....good wordplay

    you fell offf with sum filler lines though....
    words were a little off but you can beat half of rb if that was a battle verse.......

    very nice........and considering the type it was......good job
    keep it up

    i dont have this one up yet but i wrote it.........i am just replying to open mics now

    but when it is up plees reply to it......It will be called "Kryogenix Diss"

    thanx

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    This was a good read...simple but a good key...some creative lines...nothing really much to say...keep doin wutcha doin man...peace
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    Decent piece...I like how you expressed your true feelings...props for that!..and for being a quick keystyle this was a very nice read...peace...~Click~Click~sig

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    Tha shit was nice, to tha point, I feel your style, you kinda ask questions in your spits, and you also spit your thoughts, which I quite like...I wanna see more of your shit...

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